Do pal suhane

by aqsh on October 01, 2012, 04:28:10 AM

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mkv

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«Reply #15 on: October 01, 2012, 05:31:19 PM »

Bahut hi dilkash ghazal pesh kee hai aapne.
dil khush ho gaya padhkar. Applause


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Re: Do pal suhane

«Reply #16 on: October 02, 2012, 04:37:19 AM »

Quote from: mkv on October 01, 2012, 05:31:19 PM

Bahut hi dilkash ghazal pesh kee hai aapne.
dil khush ho gaya padhkar. Applause

bahut bahut shukriya mukeshji


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Re: Do pal suhane

«Reply #17 on: October 02, 2012, 07:08:29 PM »

wow wow wow ... awesome... masssttt likha hai aapne Aqsh ji... it is soooooo sooooo sooooo beautifully composed...!!!


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Re: Do pal suhane

«Reply #18 on: October 04, 2012, 02:35:31 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 02, 2012, 07:08:29 PM

wow wow wow ... awesome... masssttt likha hai aapne Aqsh ji... it is soooooo sooooo sooooo beautifully composed...!!!

thankyou hridayji


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Re: Do pal suhane

«Reply #19 on: October 05, 2012, 01:14:49 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on October 01, 2012, 04:28:10 AM

Neendh meri aankhon se udhakar, raat ko guzar jaane do
Lekar agosh me apni, bahon me mujhe samane do

Badhti hai dil ki dhadkane, mohabbat ka paimana chalkane do
Apna haath mujhe dekar, apne naam ki ek lakeer banane do

Teri jheel si in gehri aankhon me, aaj mujhe doob jane do
Beete zindagi tere pyaar ke sahare, aise do pal suhane do

Dil jo mera itna betaab hai, thoda ise samjhane do
Kismat se aaj tujhe paaya hai, "Aqsh" ko yakeen aane do