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akele safar mein jaan pehchaan koi to ho
do bol meethay bol de insaan koi to ho
kiske bahrose wo saja le palkon par
tootte khaabo.n ka nighebaan koi to ho
ye soch kar haatho ko sar par rkh liya
tapti dhoop mai sayebaan koi to ho
tujhko isliyn jabee.n par saja rhkha hai
inferaadiyat ki pehchaan koi to ho
isiliyn apni aankho mein kahani hai likhi
gar lab keh na payai.n tarjumaan koi to ho
is dard ke safr mein akele hai.n aslam
aap nahi zulf sahi meherbaan koi to ho
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«Reply #1 on: March 29, 2009, 09:42:14 PM » |
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Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji...  Aap ki ghazal pe hi jawab likhne ki koshish ki hai...!!  |
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2009, 04:08:40 AM » |
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Very nice aaina ji
Very nice Celmira sis
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2009, 06:52:50 AM » |
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Bahut badhiya Aslam Ji and Talat Ji !!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2009, 07:56:43 AM » |
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Bikhar jane do inko toot ke Palkon pe... Subhan_allah Talat subah subah Aslam ke baad jawaban tumhara kalam padha to Subah mano ekdam khushguwar ho gayee. Bas ek guzarish hain aur likha karo....  [/b] S ubah subah aap ka comment padha aaj...aur sach maaniye Sajid Ji humari bhi subah itna khoobsurat comment padhe ke khushgawar ho gayi....Inshallah koshish karenge regular likhne ki....  Very nice Celmira sis[/b]
Thank You Honey SisBahut badhiya Aslam Ji and Talat Ji !!!!!!!!!
Thanks a lot Sanjay JiThanks so much Rahim |
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2009, 02:33:09 PM » |
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As usual good writing Aslam ji... Wonderful reply Talat... Tapti Dhoop Mein Kaun Saath Deta Hai, Faqat Ek Apne Saaye Ke Siwa Koi Nahi... Loved these lines the most. agar ye do line sab insaan samajh jaye to dukh kaafi kam ho jaye... |
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«Reply #8 on: March 30, 2009, 07:38:43 PM » |
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Wonderful reply Talat... Tapti Dhoop Mein Kaun Saath Deta Hai, Faqat Ek Apne Saaye Ke Siwa Koi Nahi... Loved these lines the most. agar ye do line sab insaan samajh jaye to dukh kaafi kam ho jaye... Thanks so much Angel...sach kaha.... |
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«Reply #10 on: March 30, 2009, 08:27:50 PM » |
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Ek Chhoti Si Koshish Mai bhi Kar Raha Hun
Ummid Karta Hun, Ki Thik Lage
Hamsafar Kho Gaye Gamo Ki Barsat Me...
Aaj Dard Ke Safar Me Ham Fir Se Akele Hain...
Mehfilon Me Rehati Thi Har Pal Raunak Jinaki...
Aaj Vahan Tanhaiyon Ke Mele hain...
Dekh Kar Aaj Ek Zamane Baad Unko...
Jaane Kyun Ye Laga Fir Se,
Ham Toh Akele The, Aaj Vo Bhi Akele Hain...
~Pank~
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«Reply #11 on: March 31, 2009, 05:04:10 AM » |
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Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji... Aap ki ghazal pe hi jawab likhne ki koshish ki hai...!! |
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«Reply #13 on: March 31, 2009, 05:07:42 AM » |
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Very nice aaina ji
Very nice Celmira sis
thnxxxxxx honeyrose........... |
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