Dard e Tanhaiyaan

by bobby.soni on November 22, 2004, 02:21:52 AM
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kuchh na kissi se bolenge hum
tanhaayee mein rolenge hum

hum be_rahrabon ka kya
saath kissi ke holenge hum

khud to hue rusva lekin
tere bhed na kholenge hum

jeevan zaher bhara saagar
kab tak amrit gholenge hum

neend tho kyaa aayegi humein
maut aayee tho solenge hum

( N M )


This composition is not mine. I was reading it and found very intresting so thought of posting it to yoindia.com. I think this gazal was written in very sad mood as each word sounds ' Full of Dard ' and he was feeling very lonely at the time he was writing

Bobby
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«Reply #1 on: November 22, 2004, 06:25:56 PM »
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Bahut Pyaari lines hain Bobby ji!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: November 22, 2004, 08:02:17 PM »
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NICE ONE BOBBY!!!!!
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bobby.soni
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«Reply #3 on: November 23, 2004, 03:07:38 AM »
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thanx a lot pooja and arun

bobby
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sufyan
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«Reply #4 on: December 05, 2004, 12:04:37 PM »
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thanx a lot pooja and arun

bobby

very nice lines bobby ji i like it if u find more of this type plz write it i m waiting 4 reading this type of ghazals
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #5 on: December 05, 2004, 12:11:21 PM »
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do ghadi dil ke bahalane kaa sahaaraa bhee gayaa
liziye aaz tasavvoor mein bhee tanhayee hai..................


 Puzzled !
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #6 on: December 08, 2004, 08:13:35 PM »
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Waah! Bahut Khoob!!MyHeart ji!!

Woh dard Jo diye Unhone Meri Taqdeer Ban Gaye hain Shayad!
Hum bhi is Dard ke Frame mein Jadi Tasweer Ban Gaye hain Shayad!
Kya kare koi Jo koshish Koi Kaamyaab nahin hoti ab Yahan par,
Aansoo hi ab Apni Maut ki Tadbeer Ban gaye hain Shayad!
Uthte nahin apne kadam aajkal unki Mehfilon ki Taraf kisi bhi tarah,
Bewafa Unke Andaaz In Pairon ki Zanzeer Ban Gaye hain Shayad!
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«Reply #7 on: December 09, 2004, 04:25:36 PM »
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Waah! Bahut Khoob!!MyHeart ji!!

Woh dard Jo diye Unhone Meri Taqdeer Ban Gaye hain Shayad!
Hum bhi is Dard ke Frame mein Jadi Tasweer Ban Gaye hain Shayad!
Kya kare koi Jo koshish Koi Kaamyaab nahin hoti ab Yahan par,
Aansoo hi ab Apni Maut ki Tadbeer Ban gaye hain Shayad!
Uthte nahin apne kadam aajkal unki Mehfilon ki Taraf kisi bhi tarah,
Bewafa Unke Andaaz In Pairon ki Zanzeer Ban Gaye hain Shayad!


sharma ji bahut khub aap ki is shayri ne to dil khush kar diya bahut khub
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #8 on: December 09, 2004, 05:44:03 PM »
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Shukriya Sufi ji!!!! Usual Smile
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bobby.soni
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«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2005, 08:38:07 PM »
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thanx a lot pooja and arun

bobby

very nice lines bobby ji i like it if you find more of this type plz write it i m waiting 4 reading this type of ghazals



Thanx sufyan

actually is thanx ka haqdar to woh hona chahiye jisne ye likha hai
anyway i will try to find more


keep replying, keep appreciating
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2005, 06:50:15 AM »
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Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2005, 10:50:57 PM »
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Bahoot khoob AKS JI and Amit!!!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #12 on: January 21, 2005, 07:00:09 AM »
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Thanx a LOT!!!! Pooja ji!!!!
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