Dil ka rishta

by hminhas on October 10, 2008, 04:36:14 PM
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dil ki baat hai dil main rehe tu acha hai
hume aap se peyar hai peyar rehe tu acha hai

na tun jano ke main kon ho na main ke tum kon
yeh bandhan yunhi bandha rehe tu acha hai

zendgi ke anjane sufer main anjane raste per
mere humsufer tum hi humsufer rahu tu acha hai

sannso ki door tak dil ki dharkan see
tumhara naam gunjta hai gunjta rehe tu acha hai

dil ke rishte dil se hain
dil ki dharkan dharakti rehe tu acha hai

mana ke tum pass nahi ho dur bhi kab ho
duri ka yeh alam yunhi rahe  tu acha hai

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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2008, 07:29:06 AM »
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JO BATEEIN NA SACH HOTI HAIN AUR NA JHOOTH
UNHE DUNIYA KEHTI HAIN GHAYEL KA KHAYAL ACHCHA HAIN

                                  -SG-
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2008, 05:58:33 PM »
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aap kalam uthao aur likhte raho aisi ghazalein,
hum jaise padte rahe aisi ghazalein to acha hai...

log duniya main lavz ka hi sahara leve apni baat kehne ke liye,
yeh dua hai aur yeh sach hojave to acha hai....



well done
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2008, 06:02:24 PM »
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Bohot Khoob hminhas  Applause Applause

Nice replies Sajid Ji, Heart  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2008, 06:19:52 PM »
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pate ghir ke apne dard ka ehsaas dete rahe,
aur hum unko dekh kar lavzon ki barish kare toh acha hai...

zindagi main woh hi humari banjae yeh dua hai,
lekin unko humse bhi acha humsafar mile toh acha hai...

hum apke pyar ke layak toh nahin hai,
par apki ek dhadkan ek ehsaas miljaye toh acha hai...

un dhadkan ko hum kam fasle se mehsoos kare toh kya lamha banjaega,
aur woh lamha humari maut ka lamha banjae toh acha hai...

ap logon se bahaut tariff suni hai humne,
ab hum apni aukad pe ajaye toh acha hai...
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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2008, 06:43:22 PM »
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Khushi baant ta hai jo ghum apne sab chupa ke
Muskurahat uske lab tak bhi aaye to achcha hai

Sabke liye dil main mohabbat liye wo phirta hai
Mohabbat uske liye tohfa ban ke aaye to achcha hai
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«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2008, 09:49:55 PM »
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superb celmira and prateek
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«Reply #7 on: October 13, 2008, 07:57:31 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Prateek Ji  Applause Applause

Shukriya Heart   Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2008, 09:28:53 AM »
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 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob likha hai doston... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: October 13, 2008, 12:19:15 PM »
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logho se teri tareef to bohat hum sun chuke
aa kabhi hum bhi aazmaye tu kitna achcha hain
Quote from: Celmira on October 11, 2008, 06:43:22 PM
Khushi baant ta hai jo ghum apne sab chupa ke
Muskurahat uske lab tak bhi aaye to achcha hai

Sabke liye dil main mohabbat liye wo phirta hai
Mohabbat uske liye tohfa ban ke aaye to achcha hai
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«Reply #10 on: October 13, 2008, 08:52:40 PM »
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Shukriya celmira ji aur dead heart ji.
maine upar likhi panktiyon ko delete kar usey behtar roop dene ka prayas kiya hey.shaayad pasand aa jaaye...


kismaton ne tode he ub ke kuch is tarah hauslon ke bharam
nayi ummed koi mun mein na jug  jaaye to accha hein.

sheersh par bethey huey logon se jub nazdikyaan hui
khyaal  mein bhee bulandi hume choo na paaye to accha hein.

laton mein uljhana chaaha teri hathon mein ulajh gaya
zulfon ko ub tu na hi bikhraaye sanam to accha hein.

raah seedhi chale to thokrein hazaaron kar lagi
aah nikle magar meri chaah na badle to accha hein.

nahi bun-ni mujhe ub aur mukkamal shabdon ki maala
do baaten pyaar se kehni aa jaaye to accha hein.

tamaasha bun gaya tera tamaacha woh is kadar pada
palat ke vaar karna mujh ko nahi aata yeh accha hein.

