Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

by aqsh on December 25, 2012, 05:53:43 AM

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Bahut roye hum, tujhe dil se juda karte hue
Nam aankhoN se, tere liye dua karte hue

Tanha shab bhar, karwateiN badalte rahe
Apne hi zakhmoN ki, dawa karte hue

Kaise mumkin tha ki, dhuaaN bhi na aaye
Mere jalte hue dil ko, hawa karte hue

Koi na jaane anjam, meri raah-e-ulfat ka
Toot chuke hai hum, tujhse wafa karte hue

KushiyoN ke lamho ko, udhaar lekar "Aqsh"
Zindagi guzar di humne, kisten ada karte hue


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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #1 on: December 25, 2012, 05:57:11 AM »

BOHUT UMDAA LIKHA HAI APNI SI KAHAANI LAGTI HAIN REALY TOUCHING LINES VERY GOOD LIKHTE RAHIYE ALWAYS EK RAU BHI APKA HUA


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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #2 on: December 25, 2012, 06:04:34 AM »

Quote from: saahill on December 25, 2012, 05:57:11 AM

BOHUT UMDAA LIKHA HAI APNI SI KAHAANI LAGTI HAIN REALY TOUCHING LINES VERY GOOD LIKHTE RAHIYE ALWAYS EK RAU BHI APKA HUA

thanks sahill jee aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut thnx


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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #3 on: December 25, 2012, 06:11:59 AM »

Mere jalte huye dil ko hawa karte huye.... Waaah waah waah.
Sundar... Ati sundar ati sundar


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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #4 on: December 25, 2012, 06:14:06 AM »

bahut bahut Khub Aqsh Ji Applause


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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #5 on: December 25, 2012, 06:14:35 AM »

Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on December 25, 2012, 06:11:59 AM

Mere jalte huye dil ko hawa karte huye.... Waaah waah waah.
Sundar... Ati sundar ati sundar

thank you so much masoom


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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #6 on: December 25, 2012, 06:15:05 AM »

Quote from: Sanjeev kash on December 25, 2012, 06:14:06 AM

bahut bahut Khub Aqsh Ji Applause

thnx sanjeev jee


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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #7 on: December 25, 2012, 06:20:58 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on December 25, 2012, 05:53:43 AM


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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #8 on: December 25, 2012, 06:22:26 AM »

KushiyoN ke lamho ko, udhaar lekar "Aqsh"
Zindagi guzar di humne, kisten ada karte hue

waahh waahh kya sher likha hai Applause

ba-khhooob likha hai Applause


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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #9 on: December 25, 2012, 06:22:48 AM »


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aqsh

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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #10 on: December 25, 2012, 06:23:43 AM »

Quote from: qalb on December 25, 2012, 06:20:58 AM

thank you so much qalb jee


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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #11 on: December 25, 2012, 06:24:07 AM »

Quote from: roy on December 25, 2012, 06:22:26 AM

KushiyoN ke lamho ko, udhaar lekar "Aqsh"
Zindagi guzar di humne, kisten ada karte hue

waahh waahh kya sher likha hai Applause

ba-khhooob likha hai Applause

thnx roy jee


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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #12 on: December 25, 2012, 06:24:34 AM »

Quote from: anmolarora on December 25, 2012, 06:22:48 AM

thank you anmol jee


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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #13 on: December 25, 2012, 06:43:44 AM »

bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!

karke waade nibhaane kaa saath umra bhar
wo humein tohfe me bas apni yaad de gayaa

jinke saath sapno ka mahal banaayaa thaa
wo humein ek tuti huyi buniyaad de gayaa

samajh rahe the hum apne bandhan to atoot
aur wo humein bikhre huye jazbaat de gayaa

unke aane se saare rishte tod diye the humne
wo humein tanhaa har ek din aur raat de gayaa

jinke aansuon ko moti kehte rahe hum umra bhar
woh humein aansuon ki haseen saugaat de gayaa

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Re: Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

«Reply #14 on: December 25, 2012, 06:48:02 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on December 25, 2012, 05:53:43 AM

Bahut roye hum, tujhe dil se juda karte hue
Nam aankhoN se, tere liye dua karte hue

Tanha shab bhar, karwateiN badalte rahe
Apne hi zakhmoN ki, dawa karte hue

Kaise mumkin tha ki, dhuaaN bhi na aaye
Mere jalte hue dil ko, hawa karte hue

THESE LINES ARE SIMPLY AWESOME

Koi na jaane anjam, meri raah-e-ulfat ka
Toot chuke hai hum, tujhse wafa karte hue

KushiyoN ke lamho ko, udhaar lekar "Aqsh"
Zindagi guzar di humne, kisten ada karte hue

mind blowing Aqsh ji,,,,,,,