dard se kuch aisa mera

by saahill on January 22, 2011, 07:08:37 AM
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phir shaam dhal rahi hai phir yaad sataaa rahi hai
phir hausla hai toot raha phir umeed larhkharha rahi hai

yeh  sochkar hi mujhko na jaane kya ho raha hai
use dekh chorh jatey mujhko meri jaan jaa rahi hai

chahat jo thi mere dil mein usne use thukra to diya
thukrayee mohabbat mere dil mein our barhti ja  rahi hai

dil par jo diye hain zakham unhein kaise main sukhaaoun
tujhe soch soch kar chot dil ki our gehri ho rahi hai

phir sham dhal rahi hai phir yaad sataa rahi hai
phir hausla hai toot raha phir umeed larhkharha rahi hai

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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2011, 07:12:02 AM »
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wahhhhhhhhh bht mast likha hai saahil bht badhiya....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

khamoshyan bhi jane kya geet gaa rahi hai
hai har suun sannata par shaehnai baj rahi hai

khaniyan bhi apni ye hawaein suna rahi hai
mahiobbat k rang me ye fiza range ja rahi hai....
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2011, 07:19:27 AM »
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nice reply

fizaaon se kehna ke yun hi saj ke rehna
mere dilbar ke chehra ka gehna banke rehna
hai kuch shokhiyan uski nigahon mein aisi
ke bach kar e saahil in adhaaon se rehna
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2011, 07:21:49 AM »
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wah mast
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2011, 08:16:12 AM »
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bahot aachi shayari sahil ji......anamika ji behtarin jawab he ji....keep it up
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2011, 08:18:09 AM »
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shukriya rajaji.......
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2011, 08:24:34 AM »
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phir shaam dhal rahi hai phir yaad sataaa rahi hai
phir hausla hai toot raha phir umeed larhkharha rahi hai

yeh  sochkar hi mujhko na jaane kya ho raha hai
use dekh chorh jatey mujhko meri jaan jaa rahi hai

chahat jo thi mere dil mein usne use thukra to diya
thukrayee mohabbat mere dil mein our barhti ja  rahi hai

dil par jo diye hain zakham unhein kaise main sukhaaoun
tujhe soch soch kar chot dil ki our gehri ho rahi hai

phir sham dhal rahi hai phir yaad sataa rahi hai
phir hausla hai toot raha phir umeed larhkharha rahi hai



Bahut khoobsurat ehsaas likhe hai aapne ... Saahill Ji !

Very Nice Creation ... dil se daad hazir hai ... !

aise hi likhte rahen ... aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2011, 08:36:56 AM »
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thx matrix ji asnhumali ji anu ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2011, 05:15:27 PM »
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Bahut Khub Sahill Ji U Hi Likhti Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye
And Nice Reply Kasak Ji


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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2011, 04:42:01 AM »
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thx rishi bhai
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