maana mumkin nahi  hota patthar ka pighal  jaana
pur woh patthar neev ka bun jaaye to accha hein.

teri duniya mein e parvar yakayak subkuch badal gaya
ub to jo hein nahi bura, maanu wo hi accha hein!
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«Reply #11 on: October 14, 2008, 06:51:02 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on October 13, 2008, 09:28:53 AM
Applause Applause

Bohat khoob likha hai doston... Thumbs UP

Thanks Sis  icon_flower

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 13, 2008, 12:19:15 PM
logho se teri tareef to bohat hum sun chuke
aa kabhi hum bhi aazmaye tu kitna achcha hain

Hum to sirf ye jaante hain:

Parakhna mat, parakhne main, koi apna nahin rehta
Kisi bhi aaeene main der tak chehra nahin rehta (NM)
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«Reply #12 on: October 14, 2008, 06:51:52 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on October 13, 2008, 08:52:40 PM
Shukriya celmira ji aur dead heart ji.
maine upar likhi panktiyon ko delete kar usey behtar roop dene ka prayas kiya hey.shaayad pasand aa jaaye...


kismaton ne tode he ub ke kuch is tarah hauslon ke bharam
nayi ummed koi mun mein na jug  jaaye to accha hein.

sheersh par bethey huey logon se jub nazdikyaan hui
khyaal  mein bhee bulandi hume choo na paaye to accha hein.

laton mein uljhana chaaha teri hathon mein ulajh gaya
zulfon ko ub tu na hi bikhraaye sanam to accha hein.

raah seedhi chale to thokrein hazaaron kar lagi
aah nikle magar meri chaah na badle to accha hein.

nahi bun-ni mujhe ub aur mukkamal shabdon ki maala
do baaten pyaar se kehni aa jaaye to accha hein.

tamaasha bun gaya tera tamaacha woh is kadar pada
palat ke vaar karna mujh ko nahi aata yeh accha hein.

maana mumkin nahi  hota patthar ka pighal  jaana
pur woh patthar neev ka bun jaaye to accha hein.

teri duniya mein e parvar yakayak subkuch badal gaya
ub to jo hein nahi bura, maanu wo hi accha hein!







Pehle se bhi badhiya Prateek Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: October 14, 2008, 07:00:07 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on October 13, 2008, 08:52:40 PM
Shukriya celmira ji aur dead heart ji.
maine upar likhi panktiyon ko delete kar usey behtar roop dene ka prayas kiya hey.shaayad pasand aa jaaye...


kismaton ne tode he ub ke kuch is tarah hauslon ke bharam
nayi ummed koi mun mein na jug  jaaye to accha hein.

sheersh par bethey huey logon se jub nazdikyaan hui
khyaal  mein bhee bulandi hume choo na paaye to accha hein.

laton mein uljhana chaaha teri hathon mein ulajh gaya
zulfon ko ub tu na hi bikhraaye sanam to accha hein.

raah seedhi chale to thokrein hazaaron kar lagi
aah nikle magar meri chaah na badle to accha hein.

nahi bun-ni mujhe ub aur mukkamal shabdon ki maala
do baaten pyaar se kehni aa jaaye to accha hein.

tamaasha bun gaya tera tamaacha woh is kadar pada
palat ke vaar karna mujh ko nahi aata yeh accha hein.

maana mumkin nahi  hota patthar ka pighal  jaana
pur woh patthar neev ka bun jaaye to accha hein.

teri duniya mein e parvar yakayak subkuch badal gaya
ub to jo hein nahi bura, maanu wo hi accha hein!







Bahut Bahut Khoob Prateekji.. Applause Applause Applause

"Raah seedhi chale to thokrein hazaaron kar lagi
aah nikli par meri chaah na badle to accha hein..

nahi bu-ni muje aur mukamal  shabdo ki maala
do baatein pyaar se kehni aa jaaye to accha ein.."

wah wah..bahut hi acha likha hai prateekji aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: October 14, 2008, 07:08:06 PM »
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celmira ji aur khwaish ji,

bahut dino ke baad kuch likha hein aur us pur do shresht rachnakaaron ki sammeksha ki mohar mujhe romanchit karne ke liye ati harshdayak hein.bahut aabhaar.

Prateek
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