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                      ho alfaaz kam to churaa lete hain...!!
                      ghazal dusro.N ki apni banaa lete hain..!!!


                      cheen liya gurbati ne need aankho.N se ,
                      nigaaho.N ko khawaab ek dikhaa lete hain,


                      karti bahaar raham to manzar kuch aur hota,
                      sookhe phool se hi gesu sajaa lete hain,


                      chupana kuch bhi abb buss mein nahin apne,
                      bataa kar ise 'ashq' palko.N se hataa lete hain,

 
                      hai bachcha garib ka to gunahgaar hoga,
                      lagaa kar ilzaam 'bechain' use sataa lete hain.........!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2011, 10:23:27 AM »
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oh esi bat……

achi ghazal laye ho janaab…
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«Reply #2 on: May 25, 2011, 10:54:35 AM »
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                      ho alfaaz kam to churaa lete hain...!!
                      ghazal dusro.N ki apni banaa lete hain..!!!


                      cheen liya gurbati ne need aankho.N se ,
                      nigaaho.N ko khawaab ek dikhaa lete hain,


                      karti bahaar raham to manzar kuch aur hota,
                      sookhe phool se hi gesu sajaa lete hain,


                      chupana kuch bhi abb buss mein nahin apne,
                      bataa kar ise 'ashq' palko.N se hataa lete hain,

 
                      hai bachcha garib ka to gunahgaar hoga,
                      lagaa kar ilzaam 'bechain' use sataa lete hain.........!!!!!

Bahut bahut khooob Adilji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2011, 07:09:19 PM »
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good one
Quote from: adil bechain on May 25, 2011, 10:15:44 AM


                      ho alfaaz kam to churaa lete hain...!!
                      ghazal dusro.N ki apni banaa lete hain..!!!


                      cheen liya gurbati ne need aankho.N se ,
                      nigaaho.N ko khawaab ek dikhaa lete hain,


                      karti bahaar raham to manzar kuch aur hota,
                      sookhe phool se hi gesu sajaa lete hain,


                      chupana kuch bhi abb buss mein nahin apne,
                      bataa kar ise 'ashq' palko.N se hataa lete hain,

 
                      hai bachcha garib ka to gunahgaar hoga,
                      lagaa kar ilzaam 'bechain' use sataa lete hain.........!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2011, 04:30:28 AM »
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bahut khub adilji.... baidia....

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2011, 12:32:03 PM »
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bahut khub adilji.... baidia....

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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on May 25, 2011, 07:09:19 PM
good one

thank you manoj
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2011, 12:08:58 PM »
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Adil ji bahut hi khoobsoorat rachna .
mazaa aa gaya.
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Adil ji bahut hi khoobsoorat rachna .
mazaa aa gaya.
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«Reply #9 on: June 14, 2011, 12:52:05 PM »
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BechaiN sahaab Aadaab!

Janab kia kahne waah bahut khub ahsaas O khayaal
kahe hai aapne ... Usual Smile Kafi achche aur gehre ashaar
kahe hai janab... Usual Smile

Dil se daad hazir hai.. Usual Smile


Quote from: adil bechain on May 25, 2011, 10:15:44 AM


                      ho alfaaz kam to churaa lete hain...!!
                      ghazal dusro.N ki apni banaa lete hain..!!!

Ha ha ha h bahut shaiN janab daad daad daad Usual Smile
Gar yeH sher mazahiya section meiN aa jata to kam se kam khul kar has hi
lete ..  Giggle

                      cheen liya gurbati ne need aankho.N se ,
                      nigaaho.N ko khawaab ek dikhaa lete hain,


Waah janab waah kia baat hai bahut achcha sher kaha hai aapne aur behad gerhra bhi hai waah bahut khob daad daad daad Usual Smile Applause Applause Applause

                      karti bahaar raham to manzar kuch aur hota,
                      sookhe phool se hi gesu sajaa lete hain,

Kia baat hai janab waah bahut khoob achcha sher hai daad Usual Smile Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

                      chupana kuch bhi abb buss mein nahin apne,
                      bataa kar ise 'ashq' palko.N se hataa lete hain,

 
Kia kahne janab behad khoob ... dil ko lag gaya daad Usual Smile

                      hai bachcha garib ka to gunahgaar hoga,
                      lagaa kar ilzaam 'bechain' use sataa lete hain.........!!!!!

Waah waah waah janab Gazab behad gazab ... qatilaana sher kaha hai janab bahut khoob... Usual Smile HazaaroN daad hazir hai is umdaa soch par Usual Smile Applause Applause Applause


BechaiN sahab kia kaheN ab aap ki is umdaa kalaam par..
bus dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye...  Applause Applause Applause

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye.. Usual Smile
Mehdil ko roshan karte rahiye.. Usual Smile

Khuda Hafez Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2011, 09:02:36 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 25, 2011, 10:54:35 AM
Bahut bahut khooob Adilji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thank you khawaish ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 16, 2011, 10:53:44 AM »
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janab adil bechain saheb! Adab!

Aapke khayaalaat paRhe aur paRhte hi dil ko jo soojh gaya use yahaN darj kar raha hooN:

Hum aise chor haiN naghme chura hi lete haiN
Ghazal kisi ki ho apna bana hi lete haiN

Apni is kaawish par daad qubul kijiye.

(waquif ansari)

Quote from: adil bechain on May 25, 2011, 10:15:44 AM


                      ho alfaaz kam to churaa lete hain...!!
                      ghazal dusro.N ki apni banaa lete hain..!!!


                      cheen liya gurbati ne need aankho.N se ,
                      nigaaho.N ko khawaab ek dikhaa lete hain,


                      karti bahaar raham to manzar kuch aur hota,
                      sookhe phool se hi gesu sajaa lete hain,


                      chupana kuch bhi abb buss mein nahin apne,
                      bataa kar ise 'ashq' palko.N se hataa lete hain,

 
                      hai bachcha garib ka to gunahgaar hoga,
                      lagaa kar ilzaam 'bechain' use sataa lete hain.........!!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2011, 12:34:07 PM »
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Quote from: waquif ansari on June 16, 2011, 10:53:44 AM
janab adil bechain saheb! Adab!

Aapke khayaalaat paRhe aur paRhte hi dil ko jo soojh gaya use yahaN darj kar raha hooN:

Hum aise chor haiN naghme chura hi lete haiN
Ghazal kisi ki ho apna bana hi lete haiN

Apni is kaawish par daad qubul kijiye.

(waquif ansari)


thank you wauqif sahab
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Quote from: Shihab on June 13, 2011, 11:46:04 AM
Very Nice

Bahut Bahut Khub Adil Sahab


Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

shukriya shihab ji
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BechaiN sahaab Aadaab!

Janab kia kahne waah bahut khub ahsaas O khayaal
kahe hai aapne ... Usual Smile Kafi achche aur gehre ashaar
kahe hai janab... Usual Smile

Dil se daad hazir hai.. Usual Smile


BechaiN sahab kia kaheN ab aap ki is umdaa kalaam par..
bus dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye...  Applause Applause Applause

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye.. Usual Smile
Mehdil ko roshan karte rahiye.. Usual Smile

Khuda Hafez Usual Smile

SHUKRIA PARWAAZ SAHAB
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