Dar-Badar Hone Ke Baad / दर-बदर होने के बाद....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #15 on: February 22, 2013, 04:47:28 AM »
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PaawaaZ Sahab,

Jawab dene aur hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya....

Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #16 on: February 22, 2013, 07:17:44 PM »
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Amit Prakash Meet Ji,

Thanks for reply....

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«Reply #17 on: February 23, 2013, 12:57:13 PM »
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RAJAN KONDAL JI,

THANKS A LOT FOR REPLY......

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«Reply #18 on: February 23, 2013, 05:37:07 PM »
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Sudhir Ashq Ji,

Ghazal pasand karne aur hausala afzai ka
bahut bahut shukriya....

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«Reply #19 on: February 23, 2013, 07:20:01 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on February 20, 2013, 11:42:02 AM
अश्के ग़म से अपना दामन तर-बतर होने के बाद

 
ye hamaaree bebasee hai ya muqaddar ka sitam
qaid hokar rah gaye be-baalo-par hone ke baad


likhne waale ne kuchh aaisee daastaane-gam likhee
padhne waale ro pade uska asar hone ke baad

subh dam sooraj ki kirno ka asar bhi khoob hai
darde-dil tham saa gaya hai shab basar hone ke baad


--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’

DER SE BAZM  MEIN WO  AAYE MAGAR,
AAYE JUB CHHAAP APNI  CHHOR GAYE
                       - HASAN -

Satish ji ,Adab . Is khubsurat ghazal ke liye
tahedil se mubarakbaad aur khidmat meinnacheez
ka tassur mundarja baala eik sher mein .aur darj
ash'aar ke liye khusoosi daad qubool kijye.
                                        HASAN
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«Reply #20 on: February 23, 2013, 07:31:14 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khooooob satish ji................kamaal ka likha hai
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«Reply #21 on: February 24, 2013, 02:52:51 PM »
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Quote from: Dheeraj dave on February 20, 2013, 01:47:15 PM
saare sher,sher nahi babbar sher hai bahoot khub...

Hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya.....Raqeeb
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«Reply #22 on: February 24, 2013, 03:38:18 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on February 20, 2013, 02:52:24 PM
priy satish ji haalaki bahut dino ke baad padhaa par bharpoor satisfaction huaa dheron daad qubool keejiye

Saini Sahab,

Aapki mohabbaton ka bahut bahut shukriya.....

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«Reply #23 on: February 24, 2013, 05:51:01 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on February 20, 2013, 04:15:08 PM
लिखने वाले ने कुछ ऐसी दस्ताने-ग़म लिखी
पढ़ने वाले रो पड़े उसका असर होने के बाद 

सुब्ह दम सूरज की किरनो का असर भी खूब है
दर्दे-दिल थम सा गया है शब बसर होने के बाद 

खुश हुआ दिल उन लबों पर इक तबस्सुम देखकर
मुस्कुरा देना है काफी चश्म तर होने के बाद

Namaste satish Sir
Ghazal Laajavaab...par ye sher..dil ke bahut kareeb lage.
wah wah wah..der se padhne ko mila..par aapne dil khush kar diya.
short syllables ka khoobsurat istemaal..dekhte hi banta hai.

mkv ji....bahut khoob hai aapka chayan...
pahle bhi tamaam log ye she'r pasand kar
chuke hain....bahut bahut shukriya jawab dene
aur hausala afazai ka.....

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«Reply #24 on: February 25, 2013, 02:24:52 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on February 20, 2013, 04:18:24 PM
Satish jee, hamesha ki tarah laajawaab ghazal, jitni taa'reef ki jaae kam hai. Sabhi ash'aar khoob rahe par matla aur maqta to zordaar haiN. Bahut bahut mubarakbaad.

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene
ka bahut bahut shukriya...Iftakhar Bhai...Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #25 on: February 25, 2013, 05:43:24 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on February 21, 2013, 12:52:55 AM
superb

Thanks for reply......Raqeeb
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«Reply #26 on: February 26, 2013, 04:06:44 PM »
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Quote from: prashad on February 21, 2013, 01:51:22 AM
wah wah wah wah

Jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya...Prashad Ji.....Raqeeb
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«Reply #27 on: February 26, 2013, 05:47:44 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on February 21, 2013, 06:04:05 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Superb ghazal. bahut bahut aapko mubarak ho...

aqsh sahab....Ghazal pasand karne aur jawaab dene
ka tahe dil se shukriya....

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«Reply #28 on: February 26, 2013, 08:31:10 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on February 21, 2013, 06:45:28 AM
बहुत ही खूब शुक्ला जी बहुत बहुत बधाई
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

S H U K R I Y A.......RAQEEB
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«Reply #29 on: March 01, 2013, 04:21:47 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 23, 2013, 07:20:01 PM
DER SE BAZM  MEIN WO  AAYE MAGAR,
AAYE JUB CHHAAP APNI  CHHOR GAYE
                       - HASAN -

Satish ji ,Adab . Is khubsurat ghazal ke liye
tahedil se mubarakbaad aur khidmat meinnacheez
ka tassur mundarja baala eik sher mein .aur darj
ash'aar ke liye khusoosi daad qubool kijye.
                                        HASAN


Hasan Sahab,
           Aadab!

Aapki mohabbaton ka bahut bahut shukriya

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