Deedar-e-yaar (Ghazal)

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 02, 2011, 04:32:49 AM
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Aap ko  Hum se Pyaar Ho Jaaye,
Zindagi Khush-gawaar Ho Jaaye

Chaa.nd Dekhe Zamana Guzra Hai,
Kaash  Deedar-e-Yaar Ho Jaaye

Wo Pa'ye Fa'tiha jo Aa Jaayei.n ,
Zinda  Meri  Mazaar Ho Jaaye

Unko Apna Samajh ke Choom Saku.n,
Kaash  Ye Akhtiyaar  Ho  Jaaye

Pal mei.n Badle Nizaam-e-Zeest Agar,
Hukm-e-Parwardigaar  Ho  Jaaye

Dil pe Lag Hee Gaya Hai Teer 'Hasan' ,
Ab Wo Nikle ki Paar Ho Jaaye
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2011, 04:51:31 AM »
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Aadaab janab Siddiqui Sahaab!

Kia umdaa kalaam pesh ki hai behad khoob..
Pur asar aur purlutf kalaam par dil se daad
o mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Aate rahiye
Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2011, 05:15:02 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 02, 2011, 04:32:49 AM
Aap ko  Hum se Pyaar Ho Jaaye,
Zindagi Khush-gawaar Ho Jaaye

Chaa.nd Dekhe Zamana Guzra Hai,
Kaash  Deedar-e-Yaar Ho Jaaye

Wo Pa'ye Fa'tiha jo Aa Jaayei.n ,
Zinda  Meri  Mazaar Ho Jaaye

Unko Apna Samajh ke Choom Saku.n,
Kaash  Ye Akhtiyaar  Ho  Jaaye

Pal mei.n Badle Nizaam-e-Zeest Agar,
Hukm-e-Parwardigaar  Ho  Jaaye

Dil pe Lag Hee Gaya Hai Teer 'Hasan' ,
Ab Wo Nikle ki Paar Ho Jaaye


bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2011, 06:14:53 AM »
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Kya khub ..Kya Khub
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2011, 06:25:09 AM »
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Nice.. F.H Ji..

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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2011, 01:32:34 PM »
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wah ………
umda ghazal
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«Reply #6 on: May 04, 2011, 08:31:08 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Janaab!!!

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«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2011, 04:04:36 PM »
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Janab Parwaz Saheb,Adil Bechain Sb,asiqu ji,SKY ji,KB ji, Khwaish ji.Aap sab ki hausla afzai ke liye dil se mamnoon hoon...Hasan
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«Reply #8 on: June 05, 2011, 01:24:11 PM »
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BAHUT DAMDAAR GHAZAL JANAAB HASAN SB



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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2011, 09:25:45 AM »
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khamosh awaaz ji, bahut bahut shukriya.Hasan
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«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2011, 09:40:44 AM »
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siddiqui sahab aadab ,,

wah wah kya hi khoob ghazal kahi hai bhai .. wah wah ... dad behad o hisab .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #11 on: June 07, 2011, 08:57:56 AM »
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Qadeer saheb,Itne Khoobsurat alfaaz mei.n daad aur nek khwahishat ke liye behad mamnoon hoo.n. Aayenda bhi apni garaa.nqadr rai se nawaazte rahiyega,ye guzaarish hai. Naacheez,FHSiddiqui
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«Reply #12 on: June 07, 2011, 10:51:41 AM »
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wah wah wah wahhhhh kitni nishaatangez ghazal kahi hai janab siddiqui saheb aapne, zindabaad, zindabaad, zindabaad, maza aa gaya ise paRhkar aur aapki ye ghazal dil ko baar baar paRhne pe uksaati hai. Shuru se aakhir tak mujassam husn hi husn hai aapke kalaam meiN. Aik munfarid aur laazawaal peshkash jiska har aik sher waqai teer-ba-hadaf hai. Ise kahte haiN sahrbayaani, zubaan-o-bayaan ki jaadugari. Is hassen-o-jameel ghazal ko paRhte hi barjasta dil se ye kuchh jumle nikal paRe:

Tum pe gar ikhtiyaar ho jaaye
Umr saari bahaar ho jaaye

Chal gaya hai tumhaari aaNkh se jo
Teer wo dil ke paar ho jaaye

Chaahta hooN k dil pe zakhm lage
AUR dil beqaraar ho jaaye

Muntazir hooN maiN jis tarah se mira
Muntazar mera yaar ho jaaye

Nihaayat dilkash, purlutf, murassa, munfarid ghazal k liye dili mubarakbaad k saath saath hazaroN daad qubul kijiye.

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«Reply #13 on: June 08, 2011, 11:57:32 AM »
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Janaab Waquif Ansari Saheb,Iss gumshuda aur lagbhag faraamosh ki jaa chuki ghazal per aap ka tabsira - wo bhi itne khoobsoorat alfaaz mei.n jinka mai.n haqdaar nahee.n - paRh kar ThoRi der ko mai.n bhi apne ko shaair samajhne laga aur fart-e-musarrat se ye tukbandi ho rahi hai jo Jawaaban haazir hai:
 She'ri kaavish ko hukm-e-saad mile,
 Dil se  Maa.ngi  hui  Muraad  mile,
 Eik  Shaair  ko  eik  Shaair  se,
 Jab Zubaan-e-Ghazal mei.n Daad mile.
     Aap ke khuloos ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriya .
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«Reply #14 on: June 08, 2011, 12:14:34 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob F.H.Siddiqui ji.very touching n great creation.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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