Dard to fir bhi dahaktaa hai, aankh rotee hai!!

by abdbundeli on December 28, 2010, 11:55:03 AM
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Seepiyoun mein jo chamak jaaye wahee motee hai!
Duaa sey raat guzartee hai, shafaq hotee hai!!

Binaa duaa key, hijra mein hi mar gaye hotey!
Dard to fir bhi dahaktaa hai, aankh rotee hai!!

Log kahtey hain: duaaoun mein asar hotaa hai:
Tabhee to, baarahaa, hamain hawaa bhigotee hai!

Kyon ta'anuk key liye eid unko raas aatee?
Aaj bhi, yaad pighal kar uyoon dhotee hai!

Labon pai khushk daraaron ney kiyaa hai qabzaa!
Zindagee apnee chamak yuun hi nahin khotee hai!!

Hashra kee raat farishtey nahin soney dengey!
Ishq kee rooh, chaah kar bhi, kabhee sotee hai?

Guzar rahey hain usee raah sey, 'abd', ham bhee,
Jahaan hareik shaam roz khaar botee hai!

- abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2010, 10:50:19 PM »
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kya baat hai abd bhai... bahut achhi peshkash hai aapki...

khud ko kiye zaar zaar jeeta hai koyi yahaan
waha ke sawaal jawaab jaane kya rang dikhaayenge !

Intezar !
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2010, 04:41:24 AM »
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wah wah .... wah wah ....

abdji.... kya bat hai..

bahut bahut daad kubul karen
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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2010, 05:37:57 AM »
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Bundeli ji--
aap ki peshkash always hatke hoti hai.
kuch alfaaz samjh nahi paata mai lekin ek junun sa cha jaata hai Padhkar.
behad umda kalaam.
khus rahiye.
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2010, 06:45:49 AM »
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Quote from: Intezar on December 28, 2010, 10:50:19 PM
kya baat hai abd bhai... bahut achhi peshkash hai aapki...

khud ko kiye zaar zaar jeeta hai koyi yahaan
waha ke sawaal jawaab jaane kya rang dikhaayenge !

Intezar !

Shukrbiyah 'Intezar' ji!

Chehrey pai aashiqee kaa noor jhilmilaayegaa!
Woh door rah sakeygaa nahin, paas aayegaa!
Dheykheygaa aks-e-rooh ko is paar sey us paar;
Rizwaan kharhaa kankhiyon sey muskuraayegaa!!

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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2010, 06:49:06 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on December 29, 2010, 04:41:24 AM
wah wah .... wah wah ....
abdji.... kya bat hai..
bahut bahut daad kubul karen

Bahut-bahut shukriyah 'manjum' ji!

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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2010, 07:01:36 AM »
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Quote from: killbill on December 29, 2010, 05:37:57 AM
Bundeli ji--
aap ki peshkash always hatke hoti hai.
kuch alfaaz samjh nahi paata mai lekin ek junun sa cha jaata hai Padhkar.
behad umda kalaam.
khus rahiye.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah 'killbill' ji! Dil ki baat dil tak pahunch hi jaatee hai: alfaaz to bas beychaarey 'alfaaz' hi hain!

                               - abd bundeli

          
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2010, 07:10:11 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 28, 2010, 11:55:03 AM


Labon pai khushk daraaron ney kiyaa hai qabzaa!
Zindagee apnee chamak yuun hi nahin khotee hai!!

Hashra kee raat farishtey nahin soney dengey!
Ishq kee rooh, chaah kar bhi, kabhee sotee hai?

Guzar rahey hain usee raah sey, 'abd', ham bhee,
Jahaan hareik shaam roz khaar botee hai!

- abd bundeli[/b][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/color]

bahut sanjeedaa gazal hai Abd jee...dil chhoo gayaa aap kaa ye kalaam ....isi sandarbh me kuchh meri janib se bhee.....

sukh sookhane lage dukh dahakne lagaa
hothon pe aah lahoo aankh se tapakne lagaa  

seedhee katar dil pe or neze pe paaoN dekh
sheeshaa mere vajood ka chatakhne lagaa hai
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2010, 08:24:28 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 29, 2010, 07:10:11 AM
bahut sanjeedaa gazal hai Abd jee...dil chhoo gayaa aap kaa ye kalaam ....isi sandarbh me kuchh meri janib se bhee.....

sukh sookhane lage dukh dahakne lagaa
hothon pe aah lahoo aankh se tapakne lagaa  

seedhee katar dil pe or neze pe paaoN dekh
sheeshaa mere vajood ka chatakhne lagaa hai

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Mamta ji! Aur, aapkee is naazuk khayaalee ney bhi mujhey kaheen bheetar tak chhuu liyaa hai! Bahut khoob!

Unkee marzee hai, wo shikaar kareyn jaisey bhi:
Ham to ham hain: hamain har dam shikaar honaa hai!
Iltijaa hai, ki, ham unhain nigaah bhar deykheyn:
Huye hain door nazar sey, isee kaa ronaa hai!!

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«Reply #9 on: December 29, 2010, 08:34:52 AM »
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ahaaa abd ji kya bat hai bahut bahut khoob

maja aa gaya padhkar

"jahan harek shaam khar bote hai" kya line he janab

dher saari daad~

likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #10 on: December 29, 2010, 02:06:48 PM »
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Abd jee phir ek baar binaa kahe rahaa naheeN jaayegaa...bahut khoob !!!isi silsile ko aage baRhaate hue.....

na bhar aaheN koi saiyaad tere par katartaa hai
kabhee to waqt aataa hai naseeb apnaa palat-taa hai

tu ban bijalee jalaa de housle saiyaad ke saare
bachaa le bebasoN ko jo haiN uski chaal ke maare
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«Reply #11 on: December 29, 2010, 02:43:11 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 29, 2010, 02:06:48 PM
Abd jee phir ek baar binaa kahe rahaa naheeN jaayegaa...bahut khoob !!!isi silsile ko aage baRhaate hue.....

na bhar aaheN koi saiyaad tere par katartaa hai
kabhee to waqt aataa hai naseeb apnaa palat-taa hai

tu ban bijalee jalaa de housle saiyaad ke saare
bachaa le bebasoN ko jo haiN uski chaal ke maare

Shukriyah Mamta ji! Kyaa hi Khuub kahaa hai aapney!! Bahut achchhey!

Shikaaree khud shikaar hotey hain is duniyaa key douron mein!
Kabhee kuchh beybasee hotee hai ham mein, kabhi auron mein!
Hazaaron baar khaateen chot khud bhi nargisee aankheyn;
Kanakhiyaan hi kabhee gunchey ugaateen hain kathhoron mein!!

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«Reply #12 on: December 31, 2010, 09:32:05 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: December 31, 2010, 01:12:06 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on December 29, 2010, 08:34:52 AM
ahaaa abd ji kya bat hai bahut bahut khoob

maja aa gaya padhkar

"jahan harek shaam khar bote hai" kya line he janab

dher saari daad~

likhte rahiye~

Shukriyah Abhi bhai! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

HAPPY NEW YEAR! MAY IT BRING BLISS & PROSPERITY TO YOU & YOUR FAMILY!!

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«Reply #14 on: December 31, 2010, 01:13:56 PM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on December 31, 2010, 09:32:05 AM
Bahut Khub Sir


Shukriyah Rishi ji!! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

HAPPY NEW YEAR! MAY IT BRING BLISS & PROSPERITY TO YOU & YOUR FAMILY!!

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