~~"Dastan-e-Ishq Na Chupao"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on August 29, 2009, 11:17:19 AM
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Kya ho tum, aur kya hai wajood tumhara dikhao,
Gamo se ro-b-ro na sahi khud se to kabhi milwao,

Bhoode ho, jawan ho ya ho phir namurad aashik,
Mehfil-e-yaar me aake u dastaan-e-ishq na chupao,

Bahut bikhre pade hai phool ishq-e-raah me yaar,
Utha kar pyaar se kisi ek ko apni zindagi me sajao,

Maana ki shakl-o-surat se aache nahi dikhte ham,
Lekin dil se hamare ye duriyaan kyun inko to mitao,

Bematlab hi kyun uljhte ho duniya walon se tum,
Ho agar sach me khafa to mujhse jhagdne chale aao,

Laakh hasratein simti padi hai iss dil me Shally,
U julm na karo zara raj-e-dil tumhara hame bhi batao.

Shally.

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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2009, 11:23:17 AM »
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badhya badhya badhya likha hai shally

mana ki hum nahi shaamil teri yaro me
door se hi sahi salam ka jawab dete jao

aa jayege sab chod tere milne ki khatir
jhoot hi sahi mager ek bar to bulao

kabhi sapno me aao, kabhi raato ko jagao
kuch jeene ke waaaste apni yaade dete jao
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2009, 12:15:55 PM »
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bahut achche shally bahut achche
yeh do lines yaad aayi aapki ghazal pad kar yahan sab k saath share kar raha hoon pata nahin kis shayar kii hain

bikta na tha main pahle mera koi mol na tha
khareed kar tumne mujhe anmol kar diya
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2009, 12:31:06 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Shally Ji
Aapki ghazale badi attractive hoti hain
waah waah
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2009, 02:08:58 PM »
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Wah Wah Kya baat hai Shally.. Behad hi Khubsoorati Aur Jazzbaaton Ko Samete Hai aapki Yeh Gazal.. Ek ek Lafz Bakhoobi apne Mayane Bayan Kar raha Hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2009, 04:57:53 AM »
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badhya badhya badhya likha hai shally

mana ki hum nahi shaamil teri yaro me
door se hi sahi salam ka jawab dete jao

aa jayege sab chod tere milne ki khatir
jhoot hi sahi mager ek bar to bulao

kabhi sapno me aao, kabhi raato ko jagao
kuch jeene ke waaaste apni yaade dete jao

Shukriya Samnoj Ji...Aur Wah Kya khoob reply diya hai.. zald hi kuch likhne ki koshish hogi..

Shally.
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2009, 05:11:08 AM »
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Good work shally and samnoj ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 01, 2009, 08:21:34 AM »
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Kya ho tum, aur kya hai wajood tumhara dikhao,
Gamo se ro-b-ro na sahi khud se to kabhi milwao,


Bhoode ho, jawan ho ya ho phir namurad aashik,
Mehfil-e-yaar me aake u dastaan-e-ishq na chupao,

Bahut bikhre pade hai phool raah-e-ishq me yaar,
Utha kar pyaar se kisi ek ko apni zindagi me sajao,


Maana ki shakl-o-surat se aache nahi dikhte ham,
Lekin dil se hamare ye duriyaan kyun inko to mitao,

Bematlab hi kyun uljhte ho duniya walon se tum,
Ho agar sach me khafa to mujhse jhagdne chale aao,

Laakh hasratein simti padi hai iss dil me Shally,
U julm na karo zara raj-e-dil tumhara hame bhi batao.

Shally.



Shally ji! Aapkee yah gazal aur bhee surkhuroo ho kar peish huyee hai! Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #8 on: September 01, 2009, 10:26:00 AM »
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Kya ho tum, aur kya hai wajood tumhara dikhao,
Gamo se ro-b-ro na sahi khud se to kabhi milwao,

Bhoode ho, jawan ho ya ho phir namurad aashik,
Mehfil-e-yaar me aake u dastaan-e-ishq na chupao,

Bahut bikhre pade hai phool ishq-e-raah me yaar,
Utha kar pyaar se kisi ek ko apni zindagi me sajao,

Maana ki shakl-o-surat se aache nahi dikhte ham,
Lekin dil se hamare ye duriyaan kyun inko to mitao,

Bematlab hi kyun uljhte ho duniya walon se tum,
Ho agar sach me khafa to mujhse jhagdne chale aao,

Laakh hasratein simti padi hai iss dil me Shally,
U julm na karo zara raj-e-dil tumhara hame bhi batao.

Shally.



Khoob!! bohot khoob shally ji, "Bhoode ho, jawan ho ya ho phir namurad aashiq" ha..ha..ha.. allah kare zor-e-sukhan or zayada..



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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2009, 10:28:09 AM »
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badhya badhya badhya likha hai shally

mana ki hum nahi shaamil teri yaro me
door se hi sahi salam ka jawab dete jao

aa jayege sab chod tere milne ki khatir
jhoot hi sahi mager ek bar to bulao

kabhi sapno me aao, kabhi raato ko jagao
kuch jeene ke waaaste apni yaade dete jao

Waah.. Waah.. Waah.. bohot khoob samnoj ji.
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«Reply #10 on: September 01, 2009, 10:35:37 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Shally ji ,Sanmoj ji,Saahil ji.very beautiful gazal.
wonderful creation.excellent. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: January 07, 2010, 06:35:21 AM »
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Kya ho tum, aur kya hai wajood tumhara dikhao,
Gamo se ro-b-ro na sahi khud se to kabhi milwao,

Bhoode ho, jawan ho ya ho phir namurad aashik,
Mehfil-e-yaar me aake u dastaan-e-ishq na chupao,

Bahut bikhre pade hai phool ishq-e-raah me yaar,
Utha kar pyaar se kisi ek ko apni zindagi me sajao,

Maana ki shakl-o-surat se aache nahi dikhte ham,
Lekin dil se hamare ye duriyaan kyun inko to mitao,

Bematlab hi kyun uljhte ho duniya walon se tum,
Ho agar sach me khafa to mujhse jhagdne chale aao,

Laakh hasratein simti padi hai iss dil me Shally,
U julm na karo zara raj-e-dil tumhara hame bhi batao.

Shally.



Very good one Shally Ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 07, 2010, 06:45:09 AM »
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Wah wah wah Shally Ji kya hi khoob andaaz mein likha hai. Bahut achhi ghazal hai ye. Faraz sahab ke do sher arz hain :

Suna hai Log use Ankh bhar ke dekhte hain
So us ke sheher main kuch din theher ke dekhte hain

Suna hai Bole to baton se phool jharte hain
Ye baat hai to chalo baat kar k dekhte hain
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«Reply #13 on: January 07, 2010, 11:54:04 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Riyaz ji.lovely lines.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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