dhundli yaad.sheba

by Sheba on September 04, 2010, 05:34:00 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 18, 2010, 05:43:32 AM »
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Shiba Jee aadaab!

behad achchi tehreer kahi hai aapne Sabhi ashaar achche rahe daad......

likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
         




THANK U PARWAAZ SAHAB
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«Reply #16 on: September 18, 2010, 05:44:29 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

THANK U MB
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«Reply #17 on: September 18, 2010, 05:45:23 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob Sheba ji...!!!


THANK U KLASKAR JI
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«Reply #18 on: September 18, 2010, 05:46:56 AM »
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class act...sirji
very nice word play.....
regards

THANK U ZIDD JI.MAIN SIR NAHIN MADAM HOON
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«Reply #19 on: September 18, 2010, 05:48:31 AM »
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Achchha diction hai aur achchhi tehreer hai magar ye sab tehrereN agar bahr mein hon to phir kya kahne.

(Waquif Ansari)



THANK U WAQUIF SAHAB. BAHR KI KOSHISH KAROON GI
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«Reply #20 on: September 18, 2010, 05:49:27 AM »
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Wah wah Sheba ji bahot khoobsurat aur dard bhari takhleeq hai aapki. Daad hazir hai.


THANK U REYAZ SAHAB
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«Reply #21 on: September 18, 2010, 05:54:49 AM »
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                    shama mohabbat ki dil ne jalaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin.,
                    tujhe dekh kabhi chehra sharmaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin.,

                       zakam kai hain dil mein kis kis ko marham lagaaun,
                       dard-e-judai ne tadpaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin,

                       gire the ashq kisi phool pe tere ghamm mein kabhi ,
                       shabnum ne ye khabar sunaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin ,

                       toofan to nahin tha per bahaar bhi na bann saka tu,
                       gulshan mera kabhi khilaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin,

                       tasweer ab tak teri khyalon mein basi hai sheba...!
                       kis rang se use sajaaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin..!!
                           
Sheba Ji... Very Very Impressive ... Awesome !! Very Nice Creation... dil se daad hazir hai... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi .... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #22 on: April 09, 2011, 12:13:57 PM »
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Sheba Ji... Very Very Impressive ... Awesome !! Very Nice Creation... dil se daad hazir hai... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi .... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...

thank you anshu ji
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«Reply #23 on: April 19, 2011, 06:50:22 AM »
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«Reply #24 on: April 19, 2011, 11:35:26 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank u
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«Reply #25 on: May 25, 2011, 08:58:33 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank you
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Ek Nakaam Si Koshish Main Bhi Karta Chaloon.....

Kisi Raah Par Bichde The Ke Hum Phir Milenge Zaroor,
Par Kuch Waadon Ka Woh kissa Ab Mujhe Kuch Yaad Nahi..

Dard-e-Judai Ne Tadpaaya Humein Bhi Bahut!!!
Par teri Ek Woh Muskaan Ke ilaawa Ab Mujhe Kuch Yaad nahi

Gire The Ashq Inn Palkon Se Bichadkar Yuhi!!!
Par Unn Ashqon Ki Bhooli-Bisri Dastaan Ab Mujhe Kuch Yaad Nahi

Hawaein Aksar Fizaon mein Mil Jaaya Karti Hai!!!
Yaadein Aksar Dil Mein bas Jaaya Karti Hai!!!

Kuch Dhundli Si Yaadon Ke Ilaava Ab Mujhe Kuch yaad nahi..
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