Dard Jab Had Se Badhega To Thehar Jaayega ..!!

by Talat on April 23, 2010, 02:27:14 PM
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«Reply #1 on: April 23, 2010, 06:02:26 PM »
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Bahut khoob Talat Ji
Umda Ghazal pesh kia hai aap ne
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«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2010, 06:23:33 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 23, 2010, 02:27:14 PM

Behad khubsoorat ehsaas Talat ji/Celmira Ji...hazaron daad pese-khidmat hain.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2010, 10:26:14 AM »
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kya baat hai..umda likha hai Talat
urdu ke itne mushkil alfazo ko itni khubsurti se aapne piroya hai ki jise urdu nahi aati wo bhi aasani se samajh jayega

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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2010, 10:52:55 AM »
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bahut khoob talat ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut achhe se chhand se compare kiya hai aapne.
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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2010, 11:04:02 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah...

Bhaut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Aur Dil Ko Lubha Jaane Wale Jazbaat Pesh Kiye Hai Aapne

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2010, 11:16:42 AM »
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Talat Dost, Aapki Likhi Iss Khoobsurat Ghazal Padhkar Kuch likhne Ki gustaaki Kar Raha Hoon..

Ashq Na Bahana Guzre Hue Palon Par
Yeh To Ek Daur Hai Jo Guzar Jaayega...

Zakhm Dikhte Hai Abhi To koi Gham Naa Kar
Guzarte Waqt Mein Har Ek Zakhm Bhar Jaayega...

Aaj Dhalte Hue Chand Ko Dekhkar Afsos Kis Baat Ka,
Kal yehi Chaand Suraj Bankar Phir Ubhar Jaayega...

Jis Pathar Ko Raah Chalte Sirf Thokarein Hi Naseeb Ho,
Uss Pathar Ko Bhi Taraasho To Woh Bhi Nikhar Jaayega...

Aaj Ki Zindagi ko Jee Bhar Ke Jee "Khwaish"
Kal Naa Jaane Waqt Ki Kis Aandhi mein sab Bikhar Jaayega...

Aaj Apne Ghamon Par Bhi Muskurane Ka Hunar Rakh "Khwaish"
Kal Dekhna Gham Bhi Tujhe Dekh Kar Muskurayega...
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«Reply #7 on: April 24, 2010, 11:23:18 AM »
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waah waaaah Khwaishji.bahut umda likha hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ashaq bahaana kya apne haath mein hota hai.
kabhi kabhi aisa bhi hota hai ki man
rone ko bhi tarastaa hai.
kabhi kabhi ashaq roke nahin rukte.
ashaq saawan ki tarhaa barsataa hai.
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«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2010, 11:25:55 AM »
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bahut ache khawahish ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 24, 2010, 11:29:48 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 24, 2010, 11:23:18 AM
waah waaaah Khwaishji.bahut umda likha hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ashaq bahaana kya apne haath mein hota hai.
kabhi kabhi aisa bhi hota hai ki man
rone ko bhi tarastaa hai.
kabhi kabhi ashaq roke nahin rukte.
ashaq saawan ki tarhaa barsataa hai.



Thankyou Soooooooooo Much sureshji..

Aur Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aapne..bahut Ache. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2010, 11:32:15 AM »
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shukriya khwaishji.
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2010, 12:58:33 PM »
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wah wah kya kahene apke talat bahen,, hamesha se hi lajwab kaheti ho app , apki ghazal nazar nawaz howi , waise maine apko dekhe hai ap bahr me badi asani se kahe leti ho .. kabhi waqath ijazath de to zara nazre karam kar dijiyega .. waise maqte me wah kahen ya ahh,, kya istemal kiya hai tarek-a-taluq ka ..ghazal dusre ashar pe apni eak porani ghazal ka ashar yaad aa gaya .. sunch ka takrau dekhiyega ..

din guzaronga barehal tere kuche me sanam!!
raath ayegi to mai deewana kidhar jaunga !!


duwa go..

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«Reply #12 on: April 24, 2010, 01:09:09 PM »
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bahut ache khawahish ji



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Samnojji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: April 24, 2010, 01:13:44 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 24, 2010, 11:16:42 AM
Talat Dost, Aapki Likhi Iss Khoobsurat Ghazal Padhkar Kuch likhne Ki gustaaki Kar Raha Hoon..

Ashq Na Bahana Guzre Hue Palon Par
Yeh To Ek Daur Hai Jo Guzar Jaayega...

Zakhm Dikhte Hai Abhi To koi Gham Naa Kar
Guzarte Waqt Mein Har Ek Zakhm Bhar Jaayega...

Aaj Dhalte Hue Chand Ko Dekhkar Afsos Kis Baat Ka,
Kal yehi Chaand Suraj Bankar Phir Ubhar Jaayega...

Jis Pathar Ko Raah Chalte Sirf Thokarein Hi Naseeb Ho,
Uss Pathar Ko Bhi Taraasho To Woh Bhi Nikhar Jaayega...

Aaj Ki Zindagi ko Jee Bhar Ke Jee "Khwaish"
Kal Naa Jaane Waqt Ki Kis Aandhi mein sab Bikhar Jaayega...

Aaj Apne Ghamon Par Bhi Muskurane Ka Hunar Rakh "Khwaish"
Kal Dekhna Gham Bhi Tujhe Dekh Kar Muskurayega...

wah kya kahene khawish sahab .. bahoth qoob..

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«Reply #14 on: April 24, 2010, 01:14:12 PM »
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Wah Celmira ji,bahut hi khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne hamesha ki tarah.Khwaish ji,Suresh ji, Qadeer ji ne bhi bahut khoob likha.great work.keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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