Deewar se lag kar rotey rahe, samjhane kahan jaatey

by livingbytheday on June 23, 2012, 05:21:31 PM
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Deewar se lag kar rotey rahe, samjhane kahan jaatey
Dil mein kitna dard utha tha, batlaane kahan jaatey

Duniya ne bachaye rakha hain, kisso mein sajakar ke
Warna yeh mohabatt ke saare, afsaane kahan jaatey

khushiyon mein chhupkar ke, gham bhi ghar aatey hain
Mehfil hi agar hoti duniya, toh veerane kahan jaatey

Acha hi hua ki nikla koi, apno mein begaana bhi
Apne hi agar hotey saare, toh begaane kahan jaatey

Ek raat mohabatt mein, jal jana muqaddar hain
Shamma jo nahi hoti toh parwaane kahan jaatey

Theek hua ki dil mein ek khamosh sa samsaan tha
khawabo ke lasho ko warna dafnaane kahan jatey
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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2012, 06:19:09 PM »
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wwaaaah waaaah waaaah !!
lajwaab
boohooot khoob Applause Applause

dheeerooon daad
boohoot umda
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2012, 07:07:33 PM »
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Deepak Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab, bade hi khoobsurat khayaalaat kahe haiN ..
sabhi ashaar behad achche rahe... Usual Smile

humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #3 on: June 24, 2012, 12:19:50 AM »
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wah bahut hi accha laga padkar  Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 24, 2012, 12:59:44 AM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2012, 01:57:29 AM »
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bahut acche
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chalo bhai, is baat par ek rau haazir hai
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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2012, 04:59:10 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: June 24, 2012, 11:38:45 AM »
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Quote from: roy on June 23, 2012, 06:19:09 PM
wwaaaah waaaah waaaah !!
lajwaab
boohooot khoob Applause Applause

dheeerooon daad
boohoot umda

bahut bahut shukriyaa
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«Reply #9 on: June 24, 2012, 11:40:11 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on June 23, 2012, 07:07:33 PM
Deepak Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab, bade hi khoobsurat khayaalaat kahe haiN ..
sabhi ashaar behad achche rahe... Usual Smile

humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


thank you parwaaz sahab
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«Reply #10 on: June 24, 2012, 11:41:06 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on June 24, 2012, 12:19:50 AM
wah bahut hi accha laga padkar  Applause Applause

thank you sumanji
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2012, 03:41:15 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut sundar rachna Deepak ji.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2012, 03:57:25 PM »
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bahut khub bahut hi badhiya lajawab likha hai aapne deepak ji..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 24, 2012, 12:59:44 AM
beautiful

bahut shukriyaa sir
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Quote from: shaukeen on June 24, 2012, 01:57:29 AM
bahut acche

shukriyaa sir
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