"dard ke safr mein akele hain"

by aaina on March 29, 2009, 07:37:01 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 31, 2009, 05:10:03 AM »
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Quote from: karndhar on March 30, 2009, 06:52:50 AM
Bahut badhiya Aslam Ji and Talat Ji !!!!!!!!!

bhut bhut shukriya karndhar ji..................
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«Reply #16 on: March 31, 2009, 05:11:42 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on March 30, 2009, 07:56:43 AM
Applause Applause Applause ApplauseMashallah...Bahaut sahi likha hai apne Aslam bhaijan...Sacha dildar koi to ho... Applause Applause Applause Applause Apka jawa bhi bahaut acha hai Talat jee...

thnxxxxx dead heart, hosla afzaaii ka bhut bhut shukriya.
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«Reply #17 on: March 31, 2009, 05:13:16 AM »
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Quote from: angel4u on March 30, 2009, 02:33:09 PM
As usual good writing Aslam ji...

Wonderful reply Talat...

Tapti Dhoop Mein Kaun Saath Deta Hai,
Faqat Ek Apne Saaye Ke Siwa Koi Nahi...

Loved these lines the most. agar ye do line sab insaan samajh jaye to dukh kaafi kam ho jaye...

Applause

nwazish angel ji............thnxxxxx so much
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«Reply #18 on: March 31, 2009, 05:13:32 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 29, 2009, 09:42:14 PM
Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji... Applause Applause Applause


Aap ki ghazal pe hi jawab likhne ki koshish ki hai...!!




Lajaawab Peshkash Dost!!! Beautiful and meaningful poetry..

"Tapti Dhoop Mein Kaun saath Deta hai,
Fakat Ek Apne Saaye Ka siva Koi Nahi..  

Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: March 31, 2009, 05:14:55 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on March 30, 2009, 08:14:02 PM
Bahoot Khoob Likha Aainaji  Applause Applause Applause
Bahoot Khubsurat Reply Diya Celmira ji Applause Applause Applause
Very Nice

shukriya pank ji................mashallah bhut achi koshish hai...bhut khoob........
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«Reply #20 on: March 31, 2009, 05:21:42 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 31, 2009, 05:09:15 AM
Wah Wah!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Aaina.

"Yeh Sochkar Haathon ko Sar Par Rakh liya,
Tapti Dhoop Mein Sayebaan koi to ho.."

Kya likha hai aapne,pehli baar aapko padha hai..bahut ache Applause Applause Applause

bhut bhut shukriya khwaish ji...........ke aapne is nacheez ka kalaam pasnd kia,
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«Reply #21 on: April 01, 2009, 11:31:09 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 31, 2009, 05:04:10 AM
thnxxxxxx so much celmira ji..................kia baat hai aapke jawabi ghazal ki..........itna khoobsurat jawaab agr milta rhe to kya kehne....bhut hi acha kaha hai aapne har shair daad ke qabil hai......daad qubool karain........umeed hai ki aage bhi aap aise hi saath nibhati rhengi apne khoobsurat jwabo.n ke sath,



Bohot bohot shukriya Aslam Ji, koshish karenge jawab likhne ki...aap bhi bas yunhi likhte rahiye  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #22 on: April 01, 2009, 11:32:56 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on March 30, 2009, 08:14:02 PM

Bahoot Khubsurat Reply Diya Celmira ji Applause Applause Applause
Very Nice

Thanks a lot Panks

Quote from: pankshivam on March 30, 2009, 08:27:50 PM
Ek Chhoti Si Koshish Mai bhi Kar Raha Hun
Ummid Karta Hun, Ki Thik Lage


Hamsafar Kho Gaye Gamo Ki Barsat Me...
Aaj Dard Ke Safar Me Ham Fir Se Akele Hain...

Mehfilon Me Rehati Thi Har Pal Raunak Jinaki...
Aaj Vahan Tanhaiyon Ke Mele hain...

Dekh Kar Aaj Ek Zamane Baad Unko...
Jaane Kyun Ye Laga Fir Se,
Ham Toh Akele The, Aaj Vo Bhi Akele Hain...

~Pank~


Beautiful reply  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley ...bohopt achcha likha hai aapne Panks
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«Reply #23 on: April 01, 2009, 11:34:28 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 31, 2009, 05:13:32 AM
Lajaawab Peshkash Dost!!! Beautiful and meaningful poetry..

"Tapti Dhoop Mein Kaun saath Deta hai,
Fakat Ek Apne Saaye Ka siva Koi Nahi..  

Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!! Applause Applause Applause

Bohot bohot shukariya Khwaish Dost aapne ise padha aur pasand kiya Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: April 01, 2009, 12:10:05 PM »
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Shukriya Aaina ji
Shukriya Celmiraji
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«Reply #25 on: April 03, 2009, 01:48:17 PM »
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wah sahab :clap:kya ghazal likhi hai.padhkar mazaa aa gaya Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #26 on: April 04, 2009, 12:07:07 PM »
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Quote from: daljeet_faqeer on April 03, 2009, 01:48:17 PM
wah sahab :clap:kya ghazal likhi hai.padhkar mazaa aa gaya Clapping Smiley

bhut bhut shukriya diljeet sahab.............
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«Reply #27 on: April 09, 2009, 02:49:10 PM »
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Nice One Again Aanina ji,.
And Nice One Talat Sis,.
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«Reply #28 on: April 11, 2009, 10:18:04 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem 4 Ghazals on April 09, 2009, 02:49:10 PM
Nice One Again Aanina ji,.
And Nice One Talat Sis,.



shukriya azeem sahab.....................
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«Reply #29 on: April 11, 2009, 02:46:12 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 29, 2009, 07:37:01 PM
akele safar mein jaan pehchaan koi to ho
do bol meethay bol de insaan koi to ho

kiske bahrose wo saja le palkon par
tootte khaabo.n ka nighebaan koi to ho

ye soch kar haatho ko sar par rkh liya
tapti dhoop mai sayebaan koi to ho

tujhko isliyn jabee.n par saja rhkha hai
inferaadiyat ki pehchaan koi to ho

isiliyn apni aankho mein kahani hai likhi
gar lab keh na payai.n tarjumaan koi to ho

is dard ke safr mein akele hai.n aslam
aap nahi zulf sahi meherbaan koi to ho


Wah aawsome  Applause Applause
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