denge wahi jo payenge zindgi se hum

by soudagar on April 12, 2012, 03:31:52 PM
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Tang aa chuke hain kashmokash e zindagi se hum
Thukara na dein jahan ko kahin bedili se hum

Mayusi e ma`al e mohabbat na puchiye
apno se pesh aye hain began gi se hum

Lo aaj humne tod diya rishta e ummid
lo ab kabhi gila na karenge kisi se hum

Ubharenge ek bar abhi dil ke walwale
jo dab gaye hain bhar e Gam e zindagi se hum

Gar zindagi mein mil gaye phir ittefaq se
puchhenge apna haal teri bebasi se hum

har apne chahne wale ko kareeb se samjha hai aj tak
isliye duniya ke zulm sahte rahe Khamoshi se hum

Hum Gam zada hain laye kahan se Khushi ke geet
denge wahi jo payenge is zindagi se hum
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«Reply #1 on: April 12, 2012, 04:50:34 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: April 12, 2012, 04:54:39 PM »
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nice soudagarji...
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«Reply #3 on: April 12, 2012, 06:15:17 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 12, 2012, 08:11:01 PM »
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awwweeesome.....
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«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2012, 08:54:38 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2012, 09:38:32 AM »
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Soudagar saheb, Bahut achhi ghazal hai. Padhe  aur sune hue  ashaar   hain .
Kya  yeh  aap  ki  ghazal  hai ?  Ho  sakta  hai  maine  aap  ke  naam se
hi  padhi  ho . Agar  nahin  , to  Yoindia  Shayariadab  ke  usulon  ke
mutaabiq  is  mein  shaair  ka  naam  dena  chahiye  ya  NM  ( Not Mine ).
Ummeed  hai  ki  aap  mere  sawaal  ka  bura  nahi  maaneinge. Hasan
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«Reply #7 on: April 16, 2012, 09:10:52 AM »
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Saudagar Saheb itni umda ghazal ke liye mubarakvad, lekin ye ghazal badi purani aur jani pahchani hai.  Old film Light House and useke baad Pyasa me bhi aisi hi ghazal thi jo Sahir Ludhianavi saheb ki likhi thi.  Meharbani karke position clear karen. Hame aapke zor-e-kalam per wakai bada yakeen hai.
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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2012, 09:13:17 AM »
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Soudagr saheb Bahut badhiya ghazal ki peshkash hai
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