dayaar e ghair jaane wala,,,,ghazal,,jeet jainam saini

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haste huye shaks  kaa gam koee samjh nahee pataa,
dayaar e ghair  jaane walaa  lout kar nahee aata,

nami see dekhee sabaa main  jab aayee roo ba roo,
kon saa hai  raaz e gulshan ye  samjh nahee aata,

bhawra phool  par nahee  aaya  eysa kiya hua hai,
woh ahd e waffa  kiyon  bhoola  samjh nahee aata,

kon apna hai kon paraaya hai  jaan nahi pate hum,
charaagh-e-dayaar-e-Habeeb apna samjh nahee aata,

baat baat par atakna uska kuch to chupta tha jeet,
kaisi thee uski andaaz-e-guftgoo samjh nahee aata,
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2015, 07:30:14 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2015, 08:12:57 PM »
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haste huye shaks  kaa gam koee samjh nahee pataa,
dayaar e ghair  jaane walaa  lout kar nahee aata,

nami see dekhee sabaa main  jab aayee roo ba roo,
kon saa hai  raaz e gulshan ye  samjh nahee aata,

bhawra phool  par nahee  aaya  eysa kiya hua hai,
woh ahd e waffa  kiyon  bhoola  samjh nahee aata,

kon apna hai kon paraaya hai  jaan nahi pate hum,
charaagh-e-dayaar-e-Habeeb apna samjh nahee aata,

baat baat par atakna uska kuch to chupta tha jeet,
kaisi thee uski andaaz-e-guftgoo samjh nahee aata,



kaisa tha uskaa andaaz-e-guftagu samjh nahin aataa icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2015, 02:21:54 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2015, 06:03:53 AM »
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बहुत खूब......

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«Reply #7 on: June 26, 2015, 09:19:33 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2015, 03:39:20 PM »
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kon apna hai kon paraaya hai  jaan nahi pate hum,
charaagh-e-dayaar-e-Habeeb apna samjh nahee aata,
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sabhi ashhar bahut khoob rahe jeet ji..
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bohat shukriya surinder sir ji
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shukriya saini sir ji
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