Dil Ki Daraaro Me Kaanch ......................... masoom

by Masoom Shahzada on December 02, 2012, 06:39:05 AM
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Kuch pat_thro pe gir ke tutta chala gaya.
Jitna samhalna chaha bikharta chala gaya.
.
Uske saano pe ek sar dekh liya tha.
MaiN daaliyoN se tut ke girta chala gaya.
.
Dil ki daraaro me kaanch bhar liya maine.
Jo-jo jagah bhari, jakham bhaDta chala gaya.
.
Majboor ho ke kha raha yaado ki rootiyaN.
Khaya to roya, bhoka raha marta chala gaya.
.
Us naam bin ghar me raha ganghor andhera.
Ek deeep jalaya to khud jalta chala gaya.
.
"masoom" maiN tha bahut wafadaar parinda.
Usne kahaa chale jaao to uDta chala gaya.
 
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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2012, 06:50:40 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on December 02, 2012, 06:39:05 AM

Kuch pat_thro pe gir ke tutta chala gaya.
Jitna samhalna chaha bikharta chala gaya.
.
Unke saano pe ek sar dekh liya tha.
MaiN daaliyoN se tut ke girta chala gaya.
.
Dil ki dararo me kaanch bhar liya maine.
Jo-jo jagah bhari, jakham bhaDta chala gaya.
.
Majboor ho ke kha raha yaado ki rootiyaN.
Khaya to roya, bhoka raha marta chala gaya.
.
Us naam bin tha ganghor andhera.
Ek deeep jalaya to khud jalta chala gaya.
.
"masoom" maiN tha bahut wafadaar parinda.
Usne kahaa chale jaao to uDta chala gaya.
 

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wah kya khoob likha hai...

Majboor ho ke kha raha yaado ki rootiyaN.
Khaya to roya, bhoka raha marta chala gaya.  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2012, 07:23:00 AM »
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nice,masoomji.
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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2012, 07:30:17 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on December 02, 2012, 06:39:05 AM

Kuch pat_thro pe gir ke tutta chala gaya.
Jitna samhalna chaha bikharta chala gaya.
.
Uske saano pe ek sar dekh liya tha.
MaiN daaliyoN se tut ke girta chala gaya.
.
Dil ki daraaro me kaanch bhar liya maine.
Jo-jo jagah bhari, jakham bhaDta chala gaya.
.
Majboor ho ke kha raha yaado ki rootiyaN.
Khaya to roya, bhoka raha marta chala gaya.
.
Us naam bin ghar me raha ganghor andhera.
Ek deeep jalaya to khud jalta chala gaya.
.
"masoom" maiN tha bahut wafadaar parinda.
Usne kahaa chale jaao to uDta chala gaya.
 

very nice,sir
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2012, 07:41:27 AM »
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Bahut khoob masoom jee
majboor ho ke..kaabil-e-taareef
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bohut khoob , masoom jee
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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2012, 11:50:41 AM »
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Majboor ho ke kha raha yaado ki rootiyaN.
Khaya to roya, bhoka raha marta chala gaya.
.
Us naam bin ghar me raha ganghor andhera.
Ek deeep jalaya to khud jalta chala gaya.
.
"masoom" maiN tha bahut wafadaar parinda.
Usne kahaa chale jaao to uDta chala gaya.
 
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«Reply #9 on: December 02, 2012, 04:24:40 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: December 03, 2012, 07:55:26 AM »
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wah kya khoob likha hai...

Majboor ho ke kha raha yaado ki rootiyaN.
Khaya to roya, bhoka raha marta chala gaya.  Applause Applause Applause Applause



Sukriya Aunty Jee.
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nice,masoomji.
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