Do pal suhane

by aqsh on October 01, 2012, 04:28:10 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 01, 2012, 05:31:19 PM »
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Bahut hi dilkash ghazal pesh kee hai aapne.
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«Reply #16 on: October 02, 2012, 04:37:19 AM »
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Bahut hi dilkash ghazal pesh kee hai aapne.
dil khush ho gaya padhkar. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: October 02, 2012, 07:08:29 PM »
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wow wow wow ... awesome... masssttt likha hai aapne Aqsh ji... it is soooooo sooooo sooooo beautifully composed...!!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: October 04, 2012, 02:35:31 PM »
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wow wow wow ... awesome... masssttt likha hai aapne Aqsh ji... it is soooooo sooooo sooooo beautifully composed...!!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thankyou hridayji
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«Reply #19 on: October 05, 2012, 01:14:49 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Neendh meri aankhon se udhakar, raat ko guzar jaane do
Lekar agosh me apni, bahon me mujhe samane do

Badhti hai dil ki dhadkane, mohabbat ka paimana chalkane do
Apna haath mujhe dekar, apne naam ki ek lakeer  banane do

Teri jheel si in gehri aankhon me, aaj mujhe doob jane do
Beete zindagi tere pyaar ke sahare, aise do pal suhane do

Dil jo mera itna betaab hai, thoda ise samjhane do
Kismat se aaj tujhe paaya hai, "Aqsh" ko yakeen aane do


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«Reply #20 on: October 10, 2012, 07:43:47 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thnx sushilji
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«Reply #21 on: October 10, 2012, 07:50:29 AM »
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Neendh meri aankhon se udhakar, raat ko guzar jaane do
Lekar agosh me apni, bahon me mujhe samane do

Badhti hai dil ki dhadkane, mohabbat ka paimana chalkane do
Apna haath mujhe dekar, apne naam ki ek lakeer  banane do

Teri jheel si in gehri aankhon me, aaj mujhe doob jane do
Beete zindagi tere pyaar ke sahare, aise do pal suhane do

Dil jo mera itna betaab hai, thoda ise samjhane do
Kismat se aaj tujhe paaya hai, "Aqsh" ko yakeen aane do



bahut badiya
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«Reply #22 on: November 15, 2012, 12:46:52 PM »
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bahut badiya
thnx sumanji
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