Dar pai haazir hun: kisey batlaauun?

by abdbundeli on April 03, 2012, 07:33:49 AM
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Do maheenoun door kee baithakon mein likhee gayee is gazal mein do bahron kaa steymaal khud bkhud ho gayaa hai! Main ney ba'ad mein isey padhhtey huye gungunaayaa, to, rawaanee mein koyee khaas fark nazar nahin aayaa! Aap bhee gungunaa kar padhhiye, aur deykhye kaisaa lagtaa hai!

Dar pai haazir hun: kisey batlaauun?
Lag rahaa baarahaa yaheen aauun!

Aastaan par nigaah hai meyree;    
Deed ko aik jharokhaa paauun!

Unkee aankhon mein hai nashaa itnaa:
Hosh aaye to maykadey jaauun!

Baarahaa, deed loutatee hai jawon tak jaakar;
Jawon key paar kis tarah chiraag pahunchaauun?

Sameem aaj bhi dil tak nahin pahunch paatee!
Baatinee dar hi muqaffal hai, kisey samjhaauun?

Kiskey aaney ki khabar sey hain parindey mushtaaq?
Mujhko lagtaa hai, aaj main bhi jhoomkar gaauun!

Kyaa hi rounaq hai shafaq-e-nou mein khiley abroun kee:
Kaash, wo baam pai aayen, to, unhain dikhlaauun!

Aaj aayegee ghataaoun key saath barq-e-bakaa!
Kaash, baahoun mein, 'abd', saath-saath lahraauun!!

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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2012, 07:38:19 AM »
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Do maheenoun door kee baithakon mein likhee gayee is gazal mein do bahron kaa steymaal khud bkhud ho gayaa hai! Main ney ba'ad mein isey padhhtey huye gungunaayaa, to, rawaanee mein koyee khaas fark nazar nahin aayaa! Aap bhee gungunaa kar padhhiye, aur deykhye kaisaa lagtaa hai!

Dar pai haazir hun: kisey batlaauun?  
Lag rahaa baarahaa yaheen aauun!           notworthy notworthy

Aastaan par nigaah hai meyree;    
Deed ko aik jharokhaa paauun!               notworthy  notworthy

Unkee aankhon mein hai nashaa itnaa:
Hosh aaye to maykadey jaauun!               icon_salut  icon_salut

Baarahaa, deed loutatee hai jawon tak jaakar;
Jawon key paar kis tarah chiraag pahunchaauun?     Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Sameem aaj bhi dil tak nahin pahunch paatee!
Baatinee dar hi muqaffal hai, kisey samjhaauun?    notworthy notworthy

Kiskey aaney ki khabar sey hain parindey mushtaaq?
Mujhko lagtaa hai, aaj main bhi jhoomkar gaauun!        hello2 hello2

Kyaa hi rounaq hai shafaq-e-nou mein khiley abroun kee:
Kaash, wo baam pai aayen, to, unhain dikhlaauun!             Applause  Applause

Aaj aayegee ghataaoun key saath barq-e-bakaa!
Kaash, baahoun mein, 'abd', saath-saath lahraauun!!        Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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Wah Abd  Bundeliji Daad kubul karein.  Jabardast
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2012, 07:57:39 AM »
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Bhut khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2012, 09:31:16 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2012, 09:54:19 AM »
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Quote from: Pramod singh on April 03, 2012, 07:38:19 AM
Wah Abd  Bundeliji Daad kubul karein.  Jabardast


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Pramod ji!
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2012, 09:55:47 AM »
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Quote from: masoom shahjada on April 03, 2012, 07:57:39 AM
Bhut khoob.



Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Masoom' ji!
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2012, 09:56:31 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 03, 2012, 09:31:16 AM
Applause Applause


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Saini ji!
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2012, 11:32:57 AM »
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bahut khoob abdbundeli ji......:)umda..
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2012, 05:49:56 PM »
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Do maheenoun door kee baithakon mein likhee gayee is gazal mein do bahron kaa steymaal khud bkhud ho gayaa hai! Main ney ba'ad mein isey padhhtey huye gungunaayaa, to, rawaanee mein koyee khaas fark nazar nahin aayaa! Aap bhee gungunaa kar padhhiye, aur deykhye kaisaa lagtaa hai!

Dar pai haazir hun: kisey batlaauun?
Lag rahaa baarahaa yaheen aauun!

Aastaan par nigaah hai meyree;    
Deed ko aik jharokhaa paauun!

Unkee aankhon mein hai nashaa itnaa:
Hosh aaye to maykadey jaauun!

Baarahaa, deed loutatee hai jawon tak jaakar;
Jawon key paar kis tarah chiraag pahunchaauun?

Sameem aaj bhi dil tak nahin pahunch paatee!
Baatinee dar hi muqaffal hai, kisey samjhaauun?

Kiskey aaney ki khabar sey hain parindey mushtaaq?
Mujhko lagtaa hai, aaj main bhi jhoomkar gaauun!

Kyaa hi rounaq hai shafaq-e-nou mein khiley abroun kee:
Kaash, wo baam pai aayen, to, unhain dikhlaauun!

Aaj aayegee ghataaoun key saath barq-e-bakaa!
Kaash, baahoun mein, 'abd', saath-saath lahraauun!!

                         - abd bundeli

waahhhhhhhh Bundeli sirji
bht sundar ghazal Usual Smile
daad daad daad
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Quote from: dolly on April 03, 2012, 11:32:57 AM
bahut khoob abdbundeli ji......:)umda..

Bahut- bahut shukriyah, 'Dolly' ji!
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Quote from: sarfira on April 03, 2012, 05:49:56 PM
waahhhhhhhh Bundeli sirji
bht sundar ghazal Usual Smile
daad daad daad

Bahut- bahut shukriyah, 'Sarfira' ji!
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Waah waah bahut hi khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2012, 10:05:18 AM »
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waah waah
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Waah waah bahut hi khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji!
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Quote from: livingbytheday on December 22, 2012, 10:05:18 AM
waah waah

Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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