Do pal suhane

by aqsh on October 01, 2012, 04:28:10 AM
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Neendh meri aankhon se udhakar, raat ko guzar jaane do
Lekar agosh me apni, bahon me mujhe samane do

Badhti hai dil ki dhadkane, mohabbat ka paimana chalkane do
Apna haath mujhe dekar, apne naam ki ek lakeer  banane do

Teri jheel si in gehri aankhon me, aaj mujhe doob jane do
Beete zindagi tere pyaar ke sahare, aise do pal suhane do

Dil jo mera itna betaab hai, thoda ise samjhane do
Kismat se aaj tujhe paaya hai, "Aqsh" ko yakeen aane do
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2012, 04:46:28 AM »
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very good ,aqsh jee, nice thoughts..   Applause   Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2012, 05:35:42 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob Aqsh ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2012, 07:11:55 AM »
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Very nice..
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2012, 07:14:36 AM »
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Aqsh ji bahut khoob...
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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2012, 08:07:10 AM »
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waah Aqsh ji
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2012, 11:55:52 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on October 01, 2012, 04:46:28 AM
very good ,aqsh jee, nice thoughts..   Applause   Applause
thankyou aarish ji
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2012, 11:56:22 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 01, 2012, 05:35:42 AM
waah waah bahut khoob Aqsh ji
bahut bahut shukriya saini sirji
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2012, 11:56:45 AM »
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Quote from: nishi gahlaut on October 01, 2012, 07:11:55 AM
Very nice..
thankyou nishiji
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«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2012, 11:57:12 AM »
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Quote from: gaytri gupta on October 01, 2012, 07:14:36 AM
Aqsh ji bahut khoob...
thankyou gayatriji
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«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2012, 11:57:39 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on October 01, 2012, 08:07:10 AM
waah Aqsh ji
thankyou sahillji
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«Reply #11 on: October 01, 2012, 12:04:46 PM »
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Bahut khoob behad shandaar ghazal Aqsh ji .
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«Reply #12 on: October 01, 2012, 12:15:49 PM »
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Wah kya bat hai aqsh ji
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«Reply #13 on: October 01, 2012, 12:31:57 PM »
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Quote from: Kaushal Sharma on October 01, 2012, 12:04:46 PM
Bahut khoob behad shandaar ghazal Aqsh ji .
thankyou kaushal ji
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«Reply #14 on: October 01, 2012, 12:32:20 PM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on October 01, 2012, 12:15:49 PM
Wah kya bat hai aqsh ji
thankyou anmol arora ji
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