Dil ki hasrat...........( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on September 16, 2010, 10:16:07 AM
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Ek nayee aag phir lagi hai abhi
Dil ki hasrat koi jali hai abhi

Kaun kehta hai door woh humse
Ek sadaa phir wahi suni hai abhi

Humse mayoos woh bhi rehte hai
Jinse rishta koi nahi hai abhi

Waqt_e_sajda khayaal aaya hai
Dil me khwaish koi buri hai abhi

Logh khud me dafan bhi hote hai
Dil me chahat kaiee dabi hai abhi

Jaisi marzi teri guzari hai
Jaisi kal thi zindagi hai abhi

Teri surat hai chand si lekin
Teri seerat kaha bhali hai abhi

Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2010, 10:19:49 AM »
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wah sajid ji kya likha he aapne....too good....

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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2010, 10:30:48 AM »
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too good sajid bhaii....daad dher sarii kubool karen
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«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2010, 11:06:05 AM »
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bht bht khubb sajid ji ..aapki nazm k kya kehne...
maza aagaya padhke ji...kuch hamari ungliyan bhi chal di keyboard par...
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kuch kuch tabiyat khili hai abhi
kisiki mujhpe nazar padi hai abhi

khla the kai khwaab aankhon me meri
unke pure hone ki chaah jagi hai abhi

mastani bayaar ne chede hain sur naye
lehron ne bhi nai taan chhedi hai abhi

kuch to surmai rang khile the jeewan me
unme ishq ka ek aur rang judgaya hai abhi...
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«Reply #4 on: September 16, 2010, 11:07:25 AM »
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bahut khoob anu jiii too good
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«Reply #5 on: September 16, 2010, 12:50:02 PM »
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Kaun kehta hai door woh humse
Ek sadaa phir wahi suni hai abhi

Humse mayoos woh bhi rehte hai
Jinse rishta koi nahi hai abhi

Kaun kehta hai door woh humse
Ek sadaa phir wahi suni hai abhi


Good One...... Sajid Bhai !

Very Nice Creation...

dil se daad hazir hai...

aise hi behtar kalaam ke saath aate rahen aage bhi... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #6 on: September 16, 2010, 12:55:43 PM »
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wah... kya pashkash .. bahut khoob nareshji
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«Reply #7 on: September 16, 2010, 01:16:16 PM »
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   Aap to humesha hi achha likhte hai to aaj bhi achha hi likha hai,5th sher kaafi achha or sachha laga mujhe. Usual Smile hello2
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«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2010, 01:27:22 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai..

Lajwaab Peshaksh!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Ache Anuji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: September 16, 2010, 04:18:40 PM »
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Janab Ghayal Sahab Aadaab!

Behad umdaa aur nayi koshish se bazm ko nawaza hai janab..... aapki is gazal ne hume ..... Koi faryaad tere dil meiN dabi ho jaise " wali gazal ko rubaru kar diya ...

Chaliye aapki gazal pe aate hai..... Usual Smile           


Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on September 16, 2010, 10:16:07 AM
Ek nayee aag phir lagi hai abhi
Dil ki hasrat koi jali hai abhi

Kia baat hai janab bahut khoob... Daad..achcha matala kaha hai daad         


Kaun kehta hai door woh humse
Ek sadaa phir wahi suni hai abhi

sher ka mafoom achcha hai janab... daad par sher aur bhi behtar ho sakta hai humari nazar mein ...           


Humse mayoos woh bhi rehte hai
Jinse rishta koi nahi hai abhi

Kia baat hai janab... sher durust farmaya hai aapne.....Daad           


Waqt_e_sajda khayaal aaya hai
Dil me khwaish koi buri hai abhi

ha hahah a Achcha sher hai.. Daad janab kafi bold ho gaye aap toH Winking Par sher behad gehara raha hai daad         


Logh khud me dafan bhi hote hai
Dil me chahat kaiee dabi hai abhi

sher meiN hume rabta thik nahi laga ...           


