Dil se juda..................................Aqsh

by aqsh on December 25, 2012, 05:53:43 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 25, 2012, 07:40:35 AM »
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Koi na jaane anjam, meri raah-e-ulfat ka
Toot chuke hai hum, tujhse wafa karte hue

KushiyoN ke lamho ko, udhaar lekar "Aqsh"
Zindagi guzar di humne, kisten ada karte hue

Bahut khoob..
beautiful emotions
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«Reply #16 on: December 25, 2012, 08:08:01 AM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... aik se badhkar aik kavish kah
rahi haiN aap... kia kahne waaH jee behad umdaa khayaaloN ko
khoob lafz adaa kiye haiN... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.. HUmari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: December 25, 2012, 08:09:52 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 25, 2012, 05:53:43 AM
Bahut roye hum, tujhe dil se juda karte hue
Nam aankhoN se, tere liye dua karte hue

Tanha shab bhar, karwateiN badalte rahe
Apne hi zakhmoN ki, dawa karte hue

Kaise mumkin tha ki, dhuaaN bhi na aaye
Mere jalte hue dil ko, hawa karte hue

Koi na jaane anjam, meri raah-e-ulfat ka
Toot chuke hai hum, tujhse wafa karte hue

KushiyoN ke lamho ko, udhaar lekar "Aqsh"
Zindagi guzar di humne, kisten ada karte hue


bahut bahut khoob......!
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«Reply #18 on: December 25, 2012, 08:18:13 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 25, 2012, 05:53:43 AM
Bahut roye hum, tujhe dil se juda karte hue
Nam aankhoN se, tere liye dua karte hue

 Applause Applause Applause

Tanha shab bhar, karwateiN badalte rahe
Apne hi zakhmoN ki, dawa karte hue

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kaise mumkin tha ki, dhuaaN bhi na aaye
Mere jalte hue dil ko, hawa karte hue

Wah Wah!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Koi na jaane anjam, meri raah-e-ulfat ka
Toot chuke hai hum, tujhse wafa karte hue

Bohat Hi Khub!! Wah!  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

KushiyoN ke lamho ko, udhaar lekar "Aqsh"
Zindagi guzar di humne, kisten ada karte hue

Wah Wah!!! Perfect Maqta!!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley





Very Very Good Ashq Jee!!!! Pad kar bohat aacha laga...Keep writing such lovely poems..

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«Reply #19 on: December 25, 2012, 08:28:36 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 25, 2012, 06:43:44 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!

karke   waade   nibhaane   kaa   saath   umra  bhar
wo  humein  tohfe   me   bas   apni  yaad de gayaa

jinke   saath   sapno   ka    mahal   banaayaa  thaa
wo   humein   ek   tuti   huyi  buniyaad   de  gayaa

samajh  rahe   the  hum  apne  bandhan  to atoot
aur  wo  humein  bikhre  huye  jazbaat  de   gayaa

unke  aane  se  saare  rishte  tod   diye the humne
wo  humein  tanhaa  har  ek din aur raat de gayaa

jinke aansuon ko moti kehte rahe hum  umra bhar
woh humein aansuon ki haseen saugaat de  gayaa


*****HRIDAY*****
thnx hriday jee for ur lovely comments with a superb gazhals thank you so much
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«Reply #20 on: December 25, 2012, 08:31:10 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on December 25, 2012, 06:48:02 AM
ApplauseApplause
Applause
Applause
Applause
mind blowing Aqsh ji,,,,,,,

thnx sahal a lot
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«Reply #21 on: December 25, 2012, 08:31:48 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 25, 2012, 07:40:35 AM
Koi na jaane anjam, meri raah-e-ulfat ka
Toot chuke hai hum, tujhse wafa karte hue

KushiyoN ke lamho ko, udhaar lekar "Aqsh"
Zindagi guzar di humne, kisten ada karte hue

Bahut khoob..
beautiful emotions



thank you sooooooooooooo much mukesh jee
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«Reply #22 on: December 25, 2012, 08:32:29 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 25, 2012, 08:08:01 AM
Aqsh Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... aik se badhkar aik kavish kah
rahi haiN aap... kia kahne waaH jee behad umdaa khayaaloN ko
khoob lafz adaa kiye haiN... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.. HUmari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

thnx parwaz jee
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«Reply #23 on: December 25, 2012, 08:34:51 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on December 25, 2012, 08:09:52 AM

bahut bahut khoob......!
thank you sheba jee
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«Reply #24 on: December 25, 2012, 08:35:33 AM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on December 25, 2012, 08:18:13 AM

Very Very Good Ashq Jee!!!! Pad kar bohat aacha laga...Keep writing such lovely poems..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thank you soooo much shireen jee
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«Reply #25 on: December 25, 2012, 01:02:44 PM »
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just excellent
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«Reply #26 on: December 25, 2012, 02:27:34 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 25, 2012, 01:02:44 PM
just excellent
thank you sir
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«Reply #27 on: December 26, 2012, 07:33:06 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #28 on: December 26, 2012, 11:31:11 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on December 26, 2012, 07:33:06 AM
bahut khoob
thnx nandjee
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«Reply #29 on: December 27, 2012, 06:25:17 AM »
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kya bat kya bat
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