Do jahan ki khushiyaan

by aqsh on September 22, 2012, 10:54:03 AM
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Aapne jo zindagi me hame shamil kar liya
Humne dil me aapke mukaam hasil kar liya

Hasrath bhari nighahon ne tumhe pakar
Neendh ko aankhon se gaafil kar liya

Wada hai bas hardam tumhare rahenge
Dhadkanon ne aapke dil me manzil kar liya

Sahara jo diya hai aapne zindagi me
Samandar me humne sahil kar liya

Zindagi pehle na thi itni haseen
"Aqsh"ne dono jahan ki khushiyaan haasil kar liya
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«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2012, 12:08:54 PM »
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Aqsh ji bahut behtreen peshkash....
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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2012, 12:34:40 PM »
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nice...
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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2012, 01:45:19 PM »
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Quote from: gaytri gupta on September 22, 2012, 12:08:54 PM
Aqsh ji bahut behtreen peshkash....
thnx so much gyatriji
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«Reply #4 on: September 22, 2012, 01:45:49 PM »
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Quote from: Ritesh Modi on September 22, 2012, 12:34:40 PM
nice...
bahut bahut thnx ritesh ji
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«Reply #5 on: September 22, 2012, 03:27:03 PM »
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Bahut khoob
Applause Applause Applause

sab sapna sa likha hai aapne
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«Reply #6 on: September 22, 2012, 04:14:04 PM »
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bahut khoob bahut badhiya Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 22, 2012, 04:20:35 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on September 22, 2012, 10:54:03 AM
Aapne jo zindagi me hame shamil kar liya
Humne dil me aapke mukaam hasil kar liya

Hasrath bhari nighahon ne tumhe pakar
Neendh ko aankhon se gaafil kar liya

Wada hai bas hardam tumhare rahenge
Dhadkanon ne aapke dil me manzil kar liya

Sahara jo diya hai aapne zindagi me
Samandar me humne sahil kar liya

Zindagi pehle na thi itni haseen
"Aqsh"ne dono jahan ki khushiyaan haasil kar liya



very good  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2012, 01:15:19 AM »
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bahut badhiya
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«Reply #9 on: September 23, 2012, 11:00:26 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on September 22, 2012, 03:27:03 PM
Bahut khoob
Applause Applause Applause

sab sapna sa likha hai aapne
thank you mukesh ji
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Quote from: soudagar on September 22, 2012, 04:14:04 PM
bahut khoob bahut badhiya Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanks saudagar ji
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Quote from: suman59 on September 22, 2012, 04:20:35 PM
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shukriya suman ji
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 23, 2012, 01:15:19 AM
bahut badhiya
thnx nandbahu ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 24, 2012, 04:48:34 AM »
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Behatreen ghazal kaa tohafaa diyaa hai aapne Aqsh ji bahut bahut badhaai ho
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«Reply #14 on: September 29, 2012, 10:36:12 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 24, 2012, 04:48:34 AM
Behatreen ghazal kaa tohafaa diyaa hai aapne Aqsh ji bahut bahut badhaai ho
thankyou sirji
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