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Dil pe jazbat Ki bisaaton ka,
khel Sara hai unki ghaaton ka...

koi marham to koi dard baney,
farq hota hai baaton baaton ka.

mur ke dekhenge bhi to kis kis ko,
ye to rastaa hai aatey jaaton ka.

meri baaton ka jab yaqeen nahin,
kya milegaa suboot waadon ka.

misl e bismil tarapne lagtey hain,
Jab chaley teer unki baaton ka.

ab 'sana' kya jawaaz pesh karein,
ashq se tar tamaam raaton ka...


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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2014, 09:33:20 AM »

Quote from: sana Afroz on December 01, 2014, 09:14:29 AM

Dil Mein paltey huye jazbaaton boss!!!!!!!!!! jazbaat khud ek plural hai Usual Smile

:)ka,
ye Sara khel hai ehsaason ka...

koi marham to koi dard baney,
farq hota hai baaton baaton ka.

mur ke dekhenge bhi to kis kis ko,
ye to rastaa hai aatey jaaton ka.

meri baaton ka jab yaqeen nahin,
kya milegaa suboot waadon ka.

misl e bismil tarapne lagta hai,
Jo chaley teer unki baaton ka.

ab 'sana' kya jawaaz pesh karein,
ashq se tar tamaam raaton ka...


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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2014, 10:14:22 AM »

bahut khoob


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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2014, 11:05:07 AM »

Sana Afroz saahibaa Aadaab ... !

Mashaa Allaah kia kahne jee waah waah waah koi jawaab nahi is umdaa aur last jawaab kalaam ka ... behad khoob aur aala tareeN ashaar kahe hai aapne ...
Har sher hazaaroN dili daad ka mushtahiq hai ...

Kia kahne jee bahut la jawaab kalaam aapne bazm ki nazar kii hai ... aap jaisi umdaa fankaara is bazm meiN hai humari khushnaseebi hai ...
Is umdaa aur laa jawaab kalaam par humaari hazaaroN dili daad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda hafez ...

Quote from: sana Afroz on December 01, 2014, 09:14:29 AM

Dil Mein paltey huye jazbaaton ka,
ye Sara khel hai ehsaason ka...

Behad umdaa aur khoob matla kahaa hai jee daad..

koi marham to koi dard baney,
farq hota hai baaton baaton ka.

Kia kahne jee waah bahut khoob behad sahiN kaha hai daad...

mur ke dekhenge bhi to kis kis ko,
ye to rastaa hai aatey jaaton ka.

Walaah kia umdaa sher kaha hai jee waqai sher kaha hai bilkul shayraana aur behad laa jawaab...

meri baaton ka jab yaqeen nahin,
kya milegaa suboot waadon ka.

Bahut khoob jee bahut sahiN ...

misl e bismil tarapne lagta hai,
Jo chaley teer unki baaton ka.

Achacha sher hai daad ...

ab 'sana' kya jawaab pesh karein,
ashq se tar tamaam raaton ka...

Behad khoobsurat maqta bhi huaa hai daad jee ...


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sana Afroz

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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2014, 11:16:33 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 01, 2014, 11:05:07 AM

bahut bahut shukriya !!!!! Hausla afzai ka!!!


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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2014, 01:31:13 PM »

wah wah bahut khoob ....choti bhr me ache sher nikale hain ....aapne mubarak baad

misl bismil tadapne lagte hain
jub chale teer unki baaton ka ....

yun kar len ....bahut umda sher nikale hain aapne ..dad hazir hai


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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #6 on: December 01, 2014, 01:57:26 PM »

Madam, Sana Sahiba, Aadab, bahut khoob "Gagar me saagr" bhar diya hae . R.K,Rastogi


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sana Afroz

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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #7 on: December 01, 2014, 02:24:13 PM »

Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on December 01, 2014, 01:57:26 PM

Madam, Sana Sahiba, Aadab, bahut khoob "Gagar me saagr" bhar diya hae . R.K,Rastogi

shukriya !!!!


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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #8 on: December 01, 2014, 02:49:18 PM »

Mohtarma sana Afroz sahiba! salam

buhat khoobsurat ghazal hay... hamaari taraf se bharpoor dad qabool kejay...

ager munasib lagay tu esay ker lejay..

"khel sara hay ye khayaalon ka"

khayaal ki jama "kahayalat" tu tasleem ki jaa sakti hay.. lekin "khayaalat" ki jama "khayaalaton" hamaray khayal se durst nahi..

ek baar phir bharpoor daad k sath...

dua ga


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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #9 on: December 01, 2014, 03:33:56 PM »

Shu

Quote from: vb on December 01, 2014, 02:49:18 PM

kriya !!!!


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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #10 on: December 01, 2014, 05:22:40 PM »

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Dil pe jazbat Ki bisaaton ka,
khel Sara hai unki ghaaton ka...

koi marham to koi dard baney,
farq hota hai baaton baaton ka.

mur ke dekhenge bhi to kis kis ko,
ye to rastaa hai aatey jaaton ka.

meri baaton ka jab yaqeen nahin,
kya milegaa suboot waadon ka.

misl e bismil tarapne lagtey hain,
Jab chaley teer unki baaton ka.

ab 'sana' kya jawaaz pesh karein,
ashq se tar tamaam raaton ka...

Sana Sahiba saari kee saari ghazal bahut khoobsurat hai, lekin mujhe do sher nihaayat pasand aaye. Zuban teer chalaa saktee hai, shamsheer se bhi vaar kar saktee hai. Ek sher neeche likh rahaa hoon.
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Chatar chatar kuch naa kaho lagaa le lagaam zuban ko apnee...
Vachan karwaa kabhi naa kaho thaam shamsheer-e-zuban ko apnee!
Surindar.N


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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #11 on: December 01, 2014, 05:27:38 PM »

Quote from: sana Afroz on December 01, 2014, 09:14:29 AM

Sana Afroz........
Waaaaaaaaah Kiya Baaat hai, bahut umda ghazal kahi hai, meri mubarakbaad qubool farmyein...........
Syed Mohd Mahzar


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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #12 on: December 01, 2014, 06:46:56 PM »

waaaaaaah bahut khoob Sanaj jee, aati rahiye.


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sana Afroz

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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #13 on: December 01, 2014, 07:54:13 PM »

Bahut bahut shukriya !!!! Aap sab ka...aise hi hausla afzaii multi rahi to kuch aur nikhar jayegi qalam..


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Re: dil mein.......sana afroz

«Reply #14 on: December 02, 2014, 08:06:57 AM »

koi marham to koi dard baney,
farq hota hai baaton baaton ka

Bahut Khub Sana Sis Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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