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by lakhwinder singh ashk on August 24, 2012, 06:50:47 AM
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                HO NA JAYE KAHIN BAYAN SE DARTA HUN
                ZAMANE KI TUND HAWA  SE  DARTA  HUN
                BAMUSHKIL SE  AASHYAN  BANAYA   HAI
                LAG NA JAYE BADDUA  SE  DARTA  HUN  
                LOG MUJH KO NA QATIL  BANA  DALEIN  
                SABER RAKHTA HUN KHUDA SE DARTA HUN
                KOI NA AAYEGA  PHIR  BACHANE  WALA
                BAHUT GHAHRE ISS DARIYA SE DARTA HUN
                KAHA TERA MEIN KAISE MAAN JAUN DUSHMAN
                ZAHAR NA HO KAHIN DAWA SE DARTA HUN
                PHIR KOI DIL SE NA DILLAGI KAR JAYE
                DUR RAHTA HUN US WAFA SE DARTA HUN
                JI LIYA JAISE BHI JINE KI TAMANA NA RAHI
                HO NA JAYE PHIR KHATTA SE DARTA HUN
                         
                           LAKHWINDER SINGH ASHK  
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2012, 08:21:42 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai....darte to sabhi hain...per ye kabool karne ki himmat bahut kam logon main hoti hai....
Aur aap unmain se ek hain.....
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2012, 09:08:52 AM »
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bohat khoob ashk ji....
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2012, 09:48:22 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Ashk ji.... sach me .. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... too good hai ji....!!!

main ab to meri khaamoshi se darta hoon
main tanha meri tanhaayi se darta hoon

kehta nahee kisi se main dil ki baat apne
sun na le koi har baat, main darta hoon

rota hoon bas us pal jab baarish hoti hai
dekh na le koi aansoo mere, main darta hoon

kehne ko kehta hoon bhulaa chukaa use main
aaj bhi dil se bas usi se pyaar kartaa hoon

yun to main darta nahi mar jaane se magar
maut ke baad ki zindagi se main darta hoon

main ab to meri khaamoshi se darta hoon
main tanha meri tanhaayi se darta hoon...

*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2012, 09:55:55 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2012, 09:57:01 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2012, 03:49:25 PM »
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                HO NA JAYE KAHIN BAYAN SE DARTA HUN
                ZAMANE KI TUND HAWA  SE  DARTA  HUN
                BAMUSHKIL SE  AASHYAN  BANAYA   HAI
                LAG NA JAYE BADDUA  SE  DARTA  HUN 
                LOG MUJH KO NA QATIL  BANA  DALEIN   
                SABER RAKHTA HUN KHUDA SE DARTA HUN
                KOI NA AAYEGA  PHIR  BACHANE  WALA
                BAHUT GHAHRE ISS DARIYA SE DARTA HUN
                KAHA TERA MEIN KAISE MAAN JAUN DUSHMAN
                ZAHAR NA HO KAHIN DAWA SE DARTA HUN
                PHIR KOI DIL SE NA DILLAGI KAR JAYE
                DUR RAHTA HUN US WAFA SE DARTA HUN
                JI LIYA JAISE BHI JINE KI TAMANA NA RAHI
                HO NA JAYE PHIR KHATTA SE DARTA HUN
                         
                           LAKHWINDER SINGH ASHK 

vadiya ji bahut vadiya
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2012, 04:12:07 PM »
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bahut khub bahut hi b adhiya likha dhero daad aur mubarak baad
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2012, 04:18:10 PM »
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lakhwinder singh ashq ji bahut khoobsoorat tareke se apne man ki bat kahi hai
ZAMAANE KI NAZAR SE HAR KOI DARTA HAI
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«Reply #9 on: August 24, 2012, 05:10:58 PM »
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Hriday jee ne jo kaha hai..vahi mai bhi kahunga

TOO GOOD jee
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«Reply #10 on: August 24, 2012, 07:07:58 PM »
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Usual Smile comment chori kiyaa meraa aapne... tongue3

nahi chalega, nahi chalega, nahi chalega hehehehhe...

Hriday jee ne jo kaha hai..vahi mai bhi kahunga

TOO GOOD jee
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