Dil, Main Aur......Tum !!!

by Talat on June 12, 2009, 01:33:20 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 13, 2009, 04:55:28 PM »
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Wah wah Kya baat Hai Talat Ji.. Kya Kahun Main is Gazal Ke Baare Me.. Isme Dard Bhi hai to Judaai bhi Hai.. Aur Mohabbat.... Mohabbat to is Gazal Ke Har Lafz se Tapak rahi Hai..!! Applause Applause

Aankhon Ke Zariye Dil tak Utar gaye aapke Likhe yeh Khubsoorat aur Dilkash Alfaaz.... Daad kubool Keren........ Bahut Bahut Khoooooob..!!



 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #16 on: June 13, 2009, 07:07:44 PM »
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Subhanallah!
Celmira ji ki ek or umda or rangeen peshkash... Usual Smile
Bohot khoob celmira ji.... Ek ek sher aankon ke raste dil me utarta chala gaya...kya kehne...waah.
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«Reply #17 on: June 15, 2009, 05:05:28 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 12, 2009, 01:33:20 PM

Pehle socha Shayari-e-Ishq main post karun.......phir laga ye Shayari-e-Dard main sahi rahegi.........Magar laut ke Ghazal section main aa gayi, jo ki aajkal mera favourite section hai !!!

Ummed karti hoon, pasand aaye aap doston ko..!!



Wah Wah, Celmira Ji! Bahut he khubsoorat aur romantic Ghazal hai!  Bahut bahut khoob! Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: June 15, 2009, 11:05:26 AM »
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bahut hi badhya Cera ..khoobsurat andaz
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«Reply #19 on: June 15, 2009, 11:11:34 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB CELMIRA JI,AAPKA ANDAAZ KUCH ALAG HAI
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«Reply #20 on: June 16, 2009, 09:56:15 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on June 12, 2009, 01:53:00 PM
waah bahot bahot khoob likha hai aapne
Talat ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahot achi ghazal likhi hai aapne
har sher khoobsoorat likha hai

Aapka bohot bohot shukriya, Kaash Ji...Thanks so much aapne is ghazal ko padha aur saraha.....Shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: June 16, 2009, 09:58:41 AM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on June 12, 2009, 01:53:13 PM
Tallu,

Oye hoye ! Mujhe toh Khumar he khumar chuppa nazar aa raha hai ismein Winking

Beautiful !  Thumbs UP

Kaun hai yeh lucky Jaanam?  Giggle

Thanks so much Rajbir Ji...bohot bohot shukriya aapka Usual Smile

Bas kuch khwaab-o-khayaal hain mere....!!  Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: June 16, 2009, 10:00:18 AM »
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kya baat hai di...bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne............
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«Reply #23 on: June 16, 2009, 10:11:12 AM »
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Quote from: chitralsony on June 12, 2009, 02:00:13 PM
wow sweet behna ek ek lafz muhabbat mai juda honay walon kay dil ki awaaz hay,her piyar kernay walay aur judayi ka drd sehnay walay ko yay apni hi dil ki awaz lagay gi ,really bhot hi omda creation hai daad  dainay kai liyay shabd nahi mil rahay ,GOD bless u

Bohot bohot shukriya Taiba Sis, aapne in khoobsurat alfaaz se nawaz....tah-e-dil se shukriya behan aapki duaaon ka.....Thanks so much dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: June 16, 2009, 10:13:48 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on June 12, 2009, 02:02:10 PM
Very romantic line Talat sis..Bahut accha laga Dil, Mai aur Tum ko padkar... love4

Thanks so much my dear....thanks a lot for reading and appreciating this ghazal of mine Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: June 16, 2009, 10:16:16 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 12, 2009, 03:20:29 PM
Haaye!!! Itni Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet Ghazal.. love4

Ishq Ke Nashe Mein Choor...Bahut Khoobsurat Talat!!! Ek Pyaar Ka Nagma Sa Tha..

Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot bohot shukriya Dost..... Usual Smile

Thanks so much for always reading my work and your beautiful and encouraging comments Usual Smile

Thanks so much Khwaish
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«Reply #26 on: June 16, 2009, 10:43:56 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 12, 2009, 03:56:33 PM
As usual very very very beautiful Talat... Clapping Smiley

Thanks a lot dear for reading and appreciating Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: June 16, 2009, 06:01:52 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on June 12, 2009, 10:00:19 PM
celmira ji bhut aur bhut hi khoobsurat ghazal aap isko kahin bhi post krti.n iski waza mai koi kami nhi aati, ek aur bhut hi dil ko choo laine waali paishkash, khush rahiye aur you.n hi likti rahiye

Thanks so much Aslam Ji aapki tareef humesha ek naya hausla de jaati hai...tah-e-dil se shukriya aapka Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: June 16, 2009, 06:15:59 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on June 12, 2009, 10:19:11 PM
Nice one Talat di aur Sager jee

Shukriya Rahim
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«Reply #29 on: June 17, 2009, 01:13:23 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 12, 2009, 10:29:43 PM
Bahut pasand aayee Talat ji,beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping
very nice.

Thanks so much Madhu.... bohot shukriya.
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