Dil, Main Aur......Tum !!!

by Talat on June 12, 2009, 01:33:20 PM
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Pehle socha Shayari-e-Ishq main post karun.......phir laga ye Shayari-e-Dard main sahi rahegi.........Magar laut ke Ghazal section main aa gayi, jo ki aajkal mera favourite section hai !!!

Ummed karti hoon, pasand aaye aap doston ko..!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2009, 01:53:13 PM »
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Tallu,

Oye hoye ! Mujhe toh Khumar he khumar chuppa nazar aa raha hai ismein Winking

Beautiful !  Thumbs UP

Kaun hai yeh lucky Jaanam?  Giggle
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2009, 02:00:13 PM »
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wow sweet behna ek ek lafz muhabbat mai juda honay walon kay dil ki awaaz hay,her piyar kernay walay aur judayi ka drd sehnay walay ko yay apni hi dil ki awaz lagay gi ,really bhot hi omda creation hai daad  dainay kai liyay shabd nahi mil rahay ,GOD bless u
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2009, 02:02:10 PM »
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Very romantic line Talat sis..Bahut accha laga Dil, Mai aur Tum ko padkar... love4
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2009, 02:30:49 PM »
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Wo mera intezaar karna aur us ka Ghar ki Chhat pe aanaa,
Saare jahaan ki Khushi ko bhul ke usi ki yaad me Aansu bahana,

Wo Apane Dil ki aawaaz ko Alfaazo se us ki Rooh tak Pahuchana,
Meri kalam ki dhar dekhkar uska akele me Ashqo ke "Sagar" bahana,

WO humari Kismat-e-khak ki Us ka Saath "Ta-Umra" na nibhana,
Us ki Baaraat ko Dekh kar Dil ke Armaano ko Dhoondh me Jalaanaa,

Us ki Adaaon aur Wafaon ko Yaad kar ke toote armano ko fir se jagaana,
Fir se kambakht Judayee ki rasm ka meri zindagi me Dhire-Dhire se aana,

Aur wo hi silsila, us ki yaadon me akele Ashq bahate huye Raaten Bitaana,
Bas ye hi hai "Sagar" ki tanhaeeyon, Gehraaeeyon ka dard bhara Fasana.
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2009, 03:20:29 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 12, 2009, 01:33:20 PM

Pehle socha Shayari-e-Ishq main post karun.......phir laga ye Shayari-e-Dard main sahi rahegi.........Magar laut ke Ghazal section main aa gayi, jo ki aajkal mera favourite section hai !!!

Ummed karti hoon, pasand aaye aap doston ko..!!



Haaye!!! Itni Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet Ghazal.. love4

Ishq Ke Nashe Mein Choor...Bahut Khoobsurat Talat!!! Ek Pyaar Ka Nagma Sa Tha..

Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2009, 03:24:15 PM »
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Quote from: sagarprateek on June 12, 2009, 02:30:49 PM
Wo mera intezaar karna aur us ka Ghar ki Chhat pe aanaa,
Saare jahaan ki Khushi ko bhul ke usi ki yaad me Aansu bahana,

Wo Apane Dil ki aawaaz ko Alfaazo se us ki Rooh tak Pahuchana,
Meri kalam ki dhar dekhkar uska akele me Ashqo ke "Sagar" bahana,

WO humari Kismat-e-khak ki Us ka Saath "Ta-Umra" na nibhana,
Us ki Baaraat ko Dekh kar Dil ke Armaano ko Dhoondh me Jalaanaa,

Us ki Adaaon aur Wafaon ko Yaad kar ke toote armano ko fir se jagaana,
Fir se kambakht Judayee ki rasm ka meri zindagi me Dhire-Dhire se aana,

Aur wo hi silsila, us ki yaadon me akele Ashq bahate huye Raaten Bitaana,
Bas ye hi hai "Sagar" ki tanhaeeyon, Gehraaeeyon ka dard bhara Fasana.

Sagar Ji Bahut Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Apane.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Par Yeh ghazal Iss Thread Mein Nahi Jam Rahi Hai..Aap iss Ghazal Ko Ek Naya Topic Dekar Phir post kare..Thankyou
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2009, 03:56:33 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 12, 2009, 01:33:20 PM

Pehle socha Shayari-e-Ishq main post karun.......phir laga ye Shayari-e-Dard main sahi rahegi.........Magar laut ke Ghazal section main aa gayi, jo ki aajkal mera favourite section hai !!!

Ummed karti hoon, pasand aaye aap doston ko..!!



As usual very very very beautiful Talat... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2009, 10:00:19 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 12, 2009, 01:33:20 PM

Pehle socha Shayari-e-Ishq main post karun.......phir laga ye Shayari-e-Dard main sahi rahegi.........Magar laut ke Ghazal section main aa gayi, jo ki aajkal mera favourite section hai !!!

Ummed karti hoon, pasand aaye aap doston ko..!!



celmira ji bhut aur bhut hi khoobsurat ghazal aap isko kahin bhi post krti.n iski waza mai koi kami nhi aati, ek aur bhut hi dil ko choo laine waali paishkash, khush rahiye aur you.n hi likti rahiye
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«Reply #9 on: June 12, 2009, 10:19:11 PM »
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Nice one Talat di aur Sager jee
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«Reply #10 on: June 12, 2009, 10:29:43 PM »
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Bahut pasand aayee Talat ji,beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping
very nice.
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2009, 02:00:00 AM »
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Wah wah Talat Ji bahut khoob
Makta bada khubsurat sher hai, wah
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2009, 03:22:34 AM »
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NICE 1 TALAT JI,EVERY WORD ATTACKED MY HEART
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«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2009, 08:54:26 AM »
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Wow ! Its really very Touching Dear Talat(got ur name)
ek ek sher sidhe dil me utarta hai....SuperBBBBBBB...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: June 13, 2009, 09:14:59 AM »
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 Applause Applause
viraha ka dard aur judai ke shikwe...hain bhi aur nahi bhi....bahoot khoob TALAT
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