dillagi..sheba

by Sheba on February 09, 2010, 10:24:43 AM
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                  kanton bhari sej par koi phool sajataa to nahin..,
                  patjhad main chaman kabhi muskurataa to  nahin..,

                  chor to beshumar hain is shahr main magar,
                  koi is tarah dil ko churataa to nahin..,
    
                  mohabbat to maagti hai qurbani aksar,
                  koi is tarah wafa ko jatataa to nahin..,

                  jab bhi aatey ho khushbu si bikhar jaati hai,
                  koi is tarah chaman ko batataa to nahin..,

                  tasweer teri yaad ki sajaai hui hai,
                  koi is tarah tanha kar jataa to nahin..,

                  bikhar gaye arzoo waqt key saath sheba...,
                  koi is terah khawaab ko dikhataa to nahin.........!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2010, 10:33:23 AM »
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Wah wah bahut achhi ghazal likhi hai Sheba ji. Kuch nai qism ki ghazal ki takhleeq ki hai aapne. Nice creation.
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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2010, 01:56:37 PM »
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Wah wah wah!!!

Bahut bahut khoob Shebaji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ghazal Likhi hai Aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2010, 01:57:41 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Sheba JI
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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2010, 02:21:27 PM »
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Bohot Khoob likha hai aapne Sheba Ji
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2010, 06:03:32 PM »
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 Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 10, 2010, 08:16:25 AM »
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Wah wah bahut achhi ghazal likhi hai Sheba ji. Kuch nai qism ki ghazal ki takhleeq ki hai aapne. Nice creation.

shukria riyaz ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 10, 2010, 08:22:18 AM »
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bahut achi ghazal Sheba ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanx kaash ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 10, 2010, 08:22:52 AM »
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Wah wah wah!!!

Bahut bahut khoob Shebaji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ghazal Likhi hai Aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thanx khawaish ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 10, 2010, 08:23:24 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Sheba JI

thank you rishi ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 10, 2010, 08:23:56 AM »
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Bohot Khoob likha hai aapne Sheba Ji

thanx celmira ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 10, 2010, 08:24:28 AM »
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Applause

thanx humdum ji
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«Reply #12 on: February 10, 2010, 09:52:28 AM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Sheba ji !
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«Reply #13 on: February 10, 2010, 10:10:05 AM »
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That was a lovely ghazal, 4th shair was very very good....
Bohat khoob, keep it up.
Aik shair aapki nazer...
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Mera to bs itna huner hai k JIGGER
Wo mujh pe cha gia, main zamaney pe cha gia
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«Reply #14 on: February 17, 2010, 12:35:44 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Sheba ji !

thank u sophi ji
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