Dharti Maa

by suman59 on July 25, 2012, 05:45:33 AM
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sachmuch sab ki mata dharti
Apni bhagya-vidhata dharti

Loot raha hai kiski asmat
Manav samajh na pata dharti

Kaash kahi tum mil jaati toh
Apna dard sunata dharti

Tum mein hi to kho jaana hai
Tujhse aisa nata dharti

Tum ho maa se badkar sabki
Rishta vohi suhata dharti

Nadi, hawa ke sang ye parvat
Geet tumhare gaata dharti

Ujad raha hariyala-aanchal
Lalach hi uksaata dharti

Maa ke bad naam juba.n pe
Bar-Bar bas aata dharti..



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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2012, 06:09:37 AM »
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bahut hee khoobsoorat rachnaa dheron daad aur badhaai
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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2012, 08:21:08 AM »
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bahut hee umda khyal hai, sumanjee. dheron daad.
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2012, 09:59:57 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob Suman ji....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2012, 10:01:57 AM »
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sachmuch sab ki mata dharti
Apni bhagya-vidhata dharti

Loot raha hai kiski asmat
Manav samajh na pata dharti

Kaash kahi tum mil jaati toh
Apna dard suhata dharti

Tum mein hi to kho jaana hai
Tujhse aisa nata dharti

Tum ho maa se badkar sabki
Rishta vohi suhana dharti

Nadi, hawa ke sang ye parvat
Geet tumhare gaata dharti

Ujad raha hariyala-aanchal
Lalach hi uksaata dharti

Maa ke bad naam juba.n pe
Bar-Bar bas aata dharti..



Bahut bahut hi khubsoorat nazm hai ye suman ji aap ki dheron Daad aur mubarakbaad qabool kariye....
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«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2012, 11:39:05 PM »
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bahot achi kavita
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«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2012, 12:18:13 AM »
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very nice....
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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2012, 01:37:13 AM »
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aunty bahut khub bahut hi khubsurat kavita likhi aapne...... dhero daad aur mubarakbad aapke liye.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2012, 03:04:45 AM »
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Bahut khoob Applause

kalaam accha hai, ehsaas bhi acche hai, bayaanee bhi

sabki yahi khwaish honi bhi chahiye.

par ye sab aadarsh baate hai. door kee. (includes exceptions)
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«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2012, 03:22:43 AM »
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Bahut Sunder Khyaal Aur ehsas Suman Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2012, 07:22:56 AM »
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sachmuch sab ki mata dharti
Apni bhagya-vidhata dharti

Loot raha hai kiski asmat
Manav samajh na pata dharti

Kaash kahi tum mil jaati toh
Apna dard sunata dharti

Tum mein hi to kho jaana hai
Tujhse aisa nata dharti

Tum ho maa se badkar sabki
Rishta vohi suhata dharti

Nadi, hawa ke sang ye parvat
Geet tumhare gaata dharti

Ujad raha hariyala-aanchal
Lalach hi uksaata dharti

Maa ke bad naam juba.n pe
Bar-Bar bas aata dharti..





naaaaaaaaice
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«Reply #11 on: July 28, 2012, 12:25:12 AM »
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bahut hee khoobsoorat rachnaa dheron daad aur badhaai

thank you saini jee, aap hamare saat diya isliye yeh rachna itni khoobsurat ban gayee. thank you onceagain
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«Reply #12 on: July 28, 2012, 12:25:39 AM »
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bahut hee umda khyal hai, sumanjee. dheron daad.

tks anand jee
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«Reply #13 on: July 28, 2012, 12:26:10 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob Suman ji....!!!

thank you Heart jee
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«Reply #14 on: July 28, 2012, 12:26:58 AM »
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Bahut bahut hi khubsoorat nazm hai ye suman ji aap ki dheron Daad aur mubarakbaad qabool kariye....

thank you Pankaj jee
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