Dard Jab Had Se Badhega To Thehar Jaayega ..!!

by Talat on April 23, 2010, 02:27:14 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 24, 2010, 01:15:51 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 24, 2010, 01:13:44 PM
wah kya kahene khawish sahab .. bahoth qoob..

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Teh Dil Se Shukriya Qadeer Bhai.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: April 24, 2010, 03:38:44 PM »
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Bahut hiiiiii pyaaraaaaa likha hai celmira ji......No words to praise........
tooooo goooooood......hats off to you.......superb.......
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«Reply #17 on: April 24, 2010, 03:43:12 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 24, 2010, 11:16:42 AM
Talat Dost, Aapki Likhi Iss Khoobsurat Ghazal Padhkar Kuch likhne Ki gustaaki Kar Raha Hoon..

Ashq Na Bahana Guzre Hue Palon Par
Yeh To Ek Daur Hai Jo Guzar Jaayega...

Zakhm Dikhte Hai Abhi To koi Gham Naa Kar
Guzarte Waqt Mein Har Ek Zakhm Bhar Jaayega...

Aaj Dhalte Hue Chand Ko Dekhkar Afsos Kis Baat Ka,
Kal yehi Chaand Suraj Bankar Phir Ubhar Jaayega...

Jis Pathar Ko Raah Chalte Sirf Thokarein Hi Naseeb Ho,
Uss Pathar Ko Bhi Taraasho To Woh Bhi Nikhar Jaayega...

Aaj Ki Zindagi ko Jee Bhar Ke Jee "Khwaish"
Kal Naa Jaane Waqt Ki Kis Aandhi mein sab Bikhar Jaayega...

Aaj Apne Ghamon Par Bhi Muskurane Ka Hunar Rakh "Khwaish"
Kal Dekhna Gham Bhi Tujhe Dekh Kar Muskurayega...
Bahut khoob khwaish ji.......khoob likha aapne.....
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«Reply #18 on: April 24, 2010, 03:45:50 PM »
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Subhan Allah Subhan Allah, Talat Sis,.

Mashallah Bohat Ek Achchi Ghazal Likhi Hai Aapne,.

Aur Aapne Bhi Bohat achchi Koshish Ki Hai Khwaish Bhai,.
Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #19 on: April 24, 2010, 03:47:22 PM »
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Yun Hui Hai Aadat Dard Sehne Ki Abto,.
Jo Dard Nahi Milta To Dard Hota Hai,.

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«Reply #20 on: April 27, 2010, 11:11:54 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 23, 2010, 02:27:14 PM


Ek zamane ke baad yahan aana hua aur aapki ghzal nazr nawaaz huii, aapka andaaz e bayaan bhut hi khoob hai aru jis lab o lehje mai apni baat asaani se keh daiti hain badi baat hai, yun hi likhtei rahiye


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«Reply #21 on: April 27, 2010, 11:39:47 PM »
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Talat,
Bohot bohot hi achcha likha hai.
It is very very impressive.

A thought came to my mind after reading this ghazal few times.
This ghazal is meant to be with only 5 shers. It would not shine this much
with less shers or more shers. (I could be wrong but it is just my opinion)

I do not know why but I think you absolutely knew to go for only 5 shers.
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«Reply #22 on: April 27, 2010, 11:44:31 PM »
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Khwaish,
Aap ne bhi bohot achcha likha hai !!!

Kaash,
Nice sharing of a ghazal of Parveen Shakir.
She is one of my favorite ghazal writers.
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«Reply #23 on: April 27, 2010, 11:46:55 PM »
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Suresh ji,
Nice reply !!!
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«Reply #24 on: April 30, 2010, 11:28:18 AM »
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Badi pyari ghazal likhi hai aapne Talat ji. Is baar kuchh naya rang naya style dekhne ko mila hai jo umda bhi hai aur purkashish bhi. Very nice creation. Marhaba.
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«Reply #25 on: April 30, 2010, 11:36:59 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 24, 2010, 01:13:44 PM
wah kya kahene khawish sahab .. bahoth qoob..

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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Qadeer Bhai.. icon_flower
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«Reply #26 on: April 30, 2010, 01:37:42 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 23, 2010, 06:02:26 PM
Bahut khoob Talat Ji
Umda Ghazal pesh kia hai aap ne

Thanks a lot Rajesh Ji
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«Reply #27 on: April 30, 2010, 01:39:44 PM »
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Quote from: drpandey on April 23, 2010, 06:23:33 PM
Behad khubsoorat ehsaas Talat ji/Celmira Ji...hazaron daad pese-khidmat hain.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Is izzat afzaai ka bohot bohot shukriya Sir !!
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«Reply #28 on: April 30, 2010, 01:50:07 PM »
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Quote from: samnoj on April 24, 2010, 10:26:14 AM
kya baat hai..umda likha hai Talat
urdu ke itne mushkil alfazo ko itni khubsurti se aapne piroya hai ki jise urdu nahi aati wo bhi aasani se samajh jayega

wonderfull

Thanks so much Sam..aap humesha meri shayari dhoond lete ho...Thanks so much dear...
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«Reply #29 on: April 30, 2010, 01:58:50 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 24, 2010, 10:52:55 AM
bahut khoob talat ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut achhe se chhand se compare kiya hai aapne.

Thanks a lot Suresh Ji
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