Dil Behelta Nahin...........!!!

by Talat on August 15, 2009, 07:35:49 PM
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«Reply #30 on: August 24, 2009, 04:44:56 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 16, 2009, 11:41:35 PM
bahut hi khoob Celmira ji
hamesha ki tarah Applause Applause

Thanks so much Reaper Ji for always reading and appreciating my work Usual Smile
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«Reply #31 on: August 27, 2009, 01:09:46 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on August 18, 2009, 01:08:41 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahot khoob talat ji,behatreen ghazal likhi hai aapne
awesome ash'aars


Thanks so much Kaash Ji
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«Reply #32 on: August 27, 2009, 01:12:39 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 18, 2009, 02:53:57 PM
occasion14  Applause

Ek baar phir shukriya Reaper Ji
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«Reply #33 on: August 27, 2009, 01:13:38 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 20, 2009, 09:01:40 AM
Wah wah really touching and beautiful gazal Celmira ji,wonderful creation icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause.
bahut khoob Cara ji, Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks so much Madhu Ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #34 on: August 27, 2009, 01:20:01 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on August 21, 2009, 10:32:28 AM
Bahut hi umda ghazal likhi hai aapne Talat Ji
Kya tarif karen, wah wah

Bohot bohot shukriya Sarvesh Ji iss hausla-afzaai ka Usual Smile
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«Reply #35 on: August 27, 2009, 01:21:10 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 22, 2009, 02:25:09 PM
Bahut hi sundar/dilaaweyz gazal hai yah, Celmira!
"Dard dil ka kis(i) pal thaharta nahin!" Dard key is aalam ka bayaan aur kyaa ho saktaa hai?
                                      - abd bundeli


Thank You so much Babu Ji...its so nice to see your comments in my thread.....Thanks so much  notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #36 on: August 27, 2009, 01:29:25 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on August 18, 2009, 12:08:26 AM
jawaab nhi hai aapki is ghazal ka talat bhut hi khoobsurat ehsaas ke saji hui ek umda paishkash daad qubool karen

soch rha tha ki kuch likhun phir socha ke itni khoobsurt ghazl ko bina wajh apni ghazal ka paiwand laga diye jaaye insaaf nhi hoga chaliye phir kabhi sahi khush rahiye aur aise hi likhti rahiye


Aslam Ji,

Ab kya kahen hum...aapne to sharminda kar diya....Agar aap kuch likhen humari ghazal pe to ye to humari ghazal ki khushkismati hai ki.......Ummeed hai kabhi is izzat afzaai ka mauqa denge aur apne qeemti kalam se humare thread ko sajayenge ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #37 on: August 28, 2009, 02:45:34 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 27, 2009, 01:21:10 PM
Thank You so much Babu Ji...its so nice to see your comments in my thread.....Thanks so much  notworthy notworthy
You're always welcome, Celmira!
                      - abd bundeli
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«Reply #38 on: August 28, 2009, 06:04:46 PM »
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Wah bohat khooob aapi very very nice Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #39 on: August 28, 2009, 06:58:59 PM »
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Talatji badi lajawaab najm hai aapki....behtareen khayal aur lafj.. Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kaise kahu ki Taliyen bajate bajate ye hath thamte nahi
Is kadar hua hai asar ki khushi ka ye aalam dhalta nahi



Quote from: Celmira on August 15, 2009, 07:35:49 PM
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«Reply #40 on: September 01, 2009, 09:36:46 AM »
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Wah wah Talat Ji, wah
Bade khubsurat ashar hain, wah
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«Reply #41 on: September 06, 2009, 10:57:42 AM »
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Quote from: khushi4pari on August 28, 2009, 06:04:46 PM
Wah bohat khooob aapi very very nice Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks so much my dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #42 on: September 08, 2009, 09:03:57 AM »
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Waah Talat Ji ..... Bahut Acche. .....  Arz Kiyaa Hai...



Yeh Jeena Bhii Kyaa Jeena Ke Gham_E_Zindagii NahiN
Jalta Hua Ik ChiraaG HooN Mein Magar Roshnii NahiN

Tere Ruth Jane Se Ruth Chukii Hai BaharieN Sabhii
Tu NahiN To Inmein Bhii Woh Dil_Khashii NahiiN

Aane Ko To Aa Hii chukaa Tha Saamne Kinaraa Mere
Magar Uske Paas Kudh Merii Hii Khishtii Gyii NahiN

Kyaa Majaal Hai Ke Aa Jaye Kabhi HonthooN Par Hansii
Maamlaa Hai Yeh Dil Ka "HumTum", Koi Dil_lagii NahiN


HumTum  hello
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«Reply #43 on: September 13, 2009, 01:58:35 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on August 28, 2009, 06:58:59 PM
Talatji badi lajawaab najm hai aapki....behtareen khayal aur lafj.. Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kaise kahu ki Taliyen bajate bajate ye hath thamte nahi
Is kadar hua hai asar ki khushi ka ye aalam dhalta nahi





Smardia Ji, mere paas lafz nahin hain aapka shukriya ada karne ke liye. Thanks so much for your lovely words.
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«Reply #44 on: September 17, 2009, 12:00:19 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on September 01, 2009, 09:36:46 AM
Wah wah Talat Ji, wah
Bade khubsurat ashar hain, wah

Thanks so much Sarvesh Ji
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