Jaisi marzi teri guzari hai
Jaisi kal thi zindagi hai abhi

Is sher meiN tabte ki behad kami nazar ayi hume sher aur bhi behtar ho sakta hai daad.... Usual Smile         


Teri surat hai chand si lekin
Teri seerat kaha bhali hai abhi

Waah janab behad umda tanz kiya hai daad daad daad ....... is sher ne dil ke zakham ko kharoch diya hai... sad5         


Sajid Ghayel

Aik behad achchi koshish per dil se daad hazir hai janab.......
Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #10 on: September 17, 2010, 02:16:38 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI        SAJID GHAYEL JI......


DIL KI HASRAT THA JISKI ME KABHI
DIL KI NAFRAT BAN GAYA USKI ABHI

IK PAL BHI JISKO GAWARA NA THA BIN MERE KABHI
BAHUT DOOR CHALA GAYA HAI WO DEKHO MUJHSE ABHI..
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«Reply #11 on: September 17, 2010, 08:48:30 AM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on September 16, 2010, 10:16:07 AM
Ek nayee aag phir lagi hai abhi
Dil ki hasrat koi jali hai abhi

Kaun kehta hai door woh humse
Ek sadaa phir wahi suni hai abhi

Humse mayoos woh bhi rehte hai
Jinse rishta koi nahi hai abhi

Waqt_e_sajda khayaal aaya hai
Dil me khwaish koi buri hai abhi

Logh khud me dafan bhi hote hai
Dil me chahat kaiee dabi hai abhi

Jaisi marzi teri guzari hai
Jaisi kal thi zindagi hai abhi

Teri surat hai chand si lekin
Teri seerat kaha bhali hai abhi

Sajid Ghayel

Bahut hi behatreen peshkash hai Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #12 on: September 17, 2010, 11:57:23 AM »
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Janab Sajid Ghayal Saheb! Adab!

Kya zabardasht ghazal hai ye janab aapki. Matla to bahut hi zordaar hai aur baaqi k ashaar bhi kam nahin hain. Aapke ashaaron mein barjastagi hai aur kisi kisi sher mein to aisa lagta hai k wo sher bahut hi doob ke kaha gaya hai. Ye ghazal fikr ki tamaazat ko apne mein samete hue hai. Aisi fikr-angez ghazal k liye aap mubaarakbaad ke mustahaq haiN. Meri jaanib se hazaaron daad qubul kijiye. Aapki is ghazal ki zameen kuchh aisi dilkash hai k khaaksaar ne barjasta jo ash-aar kahe unhein aapki ghazal ki aqeedat mein pesh karne ki thaan li is ummeed k saath k aap is jasaarat ko qubul farmaayenge:
 
Mujhko lagta hai ye nayee hai abhi
Kya ghazal aapne kahi hai abhi

Haan ! tabiyat khili khili hai abhi
Us pe meri nazar paRi hai abhi

Khwaab palkon pe aa gaye pal mein
Bas nazar se nazar laRi hai abhi

Ghhup andhere mein dekhkar jugnu
Aik ummeed si jagi hai abhi

Faisla aaj aanewaala tha
Ik qayaamat thi jo tali hai abhi

Dil mein hasrat thi kal talak jiski
Dil ki nafrat wo ban gayee hai abhi

Tum ko paRhne ke baad hi GHAYEL
Tum se ulfat hi ho gayee hai abhi

(Waquif Ansari)

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on September 16, 2010, 10:16:07 AM
Ek nayee aag phir lagi hai abhi
Dil ki hasrat koi jali hai abhi

Kaun kehta hai door woh humse
Ek sadaa phir wahi suni hai abhi

Humse mayoos woh bhi rehte hai
Jinse rishta koi nahi hai abhi

Waqt_e_sajda khayaal aaya hai
Dil me khwaish koi buri hai abhi

Logh khud me dafan bhi hote hai
Dil me chahat kaiee dabi hai abhi

Jaisi marzi teri guzari hai
Jaisi kal thi zindagi hai abhi

Teri surat hai chand si lekin
Teri seerat kaha bhali hai abhi

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«Reply #13 on: September 17, 2010, 04:22:09 PM »
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Waah Sajid Bhai Jaan, Kya kehne Aapke, Har Baar Ki Taraah Zabardast,.

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«Reply #14 on: September 17, 2010, 04:51:26 PM »
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BOhat Khuub Likha hai App ne Sajid Sahb
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