DAWAA - E - DARD - E - DIL ................... HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: November 14, 2012, 05:52:06 PM »
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Na  samjhay , Rizq-e-aasaaN  ho  jahaN  , Khatray  bhi  hote  haiN ,
Parinday , zadd  meiN  SaiyaadoN  ki , anjaane  meiN  jaa  baithhe


Waah Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: November 15, 2012, 04:29:38 AM »
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 CORRIGENDUM:
 Ghazal  ke 3rd sher mein Qafiya 'Afsaane' hai jo ghalti se 'AfsaanoN'
type ho gaya thha . Doston se muazrat khwaah hoon . Parwaz  saheb  aur
Arish saheb ka mashkoor hooon jinhon ne yeh ghalti point out kee .
                                                         - HASAN
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«Reply #17 on: November 15, 2012, 06:10:27 AM »
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on November 14, 2012, 05:49:29 AM
Achhi ghazal kahi hai Siddiqui sahab.
Riyaz  saheb  ,  Hausla  afzai  ke  liye 
bahut  shukriya . Duago , Hasan
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«Reply #18 on: November 15, 2012, 07:22:09 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on November 14, 2012, 05:53:59 AM
kya baat hai sir wah wah wah aur sirf wah hi kehna chahunga. kyunki sabhi alfaz chote lagte aapki tareeef ke liye. bas yuNhi likhte rahiye.

Azizi  Arish . Aapke  mohabbat  bhare  alfaaz 
ke  liye  bahut  bahut shukriya  aur  duaaein  .
Yunhi  hausla  dete  rahiye . Hasan
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«Reply #19 on: November 15, 2012, 07:28:35 AM »
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lajawaab, bas is ghazal ko padh kar laga hum kisi aur zamaane mein jaa baithe, bahut ahcha, par maqta mujhe haasil-e-ghazal laga, bas yuNhi alfaazon ki rangeeniyan aur khayalon ki udaan se bazm ko chaar chaand lagaate raheN...
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«Reply #20 on: November 15, 2012, 08:47:46 AM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on November 14, 2012, 06:27:35 AM
Bohat Bohat Khub!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Hausla afzaike liye bahut mamnoon hoon , Shireen ji. Duago,Hasan
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«Reply #21 on: November 15, 2012, 05:14:10 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on November 14, 2012, 06:34:08 AM
bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
nandji , bahut  shukriya . khush  rahye .
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«Reply #22 on: November 16, 2012, 02:14:45 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob hasan sb  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: November 16, 2012, 06:52:01 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on November 14, 2012, 06:51:14 AM
waah hasan,sahab laaajawaab... Applause Applause Applause Applause
SAHAL JI , BAHUT  MASHKOOR  HOON .
SATH  DETE  RAHYE GA . DUAGO , HASAN
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«Reply #24 on: November 16, 2012, 09:24:36 AM »
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Quote from: qalb on November 14, 2012, 08:27:21 AM

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10 rau bhee kammm hai iss ghazal ko

 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
BAHUT  SHUKRIYA  , QALB  SAHEB .  AAP KE  KHULOOS  KE  
DO LAFZ MERE  LIYE  10  RAU  SE  ZYADA  QEEMTI  HAIN . HASAN
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«Reply #25 on: November 16, 2012, 09:46:52 AM »
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khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #26 on: November 16, 2012, 01:18:25 PM »
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Quote from: zarraa on November 14, 2012, 09:42:49 AM
hassaan sahab ... aadaab ..... ... waqai, apki ghazal ki jitni taareef ki jaaye, kam hai .... har sher kamaal ka hai .... khaas taur se 5th aur 6th sher to baar baar parhta gaya aur har baar utna hi lutf aaya ....apko is khoobsurat, rawaan aur dilchasp ghazal par meri or se dheron daad aur mubarakbaad .... dua ke saath ..... zarraa
Zarra   saheb  , Bahut   mashkoor  hoon  ki  aap  ne  ghazal  ko  itni dilchaspi  se  parha  aur  saraaha . Aap  jaise  sukhanwar  se  daad-e-tahseen  paana  ain khush-qismati samajhta hoon .  
                Khair andesh,Hasan
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«Reply #27 on: November 16, 2012, 03:38:24 PM »
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Quote from: shara63 on November 14, 2012, 11:05:13 AM
bahut khoob...fasane bhi aur bahane bhi!  Applause  Thumbs UP
Is  pyaare  se  comment  ke  liye  bahut  shukriya . Hasan
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«Reply #28 on: November 17, 2012, 05:11:27 AM »
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Bahut  bahut  shukriya  , Parwaaz  saheb ,
ghazal  parhne   aur  pasand  karne  ka ...
Aap  ne  sahi  point out kiya   hai , 3rd  sheir
mein  Qafiya  jaldbazi  mein  ghalat   type  ho  
gaya  thha  . Main  ne  tas'heeh  kar  dee  hai.  
                      Duago , Hasan [
Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 14, 2012, 11:10:41 AM
Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


WaaH sahaab waaH kia rawaaN dawaaN aur umdaa gazal ka inteqab kiya hai
behad pur asar aur pur soze lafzoN meiN umdaa gazal kahi hai... Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar kafi gehraai aur umdaa fikr liye haiN Sahaab ,
Meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #29 on: November 17, 2012, 09:57:04 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 14, 2012, 11:35:19 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob sir lafz nahi hai kuch kehne ke liye aaj ka hamara rau apka hua

bahut  shukriya ,  aqsh ji . khush  rahye  .  duago , Hasan
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