Dard Jab Had Se Badhega To Thehar Jaayega ..!!

by Talat on April 23, 2010, 02:27:14 PM
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«Reply #30 on: April 30, 2010, 02:01:52 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 24, 2010, 11:04:02 AM
Waah Waah Waah...

Bhaut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Aur Dil Ko Lubha Jaane Wale Jazbaat Pesh Kiye Hai Aapne

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks so much dear friend....aap ko ghazal pasand aayi....bohot bohot shukriya Khwaish Dost
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«Reply #31 on: April 30, 2010, 02:31:07 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 24, 2010, 11:16:42 AM
Talat Dost, Aapki Likhi Iss Khoobsurat Ghazal Padhkar Kuch likhne Ki gustaaki Kar Raha Hoon..

Ashq Na Bahana Guzre Hue Palon Par
Yeh To Ek Daur Hai Jo Guzar Jaayega...

Zakhm Dikhte Hai Abhi To koi Gham Naa Kar
Guzarte Waqt Mein Har Ek Zakhm Bhar Jaayega...

Aaj Dhalte Hue Chand Ko Dekhkar Afsos Kis Baat Ka,
Kal yehi Chaand Suraj Bankar Phir Ubhar Jaayega...

Jis Pathar Ko Raah Chalte Sirf Thokarein Hi Naseeb Ho,
Uss Pathar Ko Bhi Taraasho To Woh Bhi Nikhar Jaayega...

Aaj Ki Zindagi ko Jee Bhar Ke Jee "Khwaish"
Kal Naa Jaane Waqt Ki Kis Aandhi mein sab Bikhar Jaayega...

Aaj Apne Ghamon Par Bhi Muskurane Ka Hunar Rakh "Khwaish"
Kal Dekhna Gham Bhi Tujhe Dekh Kar Muskurayega...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley Bohot khoob Khwaish Dost bohot hi achcha reply diya hai aapne ek ek sher ka Bohot bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost !!
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«Reply #32 on: April 30, 2010, 02:36:10 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 24, 2010, 11:23:18 AM
waah waaaah Khwaishji.bahut umda likha hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ashaq bahaana kya apne haath mein hota hai.
kabhi kabhi aisa bhi hota hai ki man
rone ko bhi tarastaa hai.
kabhi kabhi ashaq roke nahin rukte.
ashaq saawan ki tarhaa barsataa hai.



Waah..bohot khoob Suresh Ji
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«Reply #33 on: April 30, 2010, 02:36:47 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on April 24, 2010, 12:53:01 PM
waah bahut khoob likha hai aapne Talat ji,har sher apni gahrayi lie hai aur hamesha ki tarah behetreen ghazal,bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Bohot bohot shukriya, Kaash Ji
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«Reply #34 on: April 30, 2010, 02:42:00 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 24, 2010, 12:58:33 PM
wah wah kya kahene apke talat bahen,, hamesha se hi lajwab kaheti ho app , apki ghazal nazar nawaz howi , waise maine apko dekhe hai ap bahr me badi asani se kahe leti ho .. kabhi waqath ijazath de to zara nazre karam kar dijiyega .. waise maqte me wah kahen ya ahh,, kya istemal kiya hai tarek-a-taluq ka ..ghazal dusre ashar pe apni eak porani ghazal ka ashar yaad aa gaya .. sunch ka takrau dekhiyega ..

din guzaronga barehal tere kuche me sanam!!
raath ayegi to mai deewana kidhar jaunga !!


duwa go..

qadeertoopchi


Aapki iss izzat afzaai ki shukrguzar hoon Qadeer bhai, aap ko pasand aayi ghazal, zah-e-naseeb......bohot achcha sher hai aapka....it's interesting ki kis tarah ek baat ka alag alag istemaal hua hai............aur Qadeer bhai, bhala main aapko kya sikhaungi, bas khud hi seekh rahi hoon, koshish karti rehti hoon....Bohot shukriya....
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«Reply #35 on: May 02, 2010, 11:23:12 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 24, 2010, 01:14:12 PM
Wah Celmira ji,bahut hi khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne hamesha ki tarah.Khwaish ji,Suresh ji, Qadeer ji ne bhi bahut khoob likha.great work.keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft

Thankyou Sooooooooooo Much Madhu.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #36 on: May 03, 2010, 07:39:20 AM »
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Talat Diiii... Main To Aapki Yeh Gazal Padh kar Speechless Hoon... Mere Paas Lafz Nahi hain aapki Is Gazal Ki Taareef Ke Liye..!! icon_salut icon_salut

Behtreen-Lajawab-Khubsoorat Shayad Yeh Lafz Bhi Kam Padh jayenge.. Basssss Yeh Taaliyaan Hi Hain Mere paas aapki Gazal Ki Shaan Me..!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

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Khwaish Bhai aapne bhi Bahut Hi Umda Likha hai Dost.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob..  Applause Applause Applause



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«Reply #37 on: May 05, 2010, 01:48:57 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on April 24, 2010, 03:43:12 PM
Bahut khoob khwaish ji.......khoob likha aapne.....

