Dil Behelta Nahin...........!!!

by Talat on August 15, 2009, 07:35:49 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 18, 2009, 12:08:26 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 15, 2009, 07:35:49 PM

jawaab nhi hai aapki is ghazal ka talat bhut hi khoobsurat ehsaas ke saji hui ek umda paishkash daad qubool karen

soch rha tha ki kuch likhun phir socha ke itni khoobsurt ghazl ko bina wajh apni ghazal ka paiwand laga diye jaaye insaaf nhi hoga chaliye phir kabhi sahi khush rahiye aur aise hi likhti rahiye
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«Reply #16 on: August 18, 2009, 02:53:57 PM »
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occasion14  Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #17 on: August 18, 2009, 05:28:31 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 15, 2009, 07:40:33 PM
WAH WAH BAHUT BAHUT HI KHOOB CELMIRA JI... WAH


JASBIR SINGH

Thanks so much Jasbir Ji
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«Reply #18 on: August 20, 2009, 08:40:33 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 15, 2009, 07:40:44 PM
Bahut Bahut Khooob Talat Dost!!

Bahut Acha Aur Dil Se Likha Aapne..

Bahut Khoooooob Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks so much Khwaish Dost Usual Smile Bohot shukriya Dost.
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«Reply #19 on: August 20, 2009, 09:01:40 AM »
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Wah wah really touching and beautiful gazal Celmira ji,wonderful creation icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause.
bahut khoob Cara ji, Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: August 21, 2009, 10:32:28 AM »
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Bahut hi umda ghazal likhi hai aapne Talat Ji
Kya tarif karen, wah wah
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«Reply #21 on: August 22, 2009, 02:25:09 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 15, 2009, 07:35:49 PM
Bahut hi sundar/dilaaweyz gazal hai yah, Celmira!
"Dard dil ka kis(i) pal thaharta nahin!" Dard key is aalam ka bayaan aur kyaa ho saktaa hai?
                                      - abd bundeli
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«Reply #22 on: August 24, 2009, 04:36:13 PM »
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Quote from: A Saeed on August 15, 2009, 08:10:40 PM
v-nice  Applause

Thanks a lot Saeed Ji
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«Reply #23 on: August 24, 2009, 04:37:26 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 16, 2009, 07:20:48 AM
kya baat hai   celmira ji.....

TERE BIN AE SANAM DIL BAHELTA HI NAHIN,
DIL, KOI AUR NAAM TERE BIN LEHTA HI NAHIN.

FAASLON KA YEH KARB NAS NAS MAIN CHUBHE,
SAANSE BHI TERE BIN CHALTI NAHIN.

KHIZAAON KA HONE LAGAA YOON ASAR,
BIN TERE,BAHAAREN BHI ASAR KARTI NAHIN.

HAI TERI ARZOO,HAI TERA HI KHYAAL,
BAS TUJHKO PAANE KA HI HAI SAWAAL,AUR KUCH NAHIN.

TERE BAARE MAIN SOCHUN NA AE HUMNAFAS,
HAR LAMHE MAIN TU HI HAI FAKAT,AUR KOI NAHIN.

LAB PE AAYA TERA NAAM,AUR AANKH NAM,
HAR WAQAT TERE NAAM KE SIWA KUCH CHAHATA HI NAHIN.

HAI HARF-E-DUA MAIN BAS EK TU HI TU,
TERE BIN KHUDA SE KUCH MAANG TI HI NAHIN.

"TALAT" US KI KYUNKAR NA HO ARZOO,
KI JEENA USKE BIN JEENA NAHIN.

Thanks a lot Cara Ji
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«Reply #24 on: August 24, 2009, 04:38:19 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on August 16, 2009, 07:50:30 AM
Very Very beautiful Sweetie.. itna khoobsurat likha hia ke i dont have words to express the appreciation.

well done Clapping Smiley

Thanks so much Angel Sweetie Usual Smile...thanks for always reading and appreciating.
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«Reply #25 on: August 24, 2009, 04:39:49 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 16, 2009, 07:59:00 AM
bahut achche di kya baat hai..aap toh jo bhi l;ikhte ho poore dil se likhte ho chahe dard ho ya ishq ho,hats off



So sweet Salil...Thanks so much dear.
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«Reply #26 on: August 24, 2009, 04:40:40 PM »
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Quote from: Sammual on August 16, 2009, 08:02:41 AM
Bahut Khoob Celmira Ji. Applause Applause

Thanks a lot Sammual
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«Reply #27 on: August 24, 2009, 04:42:14 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 16, 2009, 04:46:15 PM

ahaaa... dear Talat... sach mein bahut accha likha hai ye gazal aapne.
Padkar mera b dil kaha dil behelta nahi Tumbin  sad5

Awwwww.....thanks so much dear Roja
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«Reply #28 on: August 24, 2009, 04:42:50 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 16, 2009, 06:40:59 PM
wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob Celmira and Cara ji!!!

Shukriya Pooja
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«Reply #29 on: August 24, 2009, 04:43:37 PM »
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Quote from: sarfaraz_sagar on August 16, 2009, 06:48:06 PM
Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal likha  hai aapne.meri taraf se bahut bahut mubarak ho. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aap ka bohot bohot shukriya Sagar Ji Usual Smile
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