dekhta hoon ab teri

by saahill on March 14, 2011, 04:10:05 PM
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lagaai hai aag jo bewafai ki mere seene mein har pal sulagti hai.
Dekhta hoon ab teri tasveer bhi to ajnabi si lagti hai,

saansein meri chalti thi bas tumko hi dekhkar .haseen ho jati thi jindagi tumein sochkar .
Kya kahoon bin tere ab jeena jaise khudkushi si lagti hai . 

Tujko apna maan liya tha .khawab ankhon mein basa liya tha .samj liya tha haqeeqat jisko ab toote khawab jaisi lagti hai.

Yadon ko kaise bhulaun tere likhe khat kaise jalaun . Ek ek dadhkan mein basi  ho kis kis shaye se dhoor main jaun  ab to meri dunya hi luti luti si lagti hai
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lagaai hai aag jo bewafai ki mere seene mein har pal sulagti hai.
Dekhta hoon ab teri tasveer bhi to ajnabi si lagti hai,

saansein meri chalti thi bas tumko hi dekhkar .haseen ho jati thi jindagi tumein sochkar .
Kya kahoon bin tere ab jeena jaise khudkushi si lagti hai . 

Tujko apna maan liya tha .khawab ankhon mein basa liya tha .samj liya tha haqeeqat jisko ab toote khawab jaisi lagti hai.

Yadon ko kaise bhulaun tere likhe khat kaise jalaun . Ek ek dadhkan mein basi  ho kis kis shaye se dhoor main jaun  ab to meri dunya hi luti luti si lagti hai
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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2011, 05:45:09 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob...

Ak suggestion dena chahungi... If you dont mind..

Shayari.. mea Bhavo ko matlab Feelings ko jitna kam sabdo mea kaho utna khoobsoorat lagta hai...

matbal pehli line aur dusri line ke sabdo ke mutabik ho.. laughing4)

But overall Very Good Attempt !!!
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