DaastaaneN Kayee Unkahee Hain Priye ....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

by Satish Shukla on July 23, 2012, 12:45:14 PM
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क्यों जुबां पर मेरी आ गयी हैं प्रिये
थीं छुपानी जो बातें कही हैं प्रिये

तेरी आमद से गुलशन महकने लगा
कलियाँ हर शाख़ की खिल उठी हैं प्रिये

मेरे जीवन में खुशियाँ तेरे संग ही
देखते-देखते आ गयी हैं प्रिये

यक-ब-यक बज़्म में आपको देखकर
सब की नज़रें उठी की उठी हैं प्रिये

ग़म नहीं दर खुले न खुले अब कोई
शुक्र है, खिड़कियाँ तो खुली हैं प्रिये

आँसुओं की लगा दी अभी से झड़ी
दास्तानें कई अनकही हैं प्रिये

प्यार माज़ी के सब तू भुला दे 'रक़ीब'
आज तक दिल में जितनी रही हैं प्रिये

---- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

kyoN zubaaN par meree aa gayee haiN priye
theeN chhupaani jo baateN kahee haiN priye

teree aamad se gulshan mahakne laga
kaliyaaN har shaakh kee khil uthee haiN priye

mere jeewan meN khushiyaaN tere saNg hee
dekhate dekhate aa gayee haiN priye

yak - b - yak bazm meN aapko dekhkar
sabkee nazreN uthee kee uthee haiN priye

gam naheeN dar khule na khule ab koyee
shukra hai, khidkiyaaN to khulee haiN priye

aaNsuoN kee laga dee abhee se jhadee
daastaaneN kai unkahee haiN priye

pyar maazee ke sab too bhula de 'Raqeeb'
aaj tak dil meN jitni rahee haiN priye
--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2012, 01:22:08 PM »
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Bahut hi khubsurat aur lajawab qalaam........... Dhero daad aur mubarak baad sir
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«Reply #2 on: July 23, 2012, 01:43:19 PM »
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waah waah satish ji bahut khoob kaafee dino ke baad aapse kuchh padhne ko milaa tabeeyat khush hogayee.dilee daad qubool farmaayen
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2012, 02:27:17 PM »
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Aadaab Satish Sir
Bahut khoobsurat ghajal pesh kee hai aapne.
bahut bahut mubaarakbaad aur dili daad haajir hai.

yak b yak bazm me aapko dekhkar
sabkee najre uthi ki uthi hain priye..dil lootne vaala sher hai.
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«Reply #4 on: July 23, 2012, 02:34:39 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob surat pesh kash, daad kubul ki jiye
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«Reply #5 on: July 23, 2012, 04:09:22 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #6 on: July 23, 2012, 04:12:51 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Satish jee, kaafi achhi lagi ye ghazal, meri dili daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kijiye.
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«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2012, 04:14:50 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob raqeeb jee
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«Reply #8 on: July 24, 2012, 04:52:11 AM »
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soudagar ji....hausala afzai ka

bahut bahut shukriya....Raqeeb
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«Reply #9 on: July 24, 2012, 07:12:22 AM »
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Saini Sahab...bahut bahut shukriya...hausala afzai ka...Raqeeb
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«Reply #10 on: July 24, 2012, 08:29:01 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on July 23, 2012, 12:45:14 PM
क्यों जुबां पर मेरी आ गयी हैं प्रिये
थीं छुपानी जो बातें कही हैं प्रिये

तेरी आमद से गुलशन महकने लगा
कलियाँ हर शाख़ की खिल उठी हैं प्रिये

मेरे जीवन में खुशियाँ तेरे संग ही
देखते-देखते आ गयी हैं प्रिये

यक-ब-यक बज़्म में आपको देखकर
सब की नज़रें उठी की उठी हैं प्रिये

ग़म नहीं दर खुले न खुले अब कोई
शुक्र है, खिड़कियाँ तो खुली हैं प्रिये

आँसुओं की लगा दी अभी से झड़ी
दास्तानें कई अनकही हैं प्रिये

प्यार माज़ी के सब तू भुला दे 'रक़ीब'
आज तक दिल में जितनी रही हैं प्रिये

---- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

kyoN zubaaN par meree aa gayee haiN priye
theeN chhupaani jo baateN kahee haiN priye

teree aamad se gulshan mahakne laga
kaliyaaN har shaakh kee khil uthee haiN priye

mere jeewan meN khushiyaaN tere saNg hee
dekhate dekhate aa gayee haiN priye

yak - b - yak bazm meN aapko dekhkar
sabkee nazreN uthee kee uthee haiN priye

gam naheeN dar khule na khule ab koyee
shukra hai, khidkiyaaN to khulee haiN priye

aaNsuoN kee laga dee abhee se jhadee
daastaaneN kai unkahee haiN priye

pyar maazee ke sab too bhula de 'Raqeeb'
aaj tak dil meN jitni rahee haiN priye
--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #11 on: July 24, 2012, 09:50:04 AM »
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mkv ji,

Jawab dene aur ghazal pasand
karne ka bahut bahut shukriya.


Raqeeb
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«Reply #12 on: July 24, 2012, 12:19:00 PM »
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livingbytheday ji,

bahut bada naam hai bahi....jawab dene aur
hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya...

Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #13 on: July 24, 2012, 12:22:57 PM »
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bahut khoob, Satish Ji, dheron daad aur dili mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #14 on: July 24, 2012, 12:23:15 PM »
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BAhut Khub Satish Ji  dilli Mubarakbaad Qabul Kijye
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