"dard ke safr mein akele hain"

by aaina on March 29, 2009, 07:37:01 PM
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«Reply #30 on: April 11, 2009, 02:51:16 PM »
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bahut khoob aaina jee..
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«Reply #31 on: April 11, 2009, 02:56:04 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 29, 2009, 09:42:14 PM
Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji... Applause Applause Applause


Aap ki ghazal pe hi jawab likhne ki koshish ki hai...!!


Superb Thumbs UP ... Nice reply and lovely creation dear Talat...  Applause
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«Reply #32 on: April 14, 2009, 02:01:43 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 29, 2009, 07:37:01 PM
akele safar mein jaan pehchaan koi to ho
do bol meethay bol de insaan koi to ho

kiske bahrose wo saja le palkon par
tootte khaabo.n ka nighebaan koi to ho

ye soch kar haatho ko sar par rkh liya
tapti dhoop mai sayebaan koi to ho

tujhko isliyn jabee.n par saja rhkha hai
inferaadiyat ki pehchaan koi to ho

isiliyn apni aankho mein kahani hai likhi
gar lab keh na payai.n tarjumaan koi to ho

is dard ke safr mein akele hai.n aslam
aap nahi zulf sahi meherbaan koi to ho


Waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai, AAINA Ji,. Bohat Achchem,.
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Quote from: Roja on April 11, 2009, 02:46:12 PM
Wah aawsome  Applause Applause

thnxxxxx roja..........................
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«Reply #34 on: April 14, 2009, 02:04:43 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 11, 2009, 02:51:16 PM
bahut khoob aaina jee..

thnxxx so much pandit sahab....
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Waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai, AAINA Ji,. Bohat Achchem,.

thnxxxx so much azeem dear...............thnxxx
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«Reply #36 on: April 14, 2009, 02:08:29 PM »
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U Are Welcome JI,.
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«Reply #37 on: April 21, 2009, 03:04:04 PM »
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Nice creation Asina Ji
Nice addition Celmira ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 21, 2009, 03:04:04 PM
Nice creation Asina Ji
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shukriya sarvesh sahab
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Quote from: Roja on April 11, 2009, 02:56:04 PM
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Thanks so much Roja dear
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Nice creation Asina Ji
Nice addition Celmira ji
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Bohot shukriya, Sarvesh Ji
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Quote from: aaina on April 14, 2009, 02:03:56 PM
thnxxxxx roja..........................

Welcome dear Aslam ji
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Quote from: Celmira on May 11, 2009, 09:42:24 AM
Thanks so much Roja dear

Welcome dear  Usual Smile
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