Dil Ke Dard Par Naa Jaa "Khwaish"

by khwaish on March 03, 2010, 09:12:34 AM
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Baat Jo Pehle Thi,
Aaj Woh Baat Hai ki Nahi..
Jala Ta zaroor Hai Kuch Par
Dhoondo Kahin Dhuan Hai ke Nahi...

Unn Haathon mein Aaena To Wahi Hai,
Jo pehle Bhi Tha!!!
Uss Aaene Mein,
Ab Chehra Mera Hai ke Nahi...

Koi Gham Nahi Gar Dil mera
Tooth Tha Bhi Hai!!!
Bas Puchta Hoon Khud ko,
"Iss Haadse Se Kuch seekha Hai ke Nahi"...

Tujhse Na Koi Shikwa Na
 Kisi Tarah Ki Shikayaten!!!
Puchlo,Kabhi kisi Insaan Ko
Inn Cheezon Se Kuch Mila Hai Ke Nahi...

Naa Jaane Kyon Guumsuum Sa Ho gaya
"Khwaish" Iss Afri-Tafri mein!!!
Iss Shehar mein Mera,
Apna Bhi Koi Hai Ke Nahi....

Yehi Hai Dastoor,
Zindagi Ka Eh Mere Dost!!!!!
Dil Ke Dard Par Naa Jaa Bas Dekh
Chehra mera Aaj Khila Hai Ke Nahi...

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2010, 10:14:43 AM »
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wah KHUWAISH bahut khoob likha hai aapne such mein dil ko chu gaya very nice

Dil ke derd par na ja
uske dukho par na ja
uski khuwishon par na ja
bas ek tamanna hai gar
hum jeete hai toh bas ek khayal rakhna
apne ko mujhse bas kabhi juda na karna
bas is dil ke derd par na jana.........

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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2010, 10:19:10 AM »
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Bahut hi achchha likha hai janab.Padhkar rooh ko suqoon aa gaya. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2010, 10:23:49 AM »
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HA DALJEET JI KHUWAISH NE BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA HAI EK TARHA ACHA EHSAAS HO RAHA HAI........

DIL KE DERD PAR NA JAA
KUCH BHI RUTH MAT JANA
DIL KE DERD KO SAMET LENA
BAS EK EHSAAS RAKHNA
IS NACHIZ KO BHOOL MAT JANA
DIL KE DERD PAR NA JANA.......

***************************MUSKAN******************************
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2010, 11:01:21 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 03, 2010, 10:13:59 AM
Bahut Khub Khwaish Bhai...

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Majid Bhai..
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2010, 11:15:55 AM »
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Applause Applause Bahaut khoob Khwahish jee... Har baar apko parr kar acha lagta hai... Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2010, 11:58:52 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 03, 2010, 09:12:34 AM
Baat Jo Pehle Thi,Aaj Woh Baat Hai ki Nahi..
Jala Ta zaroor Hai Kuch Par Dhoondo Kahin Dhuan Hai ke Nahi...

Unn Haathon mein Aaena To Wahi Tha Jo pehle Bhi Tha!!!
Uss Aaene Mein, Ab Chehra Mera Hai ke Nahi...

Koi Gham Nahi Gar Dil mera Tooth Tha Bhi Hai!!!
Bas Puchta Hoon Khud ko, "Iss Haadse Se Kuch seekha Hai ke Nahi"...

Tujhse Na Koi Shikwa Na Kisi Tarah Ki Shikayaten!!!
Puchlo,Kabhi kisi Insaan Ko Inn Cheezon Se Kuch Mila Hai Ke Nahi...

Naa Jaane Kyon Guumsuum Sa Ho gaya "Khwaish" Iss Afri-Tafri mein!!!
Iss Shehar mein Mera Apna Bhi Koi Hai Ke Nahi....

Yehi Hai Dastoor Zindagi Ka Eh Mere Dost!!!!!
Dil Ke Dard Par Naa Jaa Bas Dekh Chehra mera Aaj Khila Hai Ke Nahi...

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Bohot Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost...Dard ko alfaaz main lapet diya....  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2010, 01:01:59 PM »
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Bhaut khoob Khwaish Ji, bahut shandaar poem likhi hai. Nice creation.
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2010, 04:43:18 PM »
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bahut khoob khwaish ji...
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2010, 12:16:56 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

Wonderful creation khwaish bhaiya
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«Reply #10 on: March 04, 2010, 12:51:03 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Khwaish ji aur Muskaan ji.kamaal ke likha aap dono ne .great work.excellent Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: March 04, 2010, 10:34:23 AM »
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wah KHUWAISH bahut khoob likha hai aapne such mein dil ko chu gaya very nice

Dil ke derd par na ja
uske dukho par na ja
uski khuwishon par na ja
bas ek tamanna hai gar
hum jeete hai toh bas ek khayal rakhna
apne ko mujhse bas kabhi juda na karna
bas is dil ke derd par na jana.........

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Thankyou Soooooooo Much Muskan icon_flower

Aur Aapne Bhi Bahut Khoob Likha Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: March 05, 2010, 01:18:31 PM »
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Quote from: daljeet_faqeer on March 03, 2010, 10:19:10 AM
Bahut hi achchha likha hai janab.Padhkar rooh ko suqoon aa gaya. Clapping Smiley

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Daljeet Ji..

maine Aapko bahut Kam Hi kisi Aur Ki thread Par dekha..

Aap Yahan Aaye,Aap Ka bahut Bahut Shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: March 05, 2010, 01:27:43 PM »
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Quote from: muskan_bye on March 03, 2010, 10:23:49 AM
HA DALJEET JI KHUWAISH NE BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA HAI EK TARHA ACHA EHSAAS HO RAHA HAI........

DIL KE DERD PAR NA JAA
KUCH BHI RUTH MAT JANA
DIL KE DERD KO SAMET LENA
BAS EK EHSAAS RAKHNA
IS NACHIZ KO BHOOL MAT JANA
DIL KE DERD PAR NA JANA.......

***************************MUSKAN******************************

Phir se Bahut bahut Shukriya Muskaan..

Aur Aapne Phir Se Bahut Khoob likha.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: March 05, 2010, 01:48:08 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on March 03, 2010, 11:15:55 AM
Applause Applause Bahaut khoob Khwahish jee... Har baar apko parr kar acha lagta hai... Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rahim!!!

Har Baar Ki tarah Mujhe Bhi Aapke Comments Padhkar,yakenn maniye Bahut Khushi Hoti..

Thankyou Sooooooooo Much!!!! Usual Smile
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