~~"DARD-E-MUKAAM BAHUT"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on May 20, 2009, 08:08:47 AM
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Log kehte hai mere sanam ka dil hai nazuk bahut,
Jaane kaise phir wo meri aankhon ko dete hai anso bahut,

Mana ki mere shehar ke logo ko mohabbat nahi aati,
Par maine husn-e-yaar se qatl hote hue dekhe hai bahut,

Ae dilbhar tum to past ho gaye ho ishq-e-qadam se hi,
Aabhi to aayenge dard-e-mukam, ishq-e-raah me bahut,

Dil ke toot.ne ki aawaj koi sun hi nahi paata hai yahan,
Iss kadar bikhre pade hai duniya me aawajo ke saaj bahut,

Jao tum bhi bewafayi karke khush ho lo mujh se yaar,
Mein pathar hoo.n maine khaye hai pehle bhi dhokhe bahut,

Jinda rehte koi aaya na haal-e-bimaar poochne Shally,
Aab meri kabr pe aansoo bahane aate hai mere yaar bahut.

Shally.



             
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2009, 08:09:30 AM »
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AGAIN GUD ONE SHALLY JE.E.
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2009, 08:13:07 AM »
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waaah shally ji bohut khoob likha hai aapne really a gr8 work Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2009, 08:13:47 AM »
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Very Nice Shally Ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Issi Tarah Likhte Rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2009, 08:32:18 AM »
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Nawab ji,

Din-b-din aapki shayari nikharti jaa rahi hai ! Applause Applause Applause

Very nice ghazal Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2009, 10:23:01 AM »
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Shally dear bahut khoob  Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2009, 11:37:24 AM »
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superbbbbbbbb Yaar shally.... Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Gazal hai.. Lafzon Ko Behad Khubsoorati se sajaaya hai.. Yehi is gazal ki Khasiyat hai.. jo ise aur zyada Khubsoorat bana rahi hai.. Bahut Bahut khoooooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2009, 11:38:18 AM »
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Bahut khoob shally dear  Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2009, 11:52:02 AM »
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Shally!!! Kya kahoon yaar, your writing is touching the sky, MA. lage raho, lihte raho, khilte raho, khush raho, Aameen!

Gr8 Work Yaar!
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«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2009, 11:52:23 AM »
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keep it up yaar!
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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2009, 11:59:32 AM »
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Log kehte hai mere sanam ka dil hai nazuk bahut,
Jaane kaise phir wo meri aankhon ko dete hai anso bahut,

Mana ki mere shehar ke logo ko mohabbat nahi aati,
Par maine husn-e-yaar se qatl hote hue dekhe hai bahut,

Ae dilbhar tum to past ho gaye ho ishq-e-qadam se hi,
Aabhi to aayenge dard-e-mukam, ishq-e-raah me bahut,

Dil ke toot.ne ki aawaj koi sun hi nahi paata hai yahan,
Iss kadar bikhre pade hai duniya me aawajo ke saaj bahut,

Jao tum bhi bewafayi karke khush ho lo mujh se yaar,
Mein pathar hoo.n maine khaye hai pehle bhi dhokhe bahut,

Jinda rehte koi aaya na haal-e-bimaar poochne Shally,
Aab meri kabr pe aansoo bahane aate hai mere yaar bahut.

Shally.



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«Reply #11 on: May 20, 2009, 12:22:46 PM »
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Khubsurat Ghazal Shally Ji
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne
Kai din ke baad aapke is Dard-e-Mukaam ne mann moh liya-

ACHCHHA HUA KI DARD NE CHAUKA DIYA MUJHE
KUCHH NEEND AA CHALI THI SHAB-E-INTAZAR ME

SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #12 on: May 20, 2009, 12:24:43 PM »
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Khubsurat Ghazal Shally Ji
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne
Kai din ke baad aapke is Dard-e-Mukaam ne mann moh liya-

ACHCHHA HUA KI DARD NE CHAUKA DIYA MUJHE
KUCHH NEEND AA CHALI THI SHAB-E-INTAZAR ME

SARVESH RASTOGI

Nice lines Sarvesh Rastogi ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: May 20, 2009, 12:28:13 PM »
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bahut khoob sarvesh ji



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«Reply #14 on: May 20, 2009, 12:32:26 PM »
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SHUKRIYA ROJA JI
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