Derr:Ghazals

Derr

by faisal314 on June 16, 2009, 11:46:11 AM

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faisal314

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Kurbet nay ous key dil ko shaad keya hay
Fasila ger koi aaya, tou phir keya ho ga?

Suna rishta ous say apna nazuk bera hay
Ger bandhan yeh tout geya, tou phir keya ho ga?

Besanay ko isay, seb kuch ujaar deya hum nain
Aasheyana yeh ager chout geya, tou phir keya ho ga?

Kyon howay thay bedgumaan itnay, kyun keha tha?
Ager tu hum say rout geya, tou phir keya ho ga?

Khaila hey ies dil say wo sakhs kuch ies terha
Ab koi aur khail geya, tou phir keya ho ga?

Mujh say poucha na kero tum mohabbat key wejah
Batana zera, koi sans na lay, tou phir keya ho ga?

Ek anjana khauf satata tha usay, her waqt KHAKI
Her baat main ketha tha, youn howa, tou phir keya ho ga?


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Talat

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Re: Derr

«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2009, 01:12:20 PM »

Bohot Khoob Faisal Ji

ye sher bohot achcha laga

Mujh say poucha na kero tum mohabbat key wejah
Batana zera, koi sans na lay, tou phir keya ho ga?


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faisal314

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Re: Derr

«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2009, 01:14:24 PM »

Thx calmira, I personally liked it as well.


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salil2002

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Re: Derr

«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2009, 01:39:15 PM »

gud one faisal bhai bahut achcha likha hai


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_Vicky_

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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2009, 06:06:56 PM »

Faisal Saheb Lajawab Gazal Likhi hai Dost.. Pahali baar aaj aapko Padha hai.. par Padh Kar Bahut accha laga.. Bahut Khubsoorati se aapne alfaazon ko sajaaya hai.. Really Great.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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faisal314

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Re: Derr

«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2009, 04:04:44 PM »

Thx,, you can search my previous ghazals here if you wish too .thx.


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