Dar-Badar Hone Ke Baad / दर-बदर होने के बाद....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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अश्के ग़म से अपना दामन तर-बतर होने के बाद
खुश्क होता है हवाओं को ख़बर होने के बाद
 
ये हमारी बेबसी है या मुक़द्दर का सितम
क़ैद होकर रह गए बे-बालो-पर होने के बाद
 
अहले महफ़िल ने तो की थी हमसे फरमाइश बहुत
गीत कोई कैसे गाते नौहागर होने के बाद
 
लिखने वाले ने कुछ ऐसी दस्ताने-ग़म लिखी
पढ़ने वाले रो पड़े उसका असर होने के बाद
 
सुब्ह दम सूरज की किरनो का असर भी खूब है
दर्दे-दिल थम सा गया है शब बसर होने के बाद
 
खुश हुआ दिल उन लबों पर इक तबस्सुम देखकर
मुस्कुरा देना है काफी चश्म तर होने के बाद

हो गया जीने का सामाँ मिल गई मंज़िल 'रक़ीब'
दर तेरा पाया जबीं ने दर-बदर होने के बाद

--- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

ashke gam se apna daaman tar-batar hone ke baad
khusk hota hai hawaaon ko khabar hone ke baad
 
ye hamaaree bebasee hai ya muqaddar ka sitam
qaid hokar rah gaye be-baalo-par hone ke baad

ahle mahfil ne to kee thee hamse farmaaish bahut
geet koyee kaise gaate nauhagar hone ke baad

likhne waale ne kuchh aaisee daastaane-gam likhee
padhne waale ro pade uska asar hone ke baad

subh dam sooraj ki kirno ka asar bhi khoob hai
darde-dil tham saa gaya hai shab basar hone ke baad
 
khush hua dil un labon par ik tabassum dekhkar
muskura dena hai kaafee chashm tar hone ke baad

hogaya jeene ka saamaaN mil gayee manzil ‘Raqeeb’
dar tera paaya jabeeN ne dar-badar hone ke baad

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’
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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2013, 12:02:47 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on February 20, 2013, 11:42:02 AM
अश्के ग़म से अपना दामन तर-बतर होने के बाद
खुश्क होता है हवाओं को ख़बर होने के बाद
 bahut bahut bahut khoob.......kya sher hai kitni bhi wah wah karoon kam hai ji........! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
ये हमारी बेबसी है या मुक़द्दर का सितम
क़ैद होकर रह गए बे-बालो-पर होने के बाद
 himmat-e-marda.n.... madad-e-khuda........! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
अहले महफ़िल ने तो की थी हमसे फरमाइश बहुत
गीत कोई कैसे गाते नौहागर होने के बाद
bahut khoob..........!
लिखने वाले ने कुछ ऐसी दस्ताने-ग़म लिखी
पढ़ने वाले रो पड़े उसका असर होने के बाद
 wah wah wah..........!
सुब्ह दम सूरज की किरनो का असर भी खूब है
दर्दे-दिल थम सा गया है शब बसर होने के बाद
kya kahne behtreeeeeeen........!
खुश हुआ दिल उन लबों पर इक तबस्सुम देखकर
मुस्कुरा देना है काफी चश्म तर होने के बाद
ye sahi andaaz hai. aur dil halka bhi ho jaataa hai...........!
हो गया जीने का सामाँ मिल गई मंज़िल 'रक़ीब'
दर तेरा पाया जबीं ने दर-बदर होने के बाद
kya khoob farnayaa hai janaab ne.............!
--- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

ashke gam se apna daaman tar-batar hone ke baad
khusk hota hai hawaaon ko khabar hone ke baad
 
ye hamaaree bebasee hai ya muqaddar ka sitam
qaid hokar rah gaye be-baalo-par hone ke baad

ahle mahfil ne to kee thee hamse farmaaish bahut
geet koyee kaise gaate nauhagar hone ke baad

likhne waale ne kuchh aaisee daastaane-gam likhee
padhne waale ro pade uska asar hone ke baad

subh dam sooraj ki kirno ka asar bhi khoob hai
darde-dil tham saa gaya hai shab basar hone ke baad
 
khush hua dil un labon par ik tabassum dekhkar
muskura dena hai kaafee chashm tar hone ke baad

hogaya jeene ka saamaaN mil gayee manzil ‘Raqeeb’
dar tera paaya jabeeN ne dar-badar hone ke baad

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’


fragrance of words.........!
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«Reply #2 on: February 20, 2013, 12:15:27 PM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne aapke... behad khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam
ke saath haazir huye haiN.. Shikayat nahi rahi ke aap kam aa rahe haiN.. Usual Smile

Bade hi dilfareb ashaar kahe hai janab.. gazab ke khayaalaat aur umdaa
ashaar ... Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
Bazm meiN aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: February 20, 2013, 12:30:23 PM »
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बहुत ही उम्दा कलाम पेश किया है शुक्ला जी, ढेरों बधाई
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«Reply #4 on: February 20, 2013, 12:46:05 PM »
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Sheba Ji,

Hamesha kee tarah....bahut saleeke se jawab
dene kee ada hee to Yoindia par kheench laatee
hai...

Hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya...

Raqeeb Lucknowi 
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«Reply #5 on: February 20, 2013, 12:51:03 PM »
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super lines ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2013, 01:32:07 PM »
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Mubarak ho shukla ji,Bahut khub ghazal kahi hai aapne.Iska har ek ashaar pasand ayaa.Dili Mubarakbad.
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2013, 01:47:15 PM »
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saare sher,sher nahi babbar sher hai bahoot khub...
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«Reply #8 on: February 20, 2013, 02:52:24 PM »
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priy satish ji haalaki bahut dino ke baad padhaa par bharpoor satisfaction huaa dheron daad qubool keejiye
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«Reply #9 on: February 20, 2013, 04:15:08 PM »
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लिखने वाले ने कुछ ऐसी दस्ताने-ग़म लिखी
पढ़ने वाले रो पड़े उसका असर होने के बाद  

सुब्ह दम सूरज की किरनो का असर भी खूब है
दर्दे-दिल थम सा गया है शब बसर होने के बाद  

खुश हुआ दिल उन लबों पर इक तबस्सुम देखकर
मुस्कुरा देना है काफी चश्म तर होने के बाद

Namaste satish Sir
Ghazal Laajavaab...par ye sher..dil ke bahut kareeb lage.
wah wah wah..der se padhne ko mila..par aapne dil khush kar diya.
short syllables ka khoobsurat istemaal..dekhte hi banta hai.
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«Reply #10 on: February 20, 2013, 04:18:24 PM »
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Satish jee, hamesha ki tarah laajawaab ghazal, jitni taa'reef ki jaae kam hai. Sabhi ash'aar khoob rahe par matla aur maqta to zordaar haiN. Bahut bahut mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2013, 12:52:55 AM »
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superb
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«Reply #12 on: February 21, 2013, 01:51:22 AM »
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wah wah wah wah
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«Reply #13 on: February 21, 2013, 06:04:05 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Superb ghazal. bahut bahut aapko mubarak ho...
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«Reply #14 on: February 21, 2013, 06:45:28 AM »
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बहुत ही खूब शुक्ला जी बहुत बहुत बधाई
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