Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh:Ghazals

aqsh

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Dard ki duniya meiN, mera basera hai
KushiyoN par bhi, gam ka pehra hai

Har ek lamha, guzarta hai aanhoN meiN
Yaad lekar aata, phir naya savera hai

Zakhm hi milte rahe, teri chahat se mujhko
Naseeb ne kaisa, dard ka jaal bikhera hai

Zindagi ho gayi, ek bhatakte musafir ki tarah
Din ke ujaloN meiN bhi, chaya andhera hai

Yeh wafaoN ka sila hai, toh koi baat nahi
Mere mukaddar meiN nahi, pyaar tera hai

Ulfat ke saude hote hai, bazaar meiN "Aqsh"
Ishq ke naam par bas, milta lutera hai


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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2012, 05:20:24 AM »

bahut khoob


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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2012, 05:25:29 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on December 27, 2012, 05:20:24 AM

bahut khoob

thank you soooooooooo much saini sir


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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2012, 05:53:59 AM »

wah wah


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aqsh

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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2012, 05:54:28 AM »

Quote from: prashad on December 27, 2012, 05:53:59 AM

wah wah

thnx prashad jee


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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2012, 06:08:55 AM »

Kya baat hai aqsh ji....wah
Aap ki iss shayari mein dard mera chalka hai...wah
Aap ki khidmat mein ek nazrana meri aur se kabool karein ek rau.....


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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2012, 06:29:40 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on December 27, 2012, 05:02:28 AM

Dard ki duniya meiN, mera basera hai
KushiyoN par bhi, gam ka pehra hai

waah waah

Har ek lamha, guzarta hai aanhoN meiN
Yaad lekar aata, phir naya savera hai

waah waah

Zakhm hi milte rahe, teri chahat se mujhko
Naseeb ne kaisa, dard ka jaal bikhera hai

wah wah wah

Zindagi ho gayi, ek bhatakte musafir ki tarah
Din ke ujaloN meiN bhi, chaya andhera hai

wah waah waah

Yeh wafaoN ka sila hai, toh koi baat nahi
Mere mukaddar meiN nahi, pyaar tera hai

waah waah

Ulfat ke saude hote hai, bazaar meiN "Aqsh"
Ishq ke naam par bas, milta lutera hai

"Na ghabra ke aagey andhera hai,
har andhere ke baad hi savera hai".

beautifull ghazal Aqsh ji ,,
sar se paun tak gazab hai ghazal ,,,ek rau to banta hai magar
ritesh ji ne already de diya hai...
Applause


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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2012, 07:51:16 AM »

haayeee!!! maar hi daaloge aap apni rachnaaon se.. kyaa dhamaakedaar likhaa hai aapne... ek dum masssttt raapchik... bahut bahut good type ka likha hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji... yunhi likhte rahiye....!!!


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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2012, 09:52:29 AM »

Aqsh Jee Aadaab!

Behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne... behad khoob jee
sabhi khayaal behad umdaa rahe.. kafi gehre aur dilfareb ashaar bayaaN
kiye hai jee...

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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aqsh

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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2012, 02:36:31 PM »

Quote from: Ritesh Modi on December 27, 2012, 06:08:55 AM

Kya baat hai aqsh ji....wah
Aap ki iss shayari mein dard mera chalka hai...wah
Aap ki khidmat mein ek nazrana meri aur se kabool karein ek rau.....

thank you ritesh jee for the rau


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aqsh

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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2012, 02:42:03 PM »

Quote from: sahal on December 27, 2012, 06:29:40 AM

thank you soooo much sahal


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aqsh

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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2012, 02:42:37 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 27, 2012, 07:51:16 AM

thank you soooooooooooo much hriday jee


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aqsh

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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #12 on: December 27, 2012, 02:43:06 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 27, 2012, 09:52:29 AM

thank you sooo much parwaz jee


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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #13 on: December 27, 2012, 02:45:34 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on December 27, 2012, 05:02:28 AM

nice,ma'am


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Dard ki duniya................................................Aqsh

«Reply #14 on: December 27, 2012, 02:49:13 PM »

Ye wafao ka sila hai to koi baat nahee wala sher umda raha.
Dard ko achche lefjo piroya gaya hai. Rachna bahut dard bhari thi par khoobsurat thi.


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