~~"DARD-E-MUKAAM BAHUT"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on May 20, 2009, 08:08:47 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 20, 2009, 12:33:40 PM »
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Quote from: javedarshad on May 20, 2009, 12:28:13 PM
bahut khoob sarvesh ji



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«Reply #16 on: May 20, 2009, 12:34:50 PM »
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Quote from: javedarshad on May 20, 2009, 12:28:13 PM
bahut khoob sarvesh ji



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«Reply #17 on: May 21, 2009, 05:45:00 AM »
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bahut khoob shally thanks for sharing with us keep up the wonderful work dear..

Quote from: k.shael on May 20, 2009, 08:08:47 AM
Log kehte hai mere sanam ka dil hai nazuk bahut,
Jaane kaise phir wo meri aankhon ko dete hai anso bahut,

Mana ki mere shehar ke logo ko mohabbat nahi aati,
Par maine husn-e-yaar se qatl hote hue dekhe hai bahut,

Ae dilbhar tum to past ho gaye ho ishq-e-qadam se hi,
Aabhi to aayenge dard-e-mukam, ishq-e-raah me bahut,

Dil ke toot.ne ki aawaj koi sun hi nahi paata hai yahan,
Iss kadar bikhre pade hai duniya me aawajo ke saaj bahut,

Jao tum bhi bewafayi karke khush ho lo mujh se yaar,
Mein pathar hoo.n maine khaye hai pehle bhi dhokhe bahut,

Jinda rehte koi aaya na haal-e-bimaar poochne Shally,
Aab meri kabr pe aansoo bahane aate hai mere yaar bahut.

Shally.
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«Reply #18 on: May 21, 2009, 05:47:18 AM »
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Ye Sharing hai Kya ?
By d way...bahot Khub Shally
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k.shael
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«Reply #19 on: May 21, 2009, 05:51:56 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on May 20, 2009, 08:09:30 AM
AGAIN GUD ONE SHALLY JE.E.

Shukriya Pandit Ji,

Apna keemti waqt dene ke liye.

Shally.
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«Reply #20 on: May 21, 2009, 05:52:39 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on May 20, 2009, 08:13:07 AM
waaah shally ji bohut khoob likha hai aapne really a gr8 work Applause

Shukriya Kaushik Dear,

Bahut dino baad aapko apne thread me dekhkar aacha laga.

Shally.
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«Reply #21 on: May 21, 2009, 05:55:25 AM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on May 20, 2009, 08:32:18 AM
Nawab ji,

Din-b-din aapki shayari nikharti jaa rahi hai ! Applause Applause Applause

Very nice ghazal Usual Smile

Shukriya Nawab Ji,

Aapka thread me aana aur use sarahna hi bahut badi baat hai.

Shally.
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«Reply #22 on: May 21, 2009, 05:56:45 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 20, 2009, 10:23:01 AM
Shally dear bahut khoob  Applause

Shukriya Roza didi,

Aap thread me aayi aur kaam ko saraha aacha laga.

Shally.
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«Reply #23 on: May 21, 2009, 05:59:31 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 20, 2009, 11:37:24 AM
superbbbbbbbb Yaar shally.... Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Gazal hai.. Lafzon Ko Behad Khubsoorati se sajaaya hai.. Yehi is gazal ki Khasiyat hai.. jo ise aur zyada Khubsoorat bana rahi hai.. Bahut Bahut khoooooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**


Shukriya Mann Ji, Aapki taarif ko dekhe ke liye to aankhein tarasti hai, aap ki taarif har shayar ko aur likhne par majboor karti hai..

Shally.
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«Reply #24 on: May 21, 2009, 06:00:15 AM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on May 20, 2009, 11:52:02 AM
Shally!!! Kya kahoon yaar, your writing is touching the sky, MA. lage raho, lihte raho, khilte raho, khush raho, Aameen!

Gr8 Work Yaar!

Shukriya Anjani Dear, Taarif aur duaon ke liye.

Shally.
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«Reply #25 on: May 21, 2009, 06:01:17 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 20, 2009, 12:22:46 PM
Khubsurat Ghazal Shally Ji
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne
Kai din ke baad aapke is Dard-e-Mukaam ne mann moh liya-

ACHCHHA HUA KI DARD NE CHAUKA DIYA MUJHE
KUCHH NEEND AA CHALI THI SHAB-E-INTAZAR ME

SARVESH RASTOGI

Shukriya Sarvesh Ji,

Sach kaha aapne kayi dino se mohabbat me likhne ke baad ek baar phir dard me likhakar sakoon mila,

Shally.
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«Reply #26 on: May 21, 2009, 06:02:22 AM »
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Quote from: Sonu on May 21, 2009, 05:45:00 AM
bahut khoob shally thanks for sharing with us keep up the wonderful work dear..


Shukriya Sonu Dear, Ki aapne meri likhi hui ghazal ko itna pasandh kiya.

Shally.
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«Reply #27 on: May 21, 2009, 06:03:09 AM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on May 21, 2009, 05:47:18 AM
Ye Sharing hai Kya ?
By d way...bahot Khub Shally

Shukriya Mohammed ji, Ye sharing nahi meri khud ki likhi hui ghazal hai.

Shally.
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«Reply #28 on: May 21, 2009, 06:21:27 AM »
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subhan allah shally , wah kya hi nayab ghazal likhi hai itne dinoo baad mai ghar lauta hon to zara sa masroof hon , jaise hi masrofiyath se nijaad milegi to inshallah khuch likhne ki koshish rahegi yoindia per !!allah tumhe khush rakhe apna qayal rakhna !!

Qadeer
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«Reply #29 on: May 21, 2009, 08:56:33 AM »
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Quote from: junaidqadir on May 21, 2009, 06:21:27 AM
subhan allah shally , wah kya hi nayab ghazal likhi hai itne dinoo baad mai ghar lauta hon to zara sa masroof hon , jaise hi masrofiyath se nijaad milegi to inshallah khuch likhne ki koshish rahegi yoindia per !!allah tumhe khush rakhe apna qayal rakhna !!

Qadeer

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Qadeer ji, aapne apna keemti waqt diya aur meri ghazal iss kadar saraha, aabhari ho aapki,

ji jaroor hame bhi intzaar rahega aapki likhi ghazals ko padne ka.

Shally.
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