Dard Jab Had Se Badhega To Thehar Jaayega ..!! -Panna 4:Ghazals

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«Reply #45 on: May 06, 2010, 11:47:17 AM »

Quote from: riyaz106 on April 30, 2010, 11:28:18 AM

Badi pyari ghazal likhi hai aapne Talat ji. Is baar kuchh naya rang naya style dekhne ko mila hai jo umda bhi hai aur purkashish bhi. Very nice creation. Marhaba.

Bohot bohot shukriya Riyaz Ji....aap ki zarra-nawazi hai...aap khud ek behtareen shayar hain...aur humesha aap ki ghazlon se seekhne ko milta hai....


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Re: Dard Jab Had Se Badhega To Thehar Jaayega ..!!

«Reply #46 on: May 12, 2010, 10:38:17 AM »

Quote from: Shihab on April 30, 2010, 06:51:46 PM

Bahut Bahut Khub Talat Ji
Bahut Khoobsurat Peshkash Hai

Aur Khwaish Bhai Aapke To Kya Kehne
Aapto Hai Hi Lajawab....Bahut Khub

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Bohot bohot shukriya. Shihab Ji, aapko ye ghazal pasand aayi...


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Talat

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Re: Dard Jab Had Se Badhega To Thehar Jaayega ..!!

«Reply #47 on: May 12, 2010, 10:44:43 AM »

Quote from: Mann on May 03, 2010, 07:39:20 AM

Talat Diiii... Main To Aapki Yeh Gazal Padh kar Speechless Hoon... Mere Paas Lafz Nahi hain aapki Is Gazal Ki Taareef Ke Liye..!!

Behtreen-Lajawab-Khubsoorat Shayad Yeh Lafz Bhi Kam Padh jayenge.. Basssss Yeh Taaliyaan Hi Hain Mere paas aapki Gazal Ki Shaan Me..!!

Khwaish Bhai aapne bhi Bahut Hi Umda Likha hai Dost.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob..

**~** Mann **~**

Vicky ji, thanks so much....aapko ye ghazal itni pasand aayi aur aapki iss khoobsurat taareef ke liye bohot bohot shukriya......


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Re: Dard Jab Had Se Badhega To Thehar Jaayega ..!!

«Reply #48 on: May 15, 2010, 04:03:25 PM »

Ghazal ki ek ek pankti kaabile taarif hai

Applause


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Re: Dard Jab Had Se Badhega To Thehar Jaayega ..!!

«Reply #49 on: May 24, 2010, 10:27:04 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on April 24, 2010, 11:16:42 AM

Talat Dost, Aapki Likhi Iss Khoobsurat Ghazal Padhkar Kuch likhne Ki gustaaki Kar Raha Hoon..

Ashq Na Bahana Guzre Hue Palon Par
Yeh To Ek Daur Hai Jo Guzar Jaayega...

Zakhm Dikhte Hai Abhi To koi Gham Naa Kar
Guzarte Waqt Mein Har Ek Zakhm Bhar Jaayega...

Aaj Dhalte Hue Chand Ko Dekhkar Afsos Kis Baat Ka,
Kal yehi Chaand Suraj Bankar Phir Ubhar Jaayega...

Jis Pathar Ko Raah Chalte Sirf Thokarein Hi Naseeb Ho,
Uss Pathar Ko Bhi Taraasho To Woh Bhi Nikhar Jaayega...

Aaj Ki Zindagi ko Jee Bhar Ke Jee "Khwaish"
Kal Naa Jaane Waqt Ki Kis Aandhi mein sab Bikhar Jaayega...

Aaj Apne Ghamon Par Bhi Muskurane Ka Hunar Rakh "Khwaish"
Kal Dekhna Gham Bhi Tujhe Dekh Kar Muskurayega...

aapne bhi bahut accha likha hai
Maan na padega

:Hatsoff: Applause


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Re: Dard Jab Had Se Badhega To Thehar Jaayega ..!!

«Reply #50 on: May 31, 2010, 06:42:21 AM »

Quote from: Nikhaar on April 24, 2010, 03:43:12 PM

Bahut khoob khwaish ji.......khoob likha aapne.....

Thankyou Soooooooooo Much Pooja..


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«Reply #51 on: June 09, 2010, 10:01:29 AM »

Dear Celmira Saheba! Adab!
Air pur-lutf, me-aari, murassa ghazal se nawaaz kar is bazm meN chaar chaaNd laga diya hai aapne. Meri dua hai ke zore qalam aur ziyada.......Dher saari daad qubul kijiye.Isi radeef-qaafiye meiN do sher maiN apni ghazal ka yahaN pesh karne ki jasaarat kar raha hooN:

Waqt ke saath kahaN iska asar jaayega
Tees rah jaayegi ye zakhm to bhar jaayega

Usko chehra pas-e-chehra ho mubaarak lekin
Aaina ghaur se dekhega to Dar jaayega

Quote from: Celmira on April 23, 2010, 02:27:14 PM


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Re: Dard Jab Had Se Badhega To Thehar Jaayega ..!!

«Reply #52 on: June 09, 2010, 01:12:46 PM »

Quote from: waquif ansari on June 09, 2010, 10:01:29 AM

Wah Waqif Sahab Jawab nahi , KYa kahene , Sher kahe ke Ghazal sunne ko dil chahta hai , Kabhi Waqath ne ijazath di to karam kar den ,,Allah apko khush rakhe ..

Duwa go

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«Reply #53 on: June 09, 2010, 02:18:57 PM »

celmira saheba bahot hi behtreen paishkash ,,waqif saheb ne jis andaz main daad o tehseen se nawaza hai waqie ap mustahiq hain,bahot hi umda,waqif saheb ne jo do shair paish kiye hain bahut hi umda hain aur mein qadeer bhai ki baat se ittefaaq rakhta hoon ke waqif saheb ko waqt ijazat dein to ghazal se nawaz dein.


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waquif ansari

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«Reply #54 on: June 10, 2010, 10:04:24 AM »

Janab Nazar Ghouri Saheb! AOA!
Bandah itni taareef k qaabil nahiN hai, haaN aapki khwahish kisi din zaroor poori karooNga. Apni nawazishoN se nawaazte rahiye aur khaaksaar ko duaoN meiN bhi shaamil rakhiye.

(Waquif Ansari)

Quote from: nazar ghouri on June 09, 2010, 02:18:57 PM


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