Do Saza Shauk Se Saza Kya Hai / दो सज़ा शौक़ से सज़ा क्या है..........Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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दो सज़ा शौक़ से सज़ा क्या है
ये बताकर मेरी ख़ता क्या है

है ज़रूरी बहुत समझ लेना
बन्दगी क्या है और ख़ुदा क्या है

उसने शरमा के कान में मेरे
कुछ कहा है मगर कहा क्या है

एक मंज़िल हो जिनकी, इक मक़सद
साथ चलने में फिर बुरा क्या है

जब तसव्वर में हुस्न हो न 'रक़ीब'
शेर गोई में इस मज़ा क्या है

        --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'
 
do saza shauk se saza kya hai
ye batakar meri khata kya hai

hai zaroori bahut samajh lena
bandagee kya hai aur khuda kya hai

usne sharma ke kaan meN mere
kuch kaha hai magar kaha kya hai

ek manzil ho jinki, ik maqsad
saath chalne meN phir bura kya hai

jab tasawwar meN husn ho na 'Raqeeb'
sher goee meN is maza kya hai

         --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2012, 06:41:48 PM »
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waa waa bhot khub.
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2012, 02:37:12 AM »
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vaaaaah satish sir  har ashaar ..kya kahne roomaniyat bhari is ghajal par dil dada kubool kare
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2012, 03:54:38 AM »
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Bahut bahut bahut shaandaar ghazal pesh ki hai priya satish ji dheron daad qubool karen.duaa hai ese kee aapke kalaam men barkat ho
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«Reply #4 on: March 05, 2012, 05:27:14 AM »
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Aatish Ji,

Jawab dene aur ghazal
pasand karne ka bahut
bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2012, 10:16:23 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on March 04, 2012, 06:05:38 PM

दो सज़ा शौक़ से सज़ा क्या है
ये बताकर मेरी ख़ता क्या है

है ज़रूरी बहुत समझ लेना
बन्दगी क्या है और ख़ुदा क्या है

उसने शरमा के कान में मेरे
कुछ कहा है मगर कहा क्या है

एक मंज़िल हो जिनकी, इक मक़सद
साथ चलने में फिर बुरा क्या है

जब तसव्वर में हुस्न हो न 'रक़ीब'
शेर गोई में इस मज़ा क्या है

        --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'
 
do saza shauk se saza kya hai
ye batakar meri khata kya hai

hai zaroori bahut samajh lena
bandagee kya hai aur khuda kya hai

usne sharma ke kaan meN mere
kuch kaha hai magar kaha kya hai

ek manzil ho jinki, ik maqsad
saath chalne meN phir bura kya hai

jab tasawwar meN husn ho na 'Raqeeb'
sher goee meN is maza kya hai

         --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2012, 11:10:41 AM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab waah kia kahne aapke... behad khoob
kafi khoobsurat ashaar kahe haiN janab... Usual Smile

Aik umdaa kalaam par dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez... Usual Smile


usne sharma ke kaan meN mere
kuch kaha hai magar kaha kya hai

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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2012, 11:24:22 AM »
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waah waaah waaah
behad haseen ghazal hai Shukla ji
behad khoob
daad kubul karen

aate rahen
likhte rahen

khus rahen
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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2012, 12:33:13 PM »
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mkv ji,

Aapka jawaab padhkar bahut achchha
laga...

Shubhkaamnaaon sahit,

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Saini Sahab,

Jawab dene aur ghazal pasand
karne ka tahe dil se shukriya.

Saadar,

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adil bechain sahab,

jawaab dene aur ghazal pasand karne
ka tahe dil se shukriya...

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bahut hi khoob kaha satish ji!!
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«Reply #12 on: March 06, 2012, 05:08:00 AM »
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ParwaaZ Ji,

Jawab dene aur ghazal pasand
karne ka tahe dil se shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #13 on: March 06, 2012, 10:19:09 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on March 04, 2012, 06:05:38 PM

दो सज़ा शौक़ से सज़ा क्या है
ये बताकर मेरी ख़ता क्या है
zarur zarur bahut khoob Applause Applause
है ज़रूरी बहुत समझ लेना
बन्दगी क्या है और ख़ुदा क्या है
bahut khoob........! Applause Applause

उसने शरमा के कान में मेरे
कुछ कहा है मगर कहा क्या है
hi ALLAH ye gustakhi Giggle

एक मंज़िल हो जिनकी, इक मक़सद
साथ चलने में फिर बुरा क्या है
koi bhi nahin. per zamaane ki parwaah to karna hai Applause Applause

जब तसव्वर में हुस्न हो न 'रक़ीब'
शेर गोई में इस मज़ा क्या है
ye to shayar jaane ab main kya kahoon Applause Applause

        --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'
 
do saza shauk se saza kya hai
ye batakar meri khata kya hai

hai zaroori bahut samajh lena
bandagee kya hai aur khuda kya hai

usne sharma ke kaan meN mere
kuch kaha hai magar kaha kya hai

ek manzil ho jinki, ik maqsad
saath chalne meN phir bura kya hai

jab tasawwar meN husn ho na 'Raqeeb'
sher goee meN is maza kya hai

         --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


dichasp ghazal hai shukla ji....!

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«Reply #14 on: March 06, 2012, 11:01:48 AM »
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"जब तसव्वर में हुस्न हो न 'रक़ीब'
 शेर गोई में इस मज़ा क्या है"
 Applause Applause Applause
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