Dil nasheeN "Khwaish"

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Too JahaaN Tha vaheeN vaheeN Thaa Main
Par Tere Dil Mein  bas naheeN Thaa Main

Dil Ko Bahlaane Kee Ye BaateN Thee
Too Falak Thaa Magar zameeN Thaa maiN

jaane kis Raah Par Khada Hoon maiN
Par Tere Paas Hee Kaheen Thaa maiN

Mujhko Dhoondoge Ab KahaaN Par Tum
ashq nikle jahaaN vaheeN Thaa maiN

mujhko Khokar N Kho Sakaa too Kuchh!!!
Kyon Ki "Khwaish"Saa Dil nasheeN Thaa maiN


       ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2012, 12:40:27 PM »
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Waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2012, 12:52:26 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 02, 2012, 12:37:22 PM
Too JahaaN Tha vaheeN vaheeN Thaa Main
Par Tere Dil Mein  bas naheeN Thaa Main

Dil Ko Bahlaane Kee Ye BaateN Thee
Too Falak Thaa Magar zameeN Thaa maiN

jaane kis Raah Par Khada Hoon maiN
Par Tere Paas Hee Kaheen Thaa maiN

Mujhko Dhoondoge Ab KahaaN Par Tum
ashq nikle jahaaN vaheeN Thaa maiN

mujhko Khokar N Kho Sakaa too Kuchh!!!
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       ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~




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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2012, 01:02:18 PM »
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beautifuullll khwahishjiii...kya kehne.....bahut umda....Usual Smile

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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2012, 01:19:35 PM »
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"Tu jahan tha, vaheen vaheen tha main,
Par tere dil main hi naheen tha main"

Wah Wah Wah..
Dil ki gehrayi main chipe kisi zakhm ko yeh do lines khoob bha gayi..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2012, 01:30:39 PM »
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bahut khoob matlaa badaa shaandaar rahaa vaise pooree ghazal hee bahut achhee hai
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2012, 01:32:48 PM »
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 bahut khoob , Khwaish ji.
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2012, 02:09:42 PM »
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Quote from: masoom shahjada on May 02, 2012, 12:40:27 PM
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Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya Masoom Ji

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Quote from: qalb on May 02, 2012, 12:52:26 PM

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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2012, 02:34:23 PM »
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boht khub khawaish ji
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beautifuullll khwahishjiii...kya kehne.....bahut umda....Usual Smile

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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2012, 03:37:57 AM »
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waaahhhh waaaaah Khwaish ji--
superbb ghazal--
bht bht khoob
daad daad daad
bht pyare se alfaaz h ghazal ke

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2012, 02:37:27 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahut khoob Khwaish ji....!!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 09, 2012, 08:27:03 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on May 02, 2012, 01:19:35 PM
"Tu jahan tha, vaheen vaheen tha main,
Par tere dil main hi naheen tha main"

Wah Wah Wah..
Dil ki gehrayi main chipe kisi zakhm ko yeh do lines khoob bha gayi..
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Khush rahiye..!


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