Thankyou Soooooooooooooooo Much Pooja icon_flower
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«Reply #38 on: May 06, 2010, 11:38:51 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 24, 2010, 01:14:12 PM
Wah Celmira ji,bahut hi khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne hamesha ki tarah.Khwaish ji,Suresh ji, Qadeer ji ne bhi bahut khoob likha.great work.keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft

Bohot shukriya hausla-afzaai ka Madhu Ji
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«Reply #39 on: May 06, 2010, 11:40:46 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on April 24, 2010, 01:21:34 PM
main koshish zarur karta kuch likhne ki Talat ji lekin itne behatreen tarah se gahre ehsasaat lie ghazal ka jawab yun hi dena sahi na laga,is ghazal ka standard really bahut upar hai isne Parveen Shakir ji ki ye ghazal yaad to dilayi but as per me i rank yr ghazal equivalent to the below mentioned ghazal,keep up the good work  icon_thumleft


vo to Khushbuu hai havaao.n me.n bikhar jaayegaa
masalaa phuul ka hai phuul kidhar jaayegaa

ham to samajhe the ke ek zaKhm hai bhar jaayegaa
kyaa Khabar thii ke rag-e-jaa.N me.n utar jaayegaa

vo havaao.n kii tarah Khaanaa_bajaa.N phirataa hai
ek jho.nkaa hai jo aayegaa guzar jaayegaa

vo jab aayegaa to phir us kii rafaaqat ke liye
mausam-e-gul mere aa.Ngan me.n Thahar jaayegaa

aaKhirash vo bhii kahii.n ret pe baiThii hogii
teraa ye pyaar bhii dariyaa hai utar jaayegaa

Parween Shakir



Ek baar phir tah-e-dil se shukriya, Kaash Ji...iss izzat-afzaai ka behad shukriya......Parveen Shakir ka ye kalam bejod hai....
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«Reply #40 on: May 06, 2010, 11:41:30 AM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on April 24, 2010, 03:38:44 PM
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Bahut hiiiiii pyaaraaaaa likha hai celmira ji......No words to praise........
tooooo goooooood......hats off to you.......superb.......



Thanks so much Nikhaar.....bohot bohot shukriya dear....
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«Reply #41 on: May 06, 2010, 11:41:59 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on April 24, 2010, 03:45:50 PM
Subhan Allah Subhan Allah, Talat Sis,.

Mashallah Bohat Ek Achchi Ghazal Likhi Hai Aapne,.

Aur Aapne Bhi Bohat achchi Koshish Ki Hai Khwaish Bhai,.
Bohat Achche,.

Bohot bohot shukriya, Azeem
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«Reply #42 on: May 06, 2010, 11:42:24 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on April 24, 2010, 03:47:22 PM
Yun Hui Hai Aadat Dard Sehne Ki Abto,.
Jo Dard Nahi Milta To Dard Hota Hai,.

-NM-

Very nice one dear...
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«Reply #43 on: May 06, 2010, 11:43:53 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on April 27, 2010, 11:11:54 PM
Ek zamane ke baad yahan aana hua aur aapki ghzal nazr nawaaz huii, aapka andaaz e bayaan bhut hi khoob hai aru jis lab o lehje mai apni baat asaani se keh daiti hain badi baat hai, yun hi likhtei rahiye


aslam

Aap ko ek arse baad yahan dekh ke bohot khushi hui, Aslam Ji...ummeed hai aap jaldi hi apke khoobsurat kalam padhne ko milenge.....bohot bohot shukriya iss hausla-afzaai ka...
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«Reply #44 on: May 06, 2010, 11:45:35 AM »
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Quote from: Bharat on April 27, 2010, 11:39:47 PM
Talat,
Bohot bohot hi achcha likha hai.
It is very very impressive.

A thought came to my mind after reading this ghazal few times.
This ghazal is meant to be with only 5 shers. It would not shine this much
with less shers or more shers. (I could be wrong but it is just my opinion)

I do not know why but I think you absolutely knew to go for only 5 shers.


Thanks so much Bharat for your lovely comments...I don't know why but just stopped after 5 'shers'.....Thanks so much...it is always so nice to see your comments Usual Smile
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