Dil Ke Dard Par Naa Jaa "Khwaish"

by khwaish on March 03, 2010, 09:12:34 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 06, 2010, 10:36:14 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 03, 2010, 11:58:52 AM
Bohot Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost...Dard ko alfaaz main lapet diya....  Applause Applause Applause




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«Reply #16 on: March 10, 2010, 03:09:34 PM »
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Applause Applause Bahaut khoob Khwahish jee... Har baar apko parr kar acha lagta hai... Applause Applause

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«Reply #17 on: March 10, 2010, 03:15:42 PM »
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waah khwaish ji bahut khoob kalaam pesh kiya hai.
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«Reply #18 on: March 12, 2010, 01:03:38 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on March 03, 2010, 01:01:59 PM
Bhaut khoob Khwaish Ji, bahut shandaar poem likhi hai. Nice creation.

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«Reply #19 on: March 17, 2010, 08:38:23 AM »
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bahut umda khawaish ji Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: April 29, 2010, 11:35:19 AM »
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bahut khoob khwaish ji...

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«Reply #21 on: May 08, 2010, 10:57:08 AM »
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Quote from: malli on March 04, 2010, 12:16:56 AM
Applause Applause Applause

Wonderful creation khwaish bhaiya

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«Reply #22 on: May 11, 2010, 10:10:59 PM »
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waah bhut hi khoob khwaish sahab bhut achay ehsaas lage


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«Reply #23 on: July 29, 2010, 07:49:03 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on March 04, 2010, 12:51:03 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Khwaish ji aur Muskaan ji.kamaal ke likha aap dono ne .great work.excellent Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #24 on: July 29, 2010, 08:20:28 AM »
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mere jazbaat aapki zubaani
yehi aksar paya hai maine
jo kehne ki koshish karti hun main
teri zabaan pe paya hai use maine

teri kalam likhti hai wo
jo kabhi main keh na pai
kabhi lagta hai jaise
dono k dil ne ek si hi chot khai

lekar kalam chal sath baithen
likhen kuch apni kahani
dekhna ro dega ye zamana
sunke ye daastaan hamari...!!!

kya ab bhi kuch aur tareef karun khwaish ji......apki likhi kavitaon ki...
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«Reply #25 on: July 29, 2010, 09:08:04 AM »
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Wah kya baat......Dil ka dard shabdo mai dhaal diya.....ye kya gajab kia Khwaish tune mere dil me dabe dard ko Uukel diya.....bahut achhi najm....seedhi dil mai uttar gayee... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Quote from: khwaish on March 03, 2010, 09:12:34 AM
Baat Jo Pehle Thi,Aaj Woh Baat Hai ki Nahi..
Jala Ta zaroor Hai Kuch Par Dhoondo Kahin Dhuan Hai ke Nahi...

Unn Haathon mein Aaena To Wahi Tha Jo pehle Bhi Tha!!!
Uss Aaene Mein, Ab Chehra Mera Hai ke Nahi...

Koi Gham Nahi Gar Dil mera Tooth Tha Bhi Hai!!!
Bas Puchta Hoon Khud ko, "Iss Haadse Se Kuch seekha Hai ke Nahi"...

Tujhse Na Koi Shikwa Na Kisi Tarah Ki Shikayaten!!!
Puchlo,Kabhi kisi Insaan Ko Inn Cheezon Se Kuch Mila Hai Ke Nahi...

Naa Jaane Kyon Guumsuum Sa Ho gaya "Khwaish" Iss Afri-Tafri mein!!!
Iss Shehar mein Mera Apna Bhi Koi Hai Ke Nahi....

Yehi Hai Dastoor Zindagi Ka Eh Mere Dost!!!!!
Dil Ke Dard Par Naa Jaa Bas Dekh Chehra mera Aaj Khila Hai Ke Nahi...

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #26 on: July 29, 2010, 09:16:21 AM »
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Quote from: smardia on July 29, 2010, 09:08:04 AM
Wah kya baat......Dil ka dard shabdo mai dhaal diya.....ye kya gajab kia Khwaish tune mere dil me dabe dard ko Uukel diya.....bahut achhi najm....seedhi dil mai uttar gayee... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause



Teh Dilllllllllll Se Shukriya Smardia Ji...

Jab Tareef ke bol aap jaise guuni logon s emile to yakeen hota hai ke hum bhi kuch acha likh lete hai..

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Quote from: khumaar on March 04, 2010, 11:18:42 AM
bahut hi achi ghazal likhi hai aapne Khwaish ji
alag andaaz me aur sashakt andaaz me,bahut hi khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause
Muskaan ji aapne bhi acha likha hai  Applause Applause Applause

Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya kaashji
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«Reply #28 on: May 16, 2011, 08:41:53 AM »
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wah wah wah.....

bahut khub khwaishji.... bahut bahut khub....
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«Reply #29 on: August 16, 2011, 07:22:00 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 10, 2010, 03:15:42 PM
waah khwaish ji bahut khoob kalaam pesh kiya hai.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

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