dhuan dhuan shaam.....................saru..............131

by SURESH SANGWAN on November 07, 2014, 06:10:23 PM
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ज़िंदगी  धुआँ -धुआँ  शाम  सी  लगती है
हर  बात  खास  मुझे आम सी  लगती है

तन्हाइयों  के  घर  मुझे  छोड़  गया  वो
रोशनी  भी  अब  गुमनाम  सी  लगती है

बहका हुआ सा था मिली जिस किसी से में
ज़िंदगी  या -रब  ये  जाम  सी लगती है

कामयाबी  देखती  है  दौलत  हर  सिम्त
मुहब्बत  अब मुझे नाकाम  सी  लगती है

खाते  हैं  लोग  ख़ौफ़  नाम  से  इसके
उल्फ़त  इस क़दर बदनाम  सी लगती है

हुये  तीनों  लोको  के दर्शन  यहीं मुझको
गृहस्थी ही  अब चारों  धाम सी लगती है

चल दे जिधर 'सरु' रुख़ उधर ही हो जाए
हवाएँ  भी  उसी की  ग़ुलाम सी लगती है







Zindagi dhuan dhuan sham si lagti hai
Har baat khas mujhe aam si lagti hai

TanhaiyoN ke ghar mujhe chhor gaya vo
Roshni bhi ab gumnaam si lagti hai

Behka hua sat ha mili jis kisi se meiN
Zindagi ya-rab ye jam si lagti hai

Kamyaabi dekhti hai daulat har simt
Mohabbat ab mujhe nakaam si lagti hai

Khate hain log khauf naam se iske
Ulfat iss qadar badnaam si lagti hai

Huye teenoN loko darshan yahiN mujhko
Grihsthi hi ab charoN dham si lagti hai

Chal de jidhar ‘saru’ rukh udhar hi ho jaye
Hawayen bhi usi ki gulaam si lagti hai
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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2014, 06:18:22 PM »
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Kya baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat hai,,,,,bahut khoob.
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thaaaanks a lott Ravi ji.....
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«Reply #3 on: November 07, 2014, 07:45:12 PM »
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bahot umdaa...
dheron daad.....
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dheron daad.....
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2014, 08:45:24 PM »
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waah waah waaaaaaH Suresh Jee nihaayat umdah, dheron daad Rau ke saath.
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2014, 01:32:41 AM »
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हुये  तीनों  लोको  के दर्शन  यहीं मुझको
गृहस्थी ही  अब चारों  धाम सी लगती है

is sher par ek rau
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2014, 04:32:26 AM »
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Grihsthi hi ab charoN dham si lagti hai


kya baat hai bahut bahut umda..... ek rau ke sath

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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........surindarn  ji.

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waah waah waaaaaaH Suresh Jee nihaayat umdah, dheron daad Rau ke saath.
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ........ sir ji..

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हुये  तीनों  लोको  के दर्शन  यहीं मुझको
गृहस्थी ही  अब चारों  धाम सी लगती है

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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........Raj ji.

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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ........Rajan ji...

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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया .........mann ji..

Quote from: mann.mann on November 08, 2014, 04:32:26 AM
Grihsthi hi ab charoN dham si lagti hai


kya baat hai bahut bahut umda..... ek rau ke sath

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