DEKH KAR HUM KO CHHUP GAYA KOI ..................HASAN

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Ho    gaee    jaise   ho    khata    koi  ,
Dekh   kar   Humko    chhup   gaya   koi


Jaan   paaye   na  tujh ko  hum  JaanaaN  ,
Hai   Paree   ,  Hoor   ya   Balaa   koi


Kub se   phirta  hoon   Shahr  meiN  tanhaa  ,
Kaash    mil    jaaye     Aashna     koi


Kaise   tanhaa   yeh    Zindagi    guzray  ,
Koi    Dilbar    ho   ,  Dilrubaa    koi


Uss ko  samjhay   hai   koi   bus   Patthar ,
Aur     jaanay     hai     Devta     koi


Thhaan   lee   hai   ki   abb  HaseenoN   se ,
Hum  na   rakkheiN   ge    waasta    koi


Kis   liye   haiN  'Hasan'  pe   itne   Sitam ?
Kya   woh    lagta   hai    Aapka    koi ?







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Aashna = jaan pehchaan waala  ;  Waasta = relationhip / concern
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2012, 05:34:41 AM »
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bahut hee pyaaree aur seedhee saadee ghazal beshumaar daad aur ek rau isliye ki "saini bhee lagtaa hai aapkaa koi"
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2012, 05:57:40 AM »
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Aadaab Sir
Man to kar raha hai ki kuch kahun,,par nahi..kahne me vo majaa nahi jo padhne me hai is ghajal ko..har kisi ke chehre pe khud ba khud muskarahat aa jaayegi..
nirala andaaj hai aapka..
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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2012, 07:48:59 AM »
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SIdiqqui sir


Bahut Bahut  khoob lajwaab peshkash


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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2012, 10:02:21 AM »
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waah
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2012, 02:26:10 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Hasan ji....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2012, 04:35:32 PM »
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 Applause Applause Bahut Khoob Hasan Saheb.
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2012, 04:56:56 PM »
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Ho    gaee    jaise   ho    khata    koi  ,
Dekh   kar   Humko    chhup   gaya   koi


Jaan   paaye   na  tujh ko  hum  JaanaaN  ,
Hai   Paree   ,  Hoor   ya   Balaa   koi


Kub se   phirta  hoon   Shahr  meiN  tanhaa  ,
Kaash    mil    jaaye     Aashna     koi


Kaise   tanhaa   yeh    Zindagi    guzray  ,
Koi    Dilbar    ho   ,  Dilrubaa    koi


Uss ko  samjhay   hai   koi   bus   Patthar ,
Aur     jaanay     hai     Devta     koi


Thhaan   lee   hai   ki   abb  HaseenoN   se ,
Hum  na   rakkheiN   ge    waasta    koi


Kis   liye   haiN  'Hasan'  pe   itne   Sitam ?
Kya   woh    lagta   hai    Aapka    koi ?







...............
Aashna = jaan pehchaan waala  ;  Waasta = relationhip / concern


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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2012, 05:41:05 PM »
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siddiqui sahab,
   lajawab gazal par daad kabool keejiye
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2012, 07:33:30 PM »
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good one

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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2012, 03:39:03 AM »
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bahut khub hasanji
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2012, 04:43:01 AM »
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bahut hee pyaaree aur seedhee saadee ghazal beshumaar daad aur ek rau isliye ki "saini bhee lagtaa hai aapkaa koi"
SHUKRIYA  BHAI . KHUSH  RAHIYE . HASAN
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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2012, 04:59:25 AM »
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waah...waah.. Hasan Ji bahut hi umda
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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2012, 05:03:16 AM »
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bahut khoob...

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