Dil jala aur jab dhuaan huaa

by sarfaraz_sagar on July 31, 2009, 06:48:16 PM
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Tazkeera jab bhi kahin aapka huaa
meri aankhon se ashk ravaan huaa

Humne hi dekha kisi aur ne na dekha
dil jala aur jab dhuaan huaa

Main ban gaya yaron ek zinda laash
jis roj mera mehboob mujhse zuda huaa

Usko ab meri koi fikra hi nahi
jiski khatir main jamane men rusva huaa

Wo bewafa thi magar kiya uska aitvar
yakinan!mere sath aisa pahli martava huaa

Ab use bhoolna hi behter hai ’sagar’
ye samajh lo jo bhi huaa achha huaa
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«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2009, 07:54:32 PM »
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Wah really touching gazal,beautiful creation Sarfaraz ji, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent,
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: August 01, 2009, 03:08:26 AM »
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Nice one Sarfaraz Ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 01, 2009, 04:36:42 AM »
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Waah Waah Sagar ji waakai kabile tareef.. bahoot Bhaoot Khoob Likha hai..

Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #4 on: August 01, 2009, 04:44:25 AM »
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Aapdono ka bahut bahut Shukriya !jo aapne meri ghazal ko pasand kiya.
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